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Reviews for The Broken Road

By : Tru6768
  • From Robyn on April 12, 2009
    :P Is it bad of me to be happy Vegeta found Trunks while they were jogging? It led to so many funny moments later on in this chapter!

    And it led to UST...mind boggling - just get it done already - UST. :P

    Lovely update! Looking forward to the next one of course!
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  • From ANON - Yaoiandcoffeeaddict on April 07, 2009
    I love this story! But I wonder: how Vegeta will react when he finds out that not only is his son gay but was dumped by one of Kakarrot's sons?
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  • From ANON - Jocelyn on April 02, 2009
    I very recently discovered your story but it has been an absolute joy to read the tale you have weaved. This chapter made me a little heart sick. Everyone is aching due to love, ne? But I really loved the moment where Trunks tracked down Gohan and offered his support as a friend only. Shows he's maturing, and that ultimately his motives aren't selfish in his caring for Gohan :) I think Gohan is beginning to see that as well.

    And as for Goten, well he seems to be regretting his actions, doesn't he? Despite his new friends who aren't oppressive, he still can't manage to find his independence anywhere lol. All the same, I care for all three characters despite the flaw in some of their actions. I can't wait to see how you manage to give each of them their happy ending :)


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  • From LadyWolf on March 31, 2009
    Veronica...Veronica...I'm HOOKED! I've never been the one to read any DBZ fics, but this one has held my attention...

    will trucks finally break through Gohan's emotional walls...will the boys finally make up and become friends again. I hope they do, b/c it just wouldn't feel right without your best friend beside you...:O(

    Post soon!!!
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  • From Robyn on March 31, 2009
    I don’t know if you did it conscientiously or not, but the way you highlighted Gohan’s non-confrontational history with Videl put a very good spot light on why he handled the last couple of weeks with Trunks as though nothing had happened. Gohan isn’t a confrontational sort of guy – you have to really stick it in his face before he feels the need to do something about it. I can totally see Gohan wanting to act as though nothing had happened now. :)

    Videl – lordy…what was the woman thinking? She’s a bit chicken-shit to use Gohan’s saiyan side against him like that – but yes, I can see her trying to push him until he does something rather than having to be the bad guy herself. Some people are just like that – manipulative for their own needs.

    I’m wondering where Goten is going to be when Trunks and Gohan are helping Videl move out.

    :) This update was quick! Unexpected and a treat!

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  • From ANON - Moon on March 31, 2009
    Wow....everyone has so many problems in this. But it is very realistic. I hope that Goten and Trunks can still have a friendship once things calm down. They really seem like they compliment each other well, if not as lovers. And Gohan...gee. Poor guy is wound up pretty tight. I am waiting to see when he breaks. It should be a very interesting chapter. At the moment, I really can't stand Videl. What a mean person. She was miserable in her marriage, so she instead of telling the truth, she decided to make Gohan miserable too. I hate people like that. I look forward to the next chapter. As always, your writing is beautiful. I feel as though I am watching the plot unfold in life before me.
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  • From quatreofdoom on March 23, 2009
    Hooray! I was so excited when I saw there was a new chapter! I have already read it four times!

    Kim isn't so bad, I guess. Maybe she'll help Trunks foil Goten's wanna-be-straight relationship so that she can have access to her dorm room again.

    I have to admit, when I read the part about Goten freaking out over the phone, my first thought was not about Videl. I immediately thought "Uh oh. Goten knocked up his bimbo. THE GLOVE, GOTEN. YOU MUST WEAR IT!"

    But I guess that's not it. It's just that Videl again. Foiling Trunks with her ill-timed shenanigans! Get out of his face, woman! He's got no time for your meddling! *shakes my fist*

    As for Gohan accidentally sending Trunks' application to Weston, well... er.... they have to appreciate his candor. They probably don't get a lot of applications like that. Good luck, Trunks! Pull those strings, Bulma! *thumbs up*
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  • From Robyn on March 23, 2009
    Oh - one other thing I forgot to mention. O.o I wonder if there will be any repercussions for Gohan accidentally sending that application.
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  • From Robyn on March 23, 2009
    Huh - Kim turned out to be very cool. Too bad she didn't know to keep her mouth shut about socks and roommates.

    o.O What was Trunks thinking avoiding Vegeta like that?

    Um - this is a big turn around for Gohan. I'm guessing that a week or two avoiding each other has a bit to do with that, but it didn't really shine through all that well.

    Still - :P I liked this chapter. I've been waiting for weeks for an update! :P and I am happy with the one we received.
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  • From ANON - Trynia Merin on March 22, 2009
    A lot of tension packed into one chapter.
    1. First I liked how Kim got a personality. Trunks actually related to her in a way that was more mature. When he fixed her watch that was a way of showing his growing responsibility.
    2. Bulma and Gohan always trying to fix things for Trunks. And he is realizing it now and trying to push back and stop them enabling his dependence on them, however well intended it is.
    3. Vegeta's PISSSSED! I can't wait to see how he and Trunks deal with him missing a lunch appointment.
    4. The way in which Trunks and Meena interact is also great. He's perfectly bratty and annoying.
    5. Gohan and Trunks scene where he cooks dinner. Gohan acknowleging that it was nicer than the suit and Trunks realizing because it was something he didn't just buy but made with his own 2 hands.
    6. Gohan's perception of Trunks changing so much and the regret he has being parted from him.
    7. The effectiveness of Gohan's reaction to Goten's call. It gave me a great sense of how ballistic Chichi must be going on the other end, and what horror awaits Gohan there.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Robyn on February 15, 2009
    O.o This whole chapter of Gohan's life was a walking distaster. (You wrote it well, enough to make me want to hide from the drama of it all.)

    I am glad Gohan walked away - as sexy as it would have been to see them together, Gohan was right in what he did at that moment.

    Although I can't say Trunks' thoughts of what it would be like to have Gohan break over him like a tidal wave - um....now Trunks just looks at it like a challenge. Eek!
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  • From quatreofdoom on February 13, 2009
    YEAH. GET 'IM, TRUNKS.

    Seriously. Every time this story updates, I die of excitement, just a little.
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  • From glasseyeviolet on February 12, 2009
    This story is quite intrigueing, I like the fact of how they feel for each other
    and how Goten wants to seperate. Very lovely, :D
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  • From Kalendral9 on February 12, 2009
    Oh Trunks is on the rebound. This is great, can't wait to see how they get together ^_^ K
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  • From ANON - Moon on January 25, 2009
    The cutest story! I love your charater development and each personality matches perfectly. I don't really know how to discuss the story... -__-...but I'll be happy with whatever you choose to do with the characters since it's your work. I really like it though. I'm glad I'm able to review now as well. Before I would have had to sign in and I don't have an account here. I look forward to the next chapter.
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