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Reviews for To Understand Love

By : saiyajinxyz
  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2008
    Gohan just got my respect. He's always so silly in other fics (not all of them) that I hardly think about him as a person who can actually have smart moves. I hope Goten's life gets better and he fix things up with Trunks (I hate hardships =_= well duh, who doesn't? xD)
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  • From metalchocobo on January 31, 2008
    I meant to review when I first read it, but I'm lazy and I need not to be because you guys need feedback! I'm not a writer (tried and failed hard), so I can't give you anything helpful, but I can tell you that I really enjoy the flow of the story and how you portray Goten. And with the last update, I love how Gohan came and saved the day!

    Keep it going!
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  • From cueball2 on January 19, 2008

    Great beginning. I like how you portray the thoughts, feelings, and actions of Goten. Keep up the great work.


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2008
    Hello, excellent second chapter! I like the way they behaviour, and that's the beauty of DBZ, there's hardly any room for OOC, it feels like the characters can do anything. They're both very real, it's very nice. And you're right about not jumping into romance from the beginning, that way we get to know more about their feelings.

    (And just for the records I prefer you over Trunks anytime, Goten luv) Every time I read about a sad Goten I feel like Mary Suelizing myself and go help him in his misery, but luckily for the world those thought only stay in my head.

    Well, keep 'em coming!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2008
    First I have to say you made my day when I clicked aff.net and found a new Goten x Trunks. And it was Goten's p.o.v. which makes it better since I love him.

    The story is going really nice, I seriously hope you'll write more instead of dropping it after one or two chapters like I've seen it happen.
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