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Reviews for Cold Shower

By : Dragonheart
  • From MangekyoSharinganNaruto on July 09, 2009
    Awesome story, I love this couple! ^^
    "her fingers could only do so much"...does that mean Videl was fucking HERSELF, but thought it was 18? :O hot!
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  • From Parad0xxx on May 09, 2009
    Love it. Not too many Videl/Juu-chan fics out there.
    Nicely written and very well played out. :]

    5 out of 5
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2008
    That was pretty hot and this pairing is interesting! I've never seen it before and I don't think I've ever even considered it. Shower sex is great, can never get enough of it. I also like how you wrote the story in present tense, very few people can pull that off well. Sometimes it sounds just plain wrong but when you wrote it it actually worked well with the story.

    :D Great story! Really.

    Love always,

    Talitha.
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