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Reviews for Pressure of a Blade

By : Aestas
  • From Diane on February 12, 2013
    I'm really enjoying reading through your stuff. Yet again you've written a great story. You managed to make a sweet story between two very stoic pilots. You managed to have them communicate without being overly wordy. It's really amazing how you can pull of their characters so well while twisting them into such sexy positions. Brilliant.
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  • From ANON - deads on September 07, 2011
    man im only on chapter 9 so i hope that this fic is either finished or ongoing because if I get to the end and that's all there is Ill be heartbroken! Its so hard to find such an awesome 1x3x1 fic!! Thanks for writing this!!
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  • From ANON - Alanis on March 02, 2010
    I can only say thank you! You helped me a lot with this story to try to understand the thoughts and emotions of Trowa. This helped me to try and feel what the charackters are feeling and I am sure it will help with my own story. Hope you don't mind if I take your story as inspiration and a litle help?! Again thx and good luck and have much fun while writing!!!
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  • From fairywm on February 15, 2010
    I just read this and I saw that you thought that that lemon was to long....I just wanted to let you know that it was perfect...trust me whwn I say that I have read enough -oh my god is this done yet- lemons to know this
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  • From ANON - Itara on December 27, 2009
    Just thought I'd leave a quick review to say what a great story this was. I only stumbled across it recently along with your other work and I think the portrayal of Heero and Trowa is really good and very believable. I look forward to reading your other works! Till next time.
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  • From ANON - masa on August 13, 2009
    chapter 10: the emotions are a bit strong, on Heero's part notably so. thought you did great justice having Trowa sneak off and then empty himself, only to have Heero re-plant the seeds of doubt and, just maybe, desire. the dialogue is the gem in this chapter. sad to think i'm nearing the end of this. i've enjoyed it quite a lot.
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  • From ANON - masa on August 13, 2009
    chapter 9: i ate up the drivel like it was the most delicious seafood in Hakodate. months between reviews, but this chapter managed to pull me back in right away without losing anything. thought it was a very good idea to focus so much on the slight, physical side of Heero and Trowa's confrontation. best part was Duo, shooting from the hip and aiming for the head without being too tactless. loved the conversation. cool that you brought up Duo and Trowa's chess match from the series. good stuff
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  • From wolfkin59 on August 07, 2009
    You've done very, very well with this. If you're willing, I'd like to see...well, read...where you'd take the storyline from, say, about the time Duo was getting over being pissed about that vid being shared with Chang, perhaps revolving around the circus doing one of its, as you said, rare trips. I can think of some very interesting things (nothing absolutely concrete as of yet, but my mind bats ideas around like a cat with yarn, until it all just unravels the mystery and falls into place before me). So, in the hopes that you may be willing to do so, you can contact me at winds_of_nocte@yahoo.com or wolf.kin.flight@gmail.com to discuss this. *crosses fingers, looks for falling stars* (lol)
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  • From MasamuneBlade on June 23, 2009
    chapter 8: was really pleased with this chapter. i was a little worried about how things would unfold after the threat was eliminated, but you're handling it well. i absolutely agree with your note about "confession != get together" with these two. Duo and Wufei were a nice addition. It's good to have Duo break up the calm, considering coolness. I also liked Trowa's disdain for Heero's actions. His pride is really showing up in this piece, and the careful spotlight you put on it separates the whole thing from the standard 'tough boys fall in love' type of story. well done
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  • From MasamuneBlade on June 23, 2009
    chapter 7: good action. shame on Trowa though! sloppy, sloppy sloppy... liked the bit toward the end with Heero tending to his wounds. wouldn't have minded if this chapter had been twice as long as it was. still, a good read.
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  • From MasamuneBlade on June 23, 2009
    chapter 6: been a while. some of the conversation was a little too... dense/insightful for my liking. thought it was good you brought Duo and Wufei into it, even if they might not make it to the main action after this. i absolutely love the scenes where Trowa is messing with Heero or delivers a sharp comment. those are my favorites. again, a good read.
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  • From MasamuneBlade on June 17, 2009
    chapter 5: well, now we're in the woods we came to picnic at, and we're in deep. it's all romance this chapter (though, fittingly funny, the word 'romance' doesn't seem right here) and i can say that i liked it a lot. you didn't just throw off the mantle of 'the mission' and then piss into the wind. trowa's demand for control, the calm, considering conversation, and the incredible grounding in 'a soldier's life' keeps this in the badass zone while moving it to yaoi-town. i particularly enjoyed the description of Trowa pinning Heero to the wall.
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  • From MasamuneBlade on June 15, 2009
    chapter 4: well, hey. there's a LOT more yaoi here in this chapter. and, when you focus more on the emotions and less on the mission, it does serve to render Trowa a bit of a worrywart. Still, I absolutely enjoyed it. The conversation at the end kept the two of them in character and had them confront the issue. Thought Heero was a little sulky, but very good in how he pressed Trowa. The revelation of his reason for keeping Trowa away from the conflict was border-line awesome plot work. Again, a great chapter.
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  • From MasamuneBlade on June 15, 2009
    chapter 3: the best chapter yet. not just because of the kiss. you are walking a tightrpe with this thing. the yaoi that we all want is there, but you're playing it straight like a gen fic would. Trowa's reactions and impossibly calm reasoning are shining points that make the shadow of the ever-growing sexual overtones all the more sharper. You keep the characters, as the title implies, balancing fully on a sharp edge. Making it explicit this chapter was perhaps the first time you've really gone out to shove your business in the readers face. Everything else is done masterfully, and the whole thing just stinks to high heaven of gloriously impending upheaval, chaos in a bullet. I think I'll read chapter 4 tonight.
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  • From MasamuneBlade on June 13, 2009
    chapter 2: now we get some tensheeown! still, this thing is a walking love sack for me. the two are so professional that the badassery almost hurts me through the computer screen. also incredibly insightful as to some of their similarities and why they share the bond, or whatever it is, that they do. particularly liked 'they were fighters, not soldiers' line and 'BoxI'. this thing is an absolute darling to read, and i save it for the end of each night because i am looking forward to it the most and know it won't disappoint.
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