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Reviews for Passion

By : TheChichiSlaughterHouse
  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on August 30, 2008
    Ultra sexy,cute and intense. I'd love a part two :)
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  • From princelouis on June 01, 2008
    i love the way you portrayed goku in this fic. very in character, given the pairing. but then again, i've been reading goku/vegeta for so long, when i saw a fanart picture of goku and chichi the other day, i thought it was a joke...
    O.o
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2008
    Loved it, really waff indeed, no reason to think it would leave a bad taste ^.^
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  • From Zofo on March 08, 2008
    This story was aptly named. It was very passionate despite not describing any sex.

    I like how Goku understood Vegeta was capable of protecting himself and others despite being lower in power than him. How many battles would have been lost without Vegeta saving Goku by distracting the villains or taking untold amounts of punishment in order for Goku to collect enough power for victory (Cooler and Buu being prime examples). Vegeta doesn't get enough credit for that.

    The way they viewed each other and fought against their feelings and attraction is something I always saw in the show. Shame the show never got them together (guess a so called kids show wouldn't be allowed to show that yet, only hetro allowed).

    Glad writers like you can bring it to life.
    xxx
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  • From topbear1974 on March 08, 2008
    this is an excellent one shot. you really portraited the relation of the two. I am sorry about the typing errors. I am commenting from my mobile. I love this one short tremendously ,feel I have to put it down. you are a very good writer.
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