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By : CrimsonTide
  • From DevilWoman on December 01, 2009
    I have one question for you. Can i write a continuation of this story? i don't know too much English so is gonna be in Spanish. write me to my mail: youka_nitta__yaoi__anime_manga@hotmail.com I simple can't stop of reading it and to imagen the continuation can I? please!
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  • From DevilWoman on November 28, 2009
    I have read this Fic too many times and I can't believe that Chichi was this pornographic in the web XD and I can't believe that she really let Vegeta take his husband XD. I still have a doubt. How Chichi proposes to Vegeta what she was planing? Maybe you can add a POV from Vegeta or Chichi that relate what happen in that moment XD I can imagine Vegeta's face (sorry my bad language I'm not too god with English)
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  • From DevilWoman on November 24, 2009
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! You know? I think now I have two goddess. One is the goddess of FanArts of Vege x Kaka and the other one the goddess of FanFics of Vege x Kaka. You are the last one an the first one is XxChiChixX. XD

    Talking about your fic...was great!! At first I start to think how noughty can be Vegeta for doing it whit a horrible woman there XD and then comes the lovely end: “.....ChiChi.... You need to show me how to use the internet.” jajajajajaja that means that he loves what Vegeta dos to him jajajajaja

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  • From ANON - ScaryBulma on April 06, 2009
    *Bows* Amazing! Absolutely fab! I loved it all la la la. xx
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  • From IuvenesL on March 05, 2009
    Nice, very nice. Fun plot, well-written...and I love just about any fic that doesn't take the easy way out of Chichi-hating.
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on November 07, 2008
    Hahaha!
    That made me laugh ^^
    Who knew ChiChi was that kinda gal? =p
    I just finished reading what you've done of "In your dreams" and so now I'm gonna work my way through everything else! Lol!
    Its almost 2 in the morning and I have to be at work at 10.
    I dread to think how hard it's gonna be to pull myself away from the computer =D
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  • From DetoxAngel on October 30, 2008
    Mmmhm! Sweet, sweet, yaoi...and an actually pleasant touch of Chichi, very nice. Any threesome with Goku and Vegeta and some female is always welcome. Though I don't think anybody has explored this particular plot. I've wanted to do that to my fiance since forever, and when I get my own strap-on....oh the possibilities... Thanks for sharing!
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  • From Robyn on October 07, 2008
    :D Oh, I do like your sense of humor! :) And Chichi as the culprit no less!!!! Well written and awkwardly sexy.
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  • From Pixelgoddess on October 01, 2008
    Ah yes - this is why Chichi needs more love. I'm imagining the negotiations with Vegeta and his pleased surprise when he realized she really meant it.
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  • From ANON - Kakrot on September 30, 2008
    I love this story, you did a very good job. ^___^ please continue your good work.
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  • From Zofo on September 29, 2008
    That was different but I loved it!

    Didn't think Chichi would be into porn let alone involve Vegeta, but that's the beauty of fanfiction in that anything is possible. Goku certainly wasn't complaining in the end :)
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  • From cueball2 on September 29, 2008
    That was hilarious!! Great job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 29, 2008
    Duuuuuh. My mind has melted! That was totally, completely hot. I have to admit that I had considered writing a story similar to this once before but never really got around to it. I never thought anyone would actually write something like this but you did! Yay for you and your bravery! I also liked that Vegeta came in at the end. That was totally surprising and definitely hot. Poor Goku though, all this happening to him without him knowing what's going on. But I knew he'd enjoy it!

    ^^ You rock.
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  • From oneswish on September 29, 2008
    baaaaaaaa hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.....

    that was awesome!! lol! oo god!! lemme fix the nose bleed there..

    ok..

    anyways, very wonderful lemon.. and i love how u had chichi not be the bad guy.. it was such a different take on dbz yaoi.. way to go!!!

    i give u a jumping high five!!

    Boom!
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