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Reviews for Pure Evil 5: End of Evil

By : sefiru
  • From ANON - Spuffy on November 11, 2013
    One of the best DBZ fanfics I ever read ^^ you're TRULY TALENTED!!!!!

    Poor Vegeta-jii, maybe he needs a taste of his son's medicine ^.^ maybe from another super Saiyan, Bardock perhaps? ;) nothing serious, could be a night when both get truly smashed (or stoned with some weird alien mushroom LOL), both feel lonely, etc... ^^

    See? You got my gears running with possibilities, this universe you created is amazing!

    Hope to read more from you, here from Argentina ^^
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  • From Evilniiko on June 28, 2010
    um hi,
    I would like to say that in the span of 9 days you have become one of my favorite authors along with Elric Maxwell and a few others . I have read almost all of you stories, it started with hot Mazoku action. I absolutely loved the pure evil and the pure evil Omake series. Vegeta the school girl was cool, i hope you add more to that one.
    Do you know where I can find a beta reader?

    Keep doing the amazing things you do
    Niiko
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  • From ANON - Kaysha33 on September 09, 2008
    Even though I'm not so into SM I really think that these stories are great. Please more...
    And I LOVE Radditz and his chibies!!! MORE OF THAT!!! :-)
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  • From kitkit on September 07, 2008
    i love the story and i can't wait for the rest
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  • From ANON - Katonie on September 01, 2008
    Ya know...this installment and ending of Pure Evil was rather short. Still very good, but shorter than the rest. I can't wait for the Hot Mazoku Action sequal! I may also check out the next DBZ fic. But back to Pure Evil! I just made some delicious Chocolate Chip Cookies! They're nice and fluffy and good and mmmmmm! Here's some for you for all your great work on this series and to encourage future 'Great Work'. ^.^ *hands over pile of cookies*
    Good Luck!

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From Zofo on September 01, 2008
    The office scene was hot, I loved some of the terminology you used, like 'he pauses his work to mount me'. What a great lemon to finish on, you always are so creative with them, and it involved tails, my favorite :)

    It's been a great series, thank you for enthralling me throughout. Sad there is no more but would love to read the Raditz side story if you write it.

    Looking forward to your next DBZ story.
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  • From ladyshadowdragon on August 30, 2008
    are you sure Pure Evil has to end? *pouts* I really love your work
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  • From Robyn on August 30, 2008
    rawr....yummy. *nose bleeds* I don't know what else to tell you. The lemon was lovely and creative. O.o I think I would have blown something up had I been Vegeta stuck in Kakarott's office all day though - in chains...yeah.

    A-hem

    Oooo, I like the preview to the next DBZ story you are writing on.

    And of course, I would STILL love to see a Radditz & Chibi story. They are adorable. :D


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  • From Raholea on August 30, 2008
    *sniffles* you're ending it.... and with more cuddles more than with a bang. i like it. i am sooo looking forward to your next YYH story, i'm kinda dancing over here with impatience. but i have to be cause you won't rush any faster than your set plans.

    And please, please please, i would love to see how Raditz deals with his little chibis! you made them so cute and endearing that anything you write with them would be 'awwww'mazing. *nods* would be nice, if you choose...
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  • From ANON - Moiira on August 29, 2008
    :( It's finished *sniff* I love this series and a Raditz plus chibies would be fun and why not find him a partner. Also can't wait to read the rest of your fasinating stories.
    PS. you sense of humor so closely resembles that of my own AND that of my family that I just can't stop myself from loving everything you've writen. ^-^
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  • From Zofo on August 22, 2008
    Loved how Bergiin gave Vegeta-jii a reality check. He really is on his own now but still doesn't want to accept it. Will he come crawling to Kakarot in the end? Somehow I doubt it, he's just too stubborn.

    Chuckled at Raditz's chibi alarm and his unique office.

    So it's the last chapter next. Noooooo! I will miss this series so much. Looking forward to reading it.
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  • From LittleMustardSeed on August 17, 2008
    Chibi warning system, i like it XD
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  • From ANON - Katonie on August 16, 2008
    YES!!! Pick it up!!!!
    That chapter was kinda funny. Elder Vegeta got his lil' plan handed back to him in shambles. ^.^ Happy day!...though i do feel a certain disappointment that there was no...action...*cough*
    BUT, even if it wasn't the MOST exciting chapter ever, I bought you a Hershey's Bar! *hand the goods over*
    Till next time!

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From Robyn on August 16, 2008
    *SQUEEEEEEEE* Can you write a story just about Radditz and the chibis? *puppy eyes* Purrty please?

    Okay - As you can see, I enjoyed the interaction with Radditz, the captain and the chibi trouble detectors. :D

    Vegeta's assessment of the Captain's approach to Kakarott was fun to read!

    And to answer your author's note question - yes.

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  • From ANON - Lily on August 16, 2008
    Pick it up, pick it up!
    Thank you for the update!

    Ja ne
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