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Reviews for Underlying Conspiracy

By : chayron
  • From cueball2 on May 19, 2009
    Bizzare, but funny. Thanks for shareing.
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  • From Tru6768 on May 18, 2009
    Over these last few months, I - along with Goku and Vegeta - have learned many things about the anime and the fandom and it has been a fun journey :-D I think this story is just what the fandom needed - some light, self-aware humor - and a nice break from the angsty, gloom and doom world of dbz fanfic! I'm not lying when I say that it was a joy and a pleasure to beta and I'm glad to welcome you back "home" :)
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  • From Zofo on May 17, 2009
    Sadly my pc died again so I'm reviewing from the PS3, not ideal but it's the only alterrnative I've got.

    Don't think I've ever read a funnier lead up to sex. You had me in stitches with all the cliches and they were so true :) I loved the role play. Goku wasn't very good at it was he, no wonder Vegeta couldn't wait in the end, and I didn't mind you not following it through. Leaves more for my imagination :)

    Thanks for a really funny read and I hope you write more soon.
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  • From topbear1974 on May 17, 2009
    Finally! I have been checking this stories every day. The last scene is funny. I am glad they finally did it. The realisation is a bit sudden though. All in all a good crack up! Love your story tremendously. Hope you continue.
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  • From Zofo on May 10, 2009
    So sorry for not reviewing sooner, my pc died and needed repairs :(

    That part with the lube where Vegeta told Goku to undress made me laugh out loud :) Would he really have gone through with it? What would Goku have thought? That it was some special technique to defeat the skeletons? Mind-boggles!

    I loved the Danny part, Goku's slip of the tongue saying 'we' :) Shame Timmy wasn't interested.

    Ewww, Goku shaved his tail. Don't think I'll get that image out of my mind for a while :(

    Seriously, Chichi and Picollo?! *shudders* Poor Picollo :(

    Awww, I was hoping for a bit of frisky action when they were drunk :( Maybe next time :)
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  • From topbear1974 on April 27, 2009
    Another great interaction between the two. you sure is a good teaser. I look forward to the grand realisation soon.
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  • From spooksies on April 26, 2009
    oh holy shit!!

    i think i have joined the "lost the mind club" LOL

    any ways......oh boy they are just dumber as rocks!!

    laters! ~_^

    miko

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  • From Tru6768 on April 18, 2009
    My favorite lines from this chapter:

    [Doesnt it just make you feel as if you were stuck in an RPG game? All these items we dont know exactly how to use

    Goku gave Vegeta a scrutinizing look. If I had my way, Id never let you play video games again!]

    Hehehehehe...Vegeta's video game obsession kills me!

    [The skeleton looked as if Goku had insulted his intelligence. Of course, I have tried to fight for tolerance of the gay community and widen their vision! I even arranged a gay pride parade! Well, true, I was the only one taking part in it, but

    That must be it.

    Both Goku and Danny looked at Vegeta.

    The pride parade, Vegeta explained. Well, you dont see us, he coughed slightly, heterosexuals, half-naked, parading with posters, saying that we are heterosexuals.]

    First of all, the idea of Danny having a 1-man gay pride parade makes me smile. Then having flaming Vegeta and clueless Goku talking about it like this... Brilliant, just brilliant :-P


    [We cant let this injustice continue! Goku declared suddenly.

    Vegetas eyes popped out. Unbelievable. Is this some genetic failure? Is Saiyaman back? he inquired.]

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. It certainly sounds that way. The whole scene where Goku was trying to help Danny made me think Goku should get his own Jerry Springer-esque talk show :-P

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  • From topbear1974 on April 17, 2009
    AhahahahaI Another brilliant chapter. Goku here is priceless. Poor Vegeta must be so frustrated. Danny must have reminded him in many ways. The only difference between timmy and Goku is the later is so clueless, or not? I wait for your disclosure. I love the story very much. please update soon.
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  • From spooksies on April 12, 2009
    ok......you lost your mind.

    and no smut?? you just love to tease EVERYBODY!



    laters! ~_^

    miko
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  • From Zofo on March 19, 2009
    Haha, that's so Vegeta to get Goku to get the curse (tho partly THEM too) :) Very funny how it benefited him with the wonderful sight of water cascading over Goku, no wonder he walked behind!

    Loved the Naruto quips and Vegeta rant about Sasuke, pot calling kettle black :) Then his rant against the curse, it didn't stand a chance. Left me with a image of a huge Vegeta curse squashing the small cloud.

    What a sneaky gift Piccolo sent them. Lol, how are they going to defeat the skeletons with that?

    Aww don't be so down on the movie, at least it's got everyone talking about Dragonball again, and there's Dragonball Kai now too :)
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  • From ANON - topbear on March 15, 2009
    Hahahaha.I love Vegeta's monologue about the curse. Very good summery of his life. Haha. I also love you interpretation of current anemation world. I am, too, far behind the recent trend but I am not sorry.

    Yes. I am cynthia. *blushing* Thank you. I look forward to see your next chapter.
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  • From spooksies on March 13, 2009
    u r....brillant!! leaving everyone hangin by a thread for the lemon!!

    muhahah.....~_^

    good work!

    laters! ~_^

    miko
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  • From ANON - topbear on March 05, 2009
    Hahahaha. Goku chase burger and bowl of rice, Vegeta's wet dream cross. Totally love it. You are a genious. Pity Baba's strategy did not work. I look forward to see what happens next.

    Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - miko on February 27, 2009
    ok chayron.......waiting for that other chapter since i WANT to know what is going on in that head of yours!

    laters! ~_^
    miko
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