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Reviews for Worlds Apart

By : ArchNemesis
  • From ANON - vegetalover12 on November 14, 2013
    O.M.G, love it,

    LOVE IT...MMMJJJ.. HOW WOULD HAVE THOUGHT THAT VEGETA COULD BE SO MATERNAL, in his on way of course, but still CUTE..

    Anyway forgets about thinking of abandoning this story.. OK you MOST FINISH IT.
    if you don't... I WILL GO CRAZY.. GRAB A KINIFE OR A GUN A HUNT YOU DOWN. AND WHEN I HAVE YOUR HEAD I AM GOIN TO HANG IT IN MY WALL. DID YOU GOT THAT. BETTER GOT IT, BECAUSE I MEANT EVERY SINGLE WORD..... now go on a start writing and posting chapter for the story. OHH AND I WILL HAUNTED YOU DOWN FOR REAL IF YOU DON'T FINISH THE STORY. I AM TALKING( actually writing) FOR REAL.
    LOVE THE STORY.. CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE..

    ........... AND REMEMBER YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED...........
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  • From Zofo on May 24, 2011
    Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while but got a brand new computer now so should be able to keep up :)

    Glad Gohan and Mirai are back together now and he knows about his son, hope he isn't too mad at Mirai. Videl should know now that she has no hope of getting Gohan back after that last sentence.

    Goku and Vegeta have had a girl since I last reviewed, good for them and glad there were no complications this time :)
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  • From Dragon7 on May 14, 2011
    Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From Dragon7 on April 29, 2010
    I look forward to your next update!! PLEASE post the next chapter soon.
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  • From Zofo on November 27, 2009
    Glad he finally broke up with her and yes she did push him to it. Not that I'm sad as now he's free for Mirai :)
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  • From Zofo on October 08, 2009
    Ohh he's back :) I don't think Videl stands a chance of stopping it now (at least I hope so). Liked the little talk Vegeta had with him at the end chastising him for being so foolish.
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  • From Dragon7 on August 01, 2009
    I can’t wait to read what happens next.
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  • From Dragon7 on July 06, 2009
    I'm so Loving this chapter keep up the good work.
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on July 04, 2009
    Mirai needs to come back and show Videl just WHO it is that Gohan loves. She's just as stubborn as her father and needs a major reality check. I love the story. I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From glasseyeviolet on May 22, 2009
    Hehe Snape a saiyan, that is awesome.
    The story is great, I just want Mirai and Gohan
    to be together! I am rooting for them!
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  • From daisyINSANEangel on April 15, 2008
    Wow... I've fallen in love with your story. I hope everything works out for Gohan and Trunks Mirai Trunks to be happy together in the end.

    BTW, I was sent on a mission by the moderator (Lord Truhan) for the gohanxtrunks .net site to ask if any author of any Trunks/Gohan works who hadn't joined the site, or if you would allow the site to host your works.

    ALL credit is given to authors and they can be contacted straight from the site, if you would allow us to do so. Please let me know if you would allow this to happen or not.

    I was also wondering if you wouldn't mind telling me where I could find the story that you mentioned this as being a spin-off of?

    Thank you in advance for you time,
    ~daisy
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  • From RugbyGod on April 09, 2008
    Come on!!! There has to be a way back somehow!!! Cliff hangers!!! UGH!!!
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  • From chayron on March 19, 2008
    Hey, this is a nice story that you have here. I wondered if you'd agree to post it on my website. It's called Boxer & Rice and it's one of the largest Gohan/Trunks yaoi shrine on the web. You can check it at http://gohanxtrunks.net If you're ok with that all you have to do is get yourself an account (it's free and takes less than one minute) then you can upload your Gohan/Trunks stories there by yourself.

    Lord Truhan
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  • From Zofo on March 10, 2008
    So sad, surely there must be a way to recharge the battery. Could he re-use the androids parts perhaps, or what about Dr. Gero's lab, is that still intact? I can't remember if Cell destroyed it when he emerged in this timeline. Shame the bond can't reach over time/dimensions so they could at least talk but I guess that would be too fantastical.
    Will the baby ever know it's father? Oh I hope so, I want Videl kicked out of the way as soon as possible but I bet she's got her claws into Gohan now and planning for Pan.

    Yes Vegeta was very maternal to Harry in the other fic, I love how you wrote him there and here, still keeping him strong and commanding rather than a weeping violet which happens to often to him in fics when he's pregnant.
    xxx
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  • From saiyajinxyz on March 09, 2008
    Poor Trunks. But...I think he will be reunited with Gohan. For one thing, both Bulma's are geniuses. So I'm figuring there has to be a way for them to either repair the battery or make a new one. Or Bulma from the future could create a time machine and send Gohan back to look for Trunks. Those are my ideas. I could be way off, but I think it could be a possibility. I just don't want Trunks' and Gohan's baby to end up not know one of its parents. Please update soon!
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