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Reviews for Just Once?

By : animegeik
  • From ANON - MewMew2 on August 03, 2008
    Excellent job, please update this again soon if you have the chance.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on July 25, 2008
    squee! I love the fluff there at the end! I do luv fluff! :) I was doing some serious cheering for Ed when he rescued Roy from Envy! yayz! I can't stand Envy!!! I wish Ed had hurt him a lot more than he did! Why did Envy want to drag Roy off like this? Was he trying to start another war? Anyway, I'm just glad Ed got there in time to stop it. Must have more RoyEd fluffy bonding time and maybe some hot and juicy make up sex! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on July 12, 2008
    Ed to the rescue! Go Ed! Go! Save my, I mean, your Roy! ^_^ I'm not sure what Roy thought he was proving by going to an Ishballan refugee camp like this. Even if he hadn't run into that child, just being around Ishballans in general was bound to stir up bad memories. poor guy. Fortunately Roy hasn't had anywhere near enough time to get drunk enough to be suicidal...I hope! :) The shower sex scene was quite yummy! These two are like the Energizer bunny! They just keep going and going and going! hmm. Maybe it should be "cuming and cuming and cuming"!! LOL!! Oh, in the line, "If it weren’t for his plan to become Furor so he could prevent something like that from ever happening again, and his inability to pull the trigger on himself, he would have died long ago.", it should be "Fuhrer" not "Furor". :)
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From Icynow on July 07, 2008
    It would seem that since I last came by to check your updates that the site now sorts categories. I love your stuff by the way.
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on July 03, 2008
    Ouch! Roy really deserved that slap, and not just for ogling the waitress either, but for doing it right in front of Ed. He knew Ed had some sort of feelings for him and it was mean to tease and test Ed like that. Bad Roy! :) Roy's probably very lucky that all Ed did was throw him out of him room like that. As upset as Ed was, he could have done something really bad to him without meaning to - like beat him to a pulp with the automail! Ed wins the contest of who knocks on whose door! :D Roy shoulda known he couldn't resist. He's got it bad for the little spitfire! :) The make-up sex (don't know if you can call it that since they're not officially in a relationship...yet! *grins*) was hot! For two guys who've never given head before, they sure figured it out quick! XD The raw oysters analogy is the best description for that I've ever heard of! :) Can't wait to read more!
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on July 02, 2008
    *snerk* paper swans! Love it! Ed's antics crack me up! :D Roy can't really expect Ed to act any better if he keeps on goading Ed like he is! :) I think my heart skipped a beat when that man knocked on the bathroom door interrupting them! O_O Good thing Roy can think fast on his feet and is a master of self control! :D Love how a relationship is slowly building between them! They have little play fights (Ed throwing a piece of scrambled egg at Roy) and words spoken in anger or embarrassment really hurt now. so sweet! I wonder who will be knocking on whose door now! :D
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on July 02, 2008
    OMG that was awesome! A perfect blend of comedy and deliciously hot sex! Ed being scared of bugs was hilarious! XD Every time Ed shrieked, I giggled! :D The great Fullmetal Alchemist, Alchemist of the People, scared witless of a little bug! LOL! I would have killed Roy on the spot for pulling such a stunt like that! That was so mean! Funny as hell but still mean! :D OH! The pink pajamas (with ruffles no less!) had me on the floor! XD I really like how Roy and Ed are kind of experimenting with each other, getting a feel (so to speak!) of what it's like being with another man. Usually Roy is a total man-whore who's already been there done that so it's nice seeing the two of them being each other's first! :)
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  • From PinkIzzygirl0728 on June 23, 2008
    I really enjoyed reading this story. =) I like the characterization and also the pace at which things went. Very hot!
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  • From SarahTaylor on June 15, 2008
    I really like this story and I love Ed's juvenille anticks. The paper swans were a nice touch.
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  • From SarahTaylor on June 13, 2008
    Nice story, I like how you made not only Ed new to the whole guy/guy thing but Roy as well. Most stories assume that Roy has slept with men before, yours was a refreshing change.
    Will there be a second chapter prehaps? 'Cos it could carry one.
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