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Reviews for The Road to Kindness

By : shinigamiinochi

From uniqueindividual on July 06, 2013
I totally forgot about Chris. He's gunna be pissed if he finds out Duo did it....although I feel like he'll be pissed no matter what.
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From uniqueindividual on January 26, 2013
whoo! You are back! I'm glad you are still writing this story despite all your problems. I hope you get some good luck on your side to get you out of them. You have no idea how long I have been waiting for Heero to start looking at Duo in some sort of romantic manner! And now he is! Despite my love for your story, I still have to say that some of the dialog and inner dialog is kind of rambling. I did read your A/N at the beginning, so I understand a bit more. I look forward to more!
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From ANON - AngelStarlight on January 12, 2013
I for one have always enjoyed your lengthy chapters. As for them being un-betaed, your technical writing proficiency is such that the errors could be easily overlooked (and I for one am one of those grammar feinds* so take that as you will). I am very grateful and envious of your dedication to your stories even in the midst of your apparent real life chaos. I do hope things turn out well for you and you will continue to share your writing with us.

*I, like Duo, am presently typing via tablet and am hating autocorrect. >_
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From ANON - AngelStarlight on January 12, 2013
I for one have always enjoyed your lengthy chapters. As for them being un-betaed, your technical writing proficiency is such that the errors could be easily overlooked (and I for one am one of those grammar friends so take that as you will). I am very grateful and envious of your dedication to your stories even in the midst of your apparent real life chaos. I do hope things turn out well for you and you will continue to share your writing with us.
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From AngelStarlight on July 05, 2012
I am glad you are still keeping up with this. I'm not sure if it's the respite you had for awhile before starting up again, but I believe your writing has improved in these past couple chapters. Overall I love the characters and the character development (even without yet having read the prequel), but somewhere in the middle I started merely skimming chapters because there was so much rehashing of the same material. Granted, it is established that Duo (and Heero to a lesser extent) have such low self esteems that they both suffer from circular thinking, but sometimes that just went into too much detail. I liken it to episodes of DBZ, where we spend three episodes delving into the character powering up before the plot progresses any. However, that being said, the past two chapters or so seemed much more balanced and I didn't find myself skimming (which is good because I heart your really long chapters otherwise ^_^). Thank you for this latest chapter!
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From evilkittylol on June 03, 2012
i really hope that you finish this story to it conclusion. i've been following it for the last couple of years and would like to know of heero and duo have a happy ending. maybe a lemon thrown in. *hint hint* thanks for writing a great story.
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From uniqueindividual on March 25, 2012
That was a pretty interesting flashback, but I have to be honest with you. A lot of the inner monologue that happened before the flashback was repetitive. Of course I still love the story, though.
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From ANON - Yeni on March 23, 2012
Thanks for updating this story! I really felt a tug in my heart when I read Duo's hallucination/dream (?) of him telling Heero that he was dirty... it kinda pulled the right strings... nevertheless it was a good chapter (as always). It gave me a sense of who Wes really was to Duo's distorted mind. Can't really blame the poor guy if that was all the "love" and "compassion" he experienced in his short life.

I can only imagine what it felt to have a memory of loneliness as a child. It must have been very frightening for Duo and what only way to cope was cling to the only person who gave him attention (using the word very loosely).

I trust your plot skills and will look forward to your next chapters!

Love and hugs!
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From uniqueindividual on February 14, 2012
Woot! You updated! I'm glad you came back to this story, and I always want more. I wonder if Duo will get healthy enough to tell Wes that he doesn't have a spleen....kind of an important thing in Duo's life. I wonder what Name is doing, Heero doesn't seem to be aware of it. I look forward to what happens next!
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From ANON - Yeni on February 10, 2012
Thank you thank you for deciding to continue this! I was getting worried you'd abandon this, just when its about to get interesting. I really hope heero gets to duo in time :-)

And like what the other reveiwers said, is it possible you make an alternate story for this? Like when duo says yes to Wes...

Thank you again! Hope you can update soon! Love lots!!
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From ANON - Djargo on May 11, 2011
Wow,I can see why this chapter was an uphill battle for you to write. It seems to me,though I could be wrong,that the prevailing emotion was hopelessness. Each character seemed to struggle with giving into a sense of hopelessness that Duo's kidnapping would end well. For the first time Trowa,Name, and Heero each thought about what would happen if they couldn't find Duo. I think it was that sense of helplessness that prompted Name to make the call she thought she never would.
Amazingly enough, it was Duo who didn't give in to the hopelessness and helplessness. In a situation where before he would have given in this time he persevered. He realized Wes' actions didn't match his words. If he gave in he would be betraying himself and the real love he had with Heero,Name, and his friends.

I totally agree with you about Wes' behavior being stalker-ish and not loving. Even though Wes is experiencing feelings he hadn't before,he doesn't seem to realize or care that his every action is hurting Duo. That those actions are in direct contradiction to what he keeps telling Duo about loving him and not wanting to hurt him anymore. Wes is at that "if I can't have you,no one will" stage. I'm afraid if Duo keeps showing resistance Wes may decide to some serious permanent damage.
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From uniqueindividual on May 09, 2011
I can definately see Wes becomming less "typical villain" and more "conflicted and demented antagonist" I can't say I dislike it, though. I enjoy his viewpoints and how much he cares about Duo(in his own special way). Maybe this whole ordeal is similar to a midlife crisis for him. You know, a mid life crisis for drug dealing, pimp, thug...yeah. I am looking forward for more development between Duo and Wes, and also very curious about this person Name called.
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From ANON - Djargo on March 25, 2011
Ah,there's the Wes we all know. Back to his old self and threatening to kill people.
Dang it,I knew Name was going to run into one Wes' cohorts at the police station. At least she has prepared herself for the fact that they may be corrupt and try to give her the run around. It's probably going to be hard for her not to resort to using less legal tactics to find Duo and handle Wes but Name is such a morally strong character that I don't believe she would stoop to violence even to handle Wes. Though with Duo being in danger and her hatred for Wes it seems like a bit of a toss up.
I wonder,now that Wes has a heads up that Name is looking,will he move Duo to a different location or will he let his arrogance and belief in his power convince him that he's untouchable?

It's always great to see an update of TRTK no matter how emotionally hard it is to sometimes read. The mark of a great story and writer is that both will engage the reader and evoke emotions. Your story does that in spades.
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From uniqueindividual on March 24, 2011
Ok, Heero needs to stop blaming Trowa as much as the other people. Besides he needs that energy to find Duo. I sorta saw that bit with the police coming what with all the connections Wes has. I look forward to more!
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From ANON - PsychoSausages on March 24, 2011
OMG I absolutely adore this story! Shows how bad corruption really is!

Challenge accepted! I really want a WesxDuo story so I will do my best to attempt to write one. I think we need to discuss a few things over about it though, I mean for one thing you say Wes has but hasn't changed. Ima gonna need to know how to have him. And I do take a while to type so I sort of plan to type the whole thing before I do anything with it...but every couple of pages I will send it to you so that you can look through it.

My email is ladypsycho@hotmail.co.uk. I sometimes will turn up in the junk filters though.

No matter what though you have got to update the next chapter ultra soon!

More Duo next time please though...I miss him! *snuggles him loads* Is it weird I say that after I say I want him in a relationship with Wes?

Your friend and #1 fan
PsychoSausages xxx
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