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Reviews for Retribution

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - anessavanella on December 11, 2009
    I almost pitied Roy. Almost.The bastard deserved it. I wish Ed will feeel better. this definetly needs a long part 2 featuring Roy's emotions and aftermath of his thorough beating.[anessavanella@aim.com]
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  • From moiramctaggart on April 18, 2009
    The bastard deserved it. Wonderful as always.
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  • From ANON - Fouloldron on February 10, 2009
    Extremely distressing, but part of me wants to know more.
    I didn't realise the N/C meant non-con. I get very confused between those who use N/C for non-con and those who use it for R/Mature content=sex.
    Anyway, if you feel inclined I'd love to read more, although I do recognise that the necessary realism would be very difficult to write.
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  • From Blysse on December 03, 2008
    That was so, SO very dark and disturbing. Excellent job!!
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  • From ANON - Keiko on December 01, 2008
    Guuura! Argh! That left me feeling like shit. I can't say I didn't like it though. Your work knows how to pull on the reader's heartstrings. I enjoy reading it.
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  • From ANON - a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h. on October 26, 2008
    Oh my god, this was awesome! I loved it! I'd love it if you could make a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Wateria88 on October 21, 2008
    wow! 0_0

    That was some serious angst in that fic. As usual your writing is very good and this one of my first reviews since I didn't know I could review without being signed up.^^

    Ed was kinda shocking to me, beating Roy like that. Though I feel he was very much in character with regreting what he did, that seems to be a typical problem he seems to have. Though never quite that far obviously. The woman was very lucky that he didn't take his anger out on her too.

    Thanks for writing such awesome stories. =3
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  • From ANON - zee on October 19, 2008
    I love this ^.^
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  • From SarahTaylor on October 19, 2008
    I clicked on the story expecting it to be good when I saw the author name, I wasn't wrong. Angry Ed is scary and I can't wait to see how this one plays out. I'd love to know how Roy's gonna get out of this one.
    Looking forward to more.
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  • From KojiHiwatari on October 19, 2008
    You should make more... I can't just end.
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  • From ANON - MaryLover on October 19, 2008
    Uhm... you made me remember 'The Sound of Silence'... and how broken that Ed was...
    Nice work
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  • From ANON - radcat38 on October 19, 2008
    It is me again and this is the last one. But I thought about it and you are right even when you do get even it does not make you feel any better sometimes worse. This just makes everything worse and you become someone you do not like. People have to go through all their levels of grief before they can start really functioning again. Poor Ed...his rage and grief and retribution did not make anything better just worse and now someone could potentially die from it. Roy should not have manipulated him and Ed had to go through the up and downs of the relationship until he realized for him that it was over. Too bad it went too far but that is what happens to people in real life especially when games are played. People get pushed too far and lose it not always expecting or understanding what the fallout will be. Good adult morality lesson.
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  • From ANON - radcat38 on October 19, 2008
    I did not put my moniker on that first review but it was me, radcat. Wow...good dark horror story.
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  • From ANON - c on October 19, 2008
    Wow...what can I say. Every person's fantasy of getting horribly even when constantly hurt by the one you love especially when you walk in on them with someone else (more than once). Of course you cannot do it or get away with it in real life but it takes a long time for those hurt and betrayed and angry feelings to go away. I was afraid that Ed was going to kill him and or go to prison. But I do not think Mustang really wants people to know what led up to the assault or who did it. Poor Ed...now he has to leave everything and everyone and go on the run (even if Mustang keeps silent.) Wonder what will happen to Al. Atually Al's rage might have been worse in certain ways. I have to ask...where do you get your plot ideas? You write everything well but have a special talent for dark angsty writing.
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