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Reviews for To Win a Royal Heart

By : kaze
  • From ANON - OYM on August 11, 2013
    Loved the story and the way you portrayed the characters. Thanks for writing.
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  • From Zofo on April 17, 2008
    Neat that Trunks can experience Goten with Raditz through his mind, much better than Goten having to describe it. But then getting the real thing in the epilogue was even better. Though it was sad they saw the demise of the planet.

    I loved how Vegeta's memories were coming back in blocks, leaving him at first annoyed then confused and scared, torn between continuing to fight or to finally give in to his emotions. Then it leading to the long awaited lemon, which was beautiful.

    Moving note from past Vegeta and his final realization of his love for Goku. I'm glad to see though that it hasn't changed his character, he's still the cranky, arrogant prince that we all love.

    Feel a bit sad that it's finished but am looking forward to more stories by you. Thanks, it was a wonderful read.
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  • From SaiyanGirl on April 17, 2008
    Mmm... I can't remember exactly where I first read this fic, but this was one of the first Yaoi fics I really liked when I started reading DBZ smut some years ago. I have the utmost respect for any author who has the bravery and creativity to explore Vegetasei - so many possibilities, yet so unfortunately easy to butcher. However, don't even think for a second that this fic falls under the latter category. It is excellent from start to finish!

    My favorite parts of the entire fic are when the camera pulls back to Vegeta in the present while Goku is busy rewriting history. The building anguish in his dreams, the mounting anger within him... only to be finally releived... mmm... love it.

    Excellent story - One of my favourites!
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  • From Dragon7 on April 16, 2008
    Great story I'm sad to see it end.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on April 16, 2008
    I loved this story! It was fun to read and I'm sad it's over with. I'll be looking for more of your writing!
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  • From saiyajinxyz on April 15, 2008
    Poor Vegeta. He's so confused. But I have a feeling that Goku has changed his mind. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Zofo on April 13, 2008
    Goten surprised me there being so dominant with Raditz. I didn't know he had it in him. It seemed to bring out a softer side of Raditz though because of it.

    What did the note from Vegeta say? I'm itching to know, and will he show it to future Vegeta?

    So sad that they will never see Bardock again. I guess they had to preserve the time line but I wish there was a way for them to meet again.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on April 12, 2008
    Good chapter. I'm so intrigued by this story. I'm itching to see how both Goten and Goku interrupted the flow of the future, how their jaunt in the past affected their own time line. Perhaps Bardock is still alive?? And I don't know if there will be any more mention of Raditz, but his escapade with Goten seemed to be more than what it was meant to be (if that makes sense). Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Zofo on April 11, 2008
    Very touching when Bardock saw the photos. How proud he was. He's very clever isn't he, the way he explained all that time travel stuff.

    OMG past Vegeta knows! That was so sad when he knew he had to lose him but great lemon to have as a memory.

    Future Vegeta seems to be falling for him too but will he admit it?
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  • From saiyajinxyz on April 10, 2008
    Ah! I'm itching to read more. This is such a great read. It was slightly disturbing that Goten and Raditz had that rather erotic make out session, but it's something I could see Raditz doing. And now, Bardock knows the truth about Goten and Goku. I can't wait to find out what he thinks and if he helps them to get back home.
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  • From Silvers on April 09, 2008
    Un man!!! I loved it!!! *jumps up and down* I want more I want more!! ^_^ This is awsome
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  • From Zofo on April 09, 2008
    Bit of an awkward morning after for past Vegeta and Goku hehe. Awkward but sweet.

    Loved the little insight that Raditz looked a bit like Vegeta. I'm wishing for a King Vegeta/Bardock moment :-)

    Raditz seducing Goten was great. Goten certainly didn't seem to mind. Will he prevent Raditz from going further?

    Aww future Vegeta is getting desperate to see Kakarot, it's so telling (sniggers). Glad they can speak to Goku, that's opened up so many possibilities. Bardock was so shocked at the end, then when he hugged Goku knowing he was his Kakarotto, I was smiling from ear to ear.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on April 08, 2008
    Really good! I like how you tie in present day Vegeta's dreams with what's happening to his past self and Goku. It would make sense that as Goku is changing the timeline, Vegeta would be affected by it. I also enjoyed Goten accidentally spilling out that he's from Earth to Bardock. I'm looking forward to finding out what Bardock will do with that information.
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  • From Zofo on April 08, 2008
    Oh I really loved it when Goku went Super to stop Vegeta, he was so shocked. But then Goku still had to let him destroy the population and was in so much turmoil at the slaughter. What a choice to have to make!

    Lovely lemon and future Vegeta experienced it or was that memories being formed. Interesting.

    Oh no Goten mentioned earth! What will Bardock do with this information? Will they go to Earth before they are supposed to and is there a Goku already there?

    I have so many questions that I can't wait for more.
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  • From Zofo on April 06, 2008
    Oh wonderful, we get to see future Vegeta's feelings on the matter. He's really desperate to get Goku back isn't he and I think Bulma was right to think he thinks more of Goku than he lets on.

    Past Vegeta kissing Goku and awaking both their desires, was very sweet.

    But what will Goku do about purging the planet, surely he can't carry it out?
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