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Reviews for Lost

By : Vire
  • From CeeCee on September 08, 2010
    I'm curious to see what the mission is, but I'm enjoying the angst. This is a side of Wufei we don't see too often. YojiKatO had a great story centering around Wufei that she unfortunately took down, along with the rest of her stories, but hers reminds me of this one. I like his internal monologue and moodiness and his reactions to his friends' attempts to help him. Of all of them, Trowa definitely seems like the one who would understand what he's going through the best. THe short chapters made this easy to digest.
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  • From bittsweetmis on September 07, 2010
    This is the first time I've read Wu Fei and Trowa as a couple and I love it as they seem like such an unlikely couple but I can totally see them connect through your writing. I would like more content per chapter, but I honestly can understand why you'd keep it short. I look forward to reading more from you.
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  • From wolfkin59 on August 07, 2009
    A very interesting fic, I must say. I like it. I mean, I'd like longer chapters, but then, if you've ever read my Naruto fic, Demented, every chapter there is at least ten pages in TNR font, size 12. *scratches the back of her head in embarrassment* A couple are around 25-30 pages, actually. *cough* And there are seven chapters posted. Chapter four gave me hell; I couldn't for the life of me finish it before page 27. *shakes head disgustedly* Sure, my readers seem to love me for it, especially my friend Kitty, but it's hell to write a chapter that long and have it take forever to finish. Inspiration wouldn't quit hitting me, and I never leave my readers cliffhangers, since I despise being left with them myself. Although, with your fic, I acknowledge that most of the readers are familiar enough with the GW characters to not need descriptions, but still, some more detail on their surroundings would be nice. It helps us envision it, lets us fall into the story easier. *realizes she sounds kind of stuck-up* I'm not trying to be all picky or anything, but I'm an avid reader, as are most of my friends, and what gets us hooked best and fastest is good descriptions (not necessarily on the story description, either, but more focused on the surroundings and/or situations in the story), ironic situations, humor, and unexpected twists. I think it's awesome that you're writing a TrowaxWufei fic. That's one of the most rare pairings I've seen. I applaud the hell out of you for doing it, and keeping the characters at least mostly in character. I think Wufei's a bit OOC in the beginning, but as the fic continues, you've put him back into character nicely. And if you ever want a beta (sorry, I noticed that some of your paragraphs were a bit too connected), then I am available at winds_of_nocte@yahoo.com. Just send a message and I'll get back to you.
    And if you're wondering about my penname, it involves one of my male cousin's nicknames and the fact that I AM his cousin. It stands for Cousin Of 'Su, 'su being short for Yamesu, which is Russian. Of course, his brother gave me a nickname that can translate as, among other things, "Wretch" or "Strange." 'su's friends of course decided he'd meant to call me The Wretch without consulting him, and, as I've lost contact with that cousin and he likes to change his names, I have no way to ask him now. And, while I am not so sure I appreciate being called The Wretch by 'su's friends, I know 'su doesn't like the fact that my friend KB shortened Yamesu into 'su and called him that in front of witnesses. 'su doesn't like people thinking him female, as he's homophobic and extremely heterosexual. His brother, of course, is gay.
    Sorry, I kind of ranted. But it's that sort of stuff that inspires me to write the odd--and often disturbing--things that I do. Poor Itachi gets tortured in the first chapter of my Demented fic. Deidara gets body-slammed by a door. My OC gets a kunai through her foot and accidentally blows herself through a wall playing with explosives. Naruto gets KO'd by a pink plushie. If you ever need ideas, I'm plenty willing to bat a few around with you. And if you want me to beta for you as well, that's even better.
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  • From ANON - melin on April 18, 2009
    I really like this. Of all the 'after war break down stories' I've read, this one seems the most likely in consideration to Wufei's reactions in the show. Very good. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Asarie4 on April 02, 2009
    I love the way you write Wufei and the other Gundam Pilots. You can really get a feel for where they are psychologically and I really want to know what is going on with this mission and the others coming for 'Fei! Was saving him from himself the mission? It doesn't seem like that is necessarily it. Please update, I love your story and I really want to read more of it!
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  • From ANON - SaMmY slaughter on July 15, 2008
    I can sort of see this turning into an awesome 5x1 fic >.> just saying :D
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on July 11, 2008
    It was very good, Please let there be more
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  • From Isan on June 30, 2008
    After I read chapter one I was hoping you would have Duo or Quatre find Wufei, so I was happy to see that Duo found him in chapter two. As for pairings I prefer Zechs (Millardo) as him and Wufei have so much in common. Both of them were the heirs to their respective groups and they are scholars. Zechs seems that he would understand more what Wufei would be going through with both of them use to constant war. Zechs also seems like a better match for the stoic Wufei. Anyway that is just my opinion. Keep up the good work I am enjoying this fic so far.
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  • From In2lalaland on June 30, 2008
    Now this was a fiction that I liked. It was slow and dramatic without being boring.

    The voice is just to bitter and harsh that it takes your breath away.

    I loved how Wufei kept thinking about everything but the fight he was in. Especially since you found out that he had been hurt during it. It reflexed his mind really well that he didn't even spare a thought to his broken ribs, even after the fight was over.

    I liked the part about how he wasn't human anymore, he was just a weapon waiting to be picked up and used. It was just so sad but I can really see that happening. Wufei is always so focused on his battles that it makes sense that when they were all over, he would be lost.

    It was kind of scary how Wufei came back to life as soon as he found out that he would get to fight. Man, that boy needs to feel belonging pretty badly. Too bad that he is trying to find belonging in the wrong things. A battle can only keep him occupied for so long before it leaves him again. Hopefully the rest of the pilots can help him back up again.

    About the paring:
    Well I'm a Wufei/Duo fan to the bone but I just might survive another paring... except Wufei/Heero. Sorry, but I just can't stand Heero. I've tried but I'm just so sick of him. Hmm, maybe I should motivate why I want Duo? Well, I think that Duo will be able to handle Wufei's battle instinct well, but also bring his down on earth by simply being himself. Duo never gives up and if he gets in to his mind that he is going to get Wufei back, there is nothing that is going to stop the god of death. Locked doors, broken bones and swords aimed at his head would probably just make him more motivated.

    Anyway, it was nice to read and I hope you will continue it soon
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