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Reviews for Control Seat to Passenger Seat

By : Polymer
  • From destiny18au on November 14, 2016

    I really, really wish this story had been finished. You have one of the best Pan/Trunks stories out there and thank god it's  not another 'because of the saiyan side or I'm pregnant." I hope you continue this since DB is as popular as ever especially with Super now being dubbed.

     


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  • From ANON - Destiny-18au on November 14, 2016

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  • From ANON - Cookie on March 26, 2011
    You have ruined me for all other trunks/pan writers ^.^ You capture the trunks personality perfectly :D you are an awesome writer, I can't wait to read more trunks/pan stories from you :3
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  • From ANON - puppydog on April 28, 2009
    Awsome! Keep going!
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  • From Tru6768 on April 26, 2009
    I'm so glad to see Trunks and Pan are out of that cage! Now that they have their ki abilities back, I don't see how anything can stop them! It doesn't seem like this alien race that was holding them captive is exceedingly strong. Anyway, I loved how they got the attention of the guards by having loud sex. Really, I could just hear Trunks saying, "That's how I like it" lol. I laughed at that :) Very cute. I also think it's so sweet how Trunks always wants to protect Pan even when she can do it herself. I liked that little touch at the end where he tried to pick her up to fly and was embarrassed when she reminded him she can fly, too :)

    Looking forward to your next update.
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  • From Tru6768 on April 15, 2009
    Wow, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see how trunks and pan will get themselves out of this one. Or how trunks will be humiliated by the aliens...hehe...is it wrong that I would sorta enjoy seeing that? :-P I loved that comment about how goku will steal all the credit, as usual, for their rescue hahaha. I'm also loving the little flashbacks you've inserted where they remember moments in their past, like trunks likening his sick feeling from being captured to a bender he and goten had. I loved that. It's good comic relief and also gets us closer to all of the characters. By the way, you have a great read on all of them and I really feel like I am watching an episode of GT when I read this. Only better, lol. I'm *dying* to see what gohan's rxn will be to all of this. Oh and I loved how you mentioned videl being a DA!!! What an absolutely perfect job for a grown-up superhero :) Hell, that's exactly why I always wanted to be one hehehe. Awesome touches. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - puppydog on April 14, 2009
    Another chapter yeay! Keep going cause this story is awsome!
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  • From ANON - tone on April 07, 2009
    wow. This is really great. One of the best stories I've read for a long time. Can't wait for the next update
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  • From ANON - puppydog on March 14, 2009
    Keep going with this story it`s good!
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  • From ANON - mariel on February 09, 2009
    loved it!

    please update soon!! one of the best trunks/pan stories around!!!
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  • From ANON - puppydog on February 05, 2009
    Awsome new chapter! Keep going!
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  • From Tru6768 on February 01, 2009
    Hey you! Well, I had promised you that I would check out this story and since I saw it was updated when I signed onto AFF this morning, I figured I might as well make good on that promise. So, I held my breath, put my anti-Pan feelings and my firm belief that Trunks only likes boys aside and read Chapter 1. And I must say, I was pleasantly surprised :-D We were talking yesterday about characterization, and I have to say you did a great job with adult present Trunks here. He is very much like he was in GT, but with a stronger personality (thank god!). A really believable and sexy portrayal.

    I like the dynamic between Trunks and Pan as well, with her needing discipline and him being quite disciplined, and the two of them both needing release and being stuck on this tiny ship together. It's quite hot. I liked how he pulled her into his bedroom like that. God, to be Pan at that moment *sigh* Also with him being older and more experienced and teaching her how to enjoy her body and such. Yup, even though I didn't want to, I found myself really enjoying the sex scene very much. I especially liked this line:

    "I can't," she protested, wriggling but uncomfortable with his substantial girth.

    "You can," Trunks whispered. "You fit me perfectly Pan."

    It was sweet, but it also showed Trunks in that position of control which I find very sexy and really enjoy reading. Anyway, bravo on an excellent chapter. The fact that I enjoyed this even though I had every intention not to (haha) really puts me in awe of your abilities as a writer. Keep up the good work!

    Now, must go read some Truten to erase these blasphemous het images from my head.... LOL ;-)
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  • From ANON - Crimson Omen on February 01, 2009
    another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - mariel on November 24, 2008
    i love this story!please update soon!!!!!1!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2008
    Great fic, I normally don't like T/P but I actually really liked this
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