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Reviews for Spark of Blue

By : Tamy
  • From ANON - cassie on December 11, 2011
    ahh, must know what happens next. please update soon. ive already lost major sleep on this fic.
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  • From ANON - reviewer_8 on August 22, 2009
    Dear Tammy,

    WOW! I have thought I am not going to read another "BV get together" voluntarily in my lifetime, but your story is really captivating. I like the original plot and the way you develop it. You definitely have a knack for building up tension!

    Thumbs up and keep on updating!
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  • From ANON - Ginia on April 22, 2009
    You ask if you're on the right track... the answer is a resounding "YES"

    Keep up the good work and don't let them sleep to late, please. We are all waiting.

    Please contact me, there is a email link on my site near the bottom of the home page. I'd like to talk to you about your fic.

    Ginia
    SaiyanDelite
    http://www.saiyanhideaway.us/Delite/MainPages/home.html
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  • From ANON - red102277 on January 24, 2009
    loving the story. keep going!
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  • From ANON - fjh on December 19, 2008
    Please update soon! don't leave it hanging too long!
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  • From ANON - j. on December 19, 2008
    You're writing is extremely good considering English isn't your first language! I'm loving the story, though I'd told myself I wouldn't like any "Bulma as a Saiyan" fics...

    Please update soon!
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  • From DarkKaoru on October 28, 2008
    Girl!!! you're obviously on the right track, the trama is amazing, the cliffhangers are good and at this point, anything that you think is right will be right because you are making it insanely well. Oh, and the lemon scene was really good so you can make more of those! but next time with our beloved one (Vegeta). I'll be checking daily for the next chapter.
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  • From DarkKaoru on October 23, 2008
    I love this fic,I love to see Bulma being a saiyan and be so strong and respected, and I love the jerkiness of Vegeta. You did a great job!
    ................ now MOOOOAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2008
    I like it. I like the premise of the story and so far I'm enjoying how it's written. The description is pretty good, nice amount of detail and not too much either. One thing that bugs me is that you don't seem to use any punctuation marks after your dialogue. Normally periods or commas, depending on which is needed, are used.

    Example:

    "I'm going to the store," she said.

    OR.

    "I'll be back later."

    That's how it should be written in stories.

    Keep up the really great work! I look forward to seeing where this goes. You've got talent and I want to see how you bring this plot about.

    Love always,

    Talitha.
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