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By : ArchNemesis
  • From Dragon7 on March 09, 2008
    I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.

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  • From RugbyGod on February 25, 2008
    I hate your cliff hangers!!!! Always right when everything is getting good. Trunks is going to come back. I bet he got pregnant. It would be just his luck and completely fantastic!
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  • From Zofo on February 25, 2008
    He left! Again! Poor Gohan, his head must be spinning, and after such mind-blowing sex.

    I loved the Vegeta/Videl confrontation, you got Vegeta just right, and I was grinning from ear to ear. Hope he can keep her off Gohan until Mirai returns, but won't he be swept into HP world in the meantime? That could be a problem.

    Did you leave a clue that when Mirai returns he may have a mini-Gohan with him? Interesting.
    xxx
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  • From Dragon7 on February 23, 2008
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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  • From Zofo on February 16, 2008
    Yes that did explain a few things and got the timeline straighter in my mind, thanks.

    Hard to feel sorry for Videl, fancy planning your wedding when they hadn't even kissed yet, in this day and age! Wonder if she is going to try to make things difficult for them.

    I understand now why Mirai is so hesitant, and it's nice to see Vegeta giving them both advise, bit of a matchmaker isn't he?
    Itching for more.
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  • From Dragon7 on February 16, 2008
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

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  • From saiyajinxyz on February 16, 2008
    Very nice update. I do kind of feel badly for Videl, being led on all this time when Gohan only really loved Mirai Trunks. Looking forward to finding out about the happenings of Mirai's and Gohan's vacation together and if Mirai can keep to his word about not wanting things to happen while on their trip. The ending with Vegeta was nice as well. Having a baby is certainly making him take more of an interest in his offspring.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on February 12, 2008
    A pregnant Vegeta? Very interesting. Usually, in the stories I have read, when Vegeta is the pregnant one, he ends up so out of character, I can't read the story. So congratulations to you for making him grouchy, irritable, unhappy, and a train-a-holic. I know that he isn't going to be the focus of this story, but I just had to tell you. Mirai doesn't seem very happy about the possibility of him becoming a parent if he and Gohan have a relationship. And I'm curious about what Gohan has planned. His reaction wasn't quite what I had in mind, but surprises are good and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Zofo on February 11, 2008
    Shaping up nicely. Trunks doesn't sound very thrilled about his ability to reproduce does he, one more reason not to be with Gohan. I'm looking forward to their meeting and also how Videl reacts.

    Slightly confused with the timeline though. You said it was a side-story so is that Vegeta's first baby or are they back from the other fic and having another? Maybe the clues are in that one and I missed them.
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  • From Zofo on February 06, 2008
    I've been searching for that Harry Potter/DBZ story I read about a year ago but didn't know what it was called or who wrote it. It was you. Thank you for that masterpiece, I've re-read it in preparation for this one.

    I don't usually read Trunks/Gohan fics, (prefer Vegeta/Goku) but having read about them in the above fic I'm intrigued as to their history and how their relationship turns out (or not). Maybe you could fit a little bit of V/G in there too.
    xxx
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  • From saiyajinxyz on January 31, 2008
    I like it so far. Please update it when you get the chance. I wonder what Trunks is going to think of Videl.
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