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Reviews for Seeing The Dark Of You

By : Blysse
  • From Kuragari75 on January 30, 2009
    oooooooo... wanna read more! *rubs hands together excitedly* plot is thickening! I'm excited!
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  • From SarahTaylor on January 27, 2009
    You have me really curious now about what Roy's up to.

    The smut was hot as always XD

    I look forward to the next chapter, I think I'm addicted to your smut ;P lol
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  • From Yuukichan on January 21, 2009
    Awesome. I really like that Ed is building up to the moment. It really adds a lot, the anticipation of things to come, rather that just sex in the first paragraph. And I loved that momentary slip on Roy’s part, letting Ed know that he is definitely being noticed. Keep up the great work, can’t wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 19, 2009
    "You wanted me?" *snerk* I bet he does! Don't you just love double entendre? :D Nice way to plant the seeds of lust in Roy by splaying out on the couch like that and asking him such a loaded question! XD I see Ed has a bit of the kink in him if the pain of him biting his arm and jerking off with his glove on gets him off! Such a naughty boy! ;) For some reason I really liked that Ed didn't give in to Al's subtle pleading like he usually would. Al could always get Ed to talk but I'm glad that this time Ed kept quiet. There are just some things Al doesn't need to be involved in! :) I can has moar fic pleez?
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  • From SarahTaylor on January 17, 2009
    Yay, more frustrated Ed. I love how his little overactive imagination gives us more smexy scenes with him and his hand XP

    'God knows how, but my little brother was the only person I knew who could translate 'puppy-dog eyes' into a tone of voice. And fuck, did it ever work if you weren't prepared.' -- That line is pure win. You're the only person I know that can sum Al up perfectly in a sentence ^_^

    I look forward to more but now I must return to my own writing, the muse is calling XD

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  • From Kuragari75 on January 14, 2009
    oooooo.... and what move would that be Eddie? lol, like the sound of this so far and can't wait to see where you take it!
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  • From SarahTaylor on January 11, 2009
    I can't wait to see what Ed's scheming, I'm sure he can come up with some really good ideas XD

    Loving the new work, can't wait to read more ^_^
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 10, 2009
    *big grin* Oh I like this!! It's gonna be a long two months at this rate! XD I have a feeling that Ed's shower is gonna see a lot of action until those two months pass! LOL It is beyond ironic that Ed, of all people, has a pain kink! XD The automail must have kept him constantly on the edge of arousal then huh? ;) I'm anxious to see how Ed will go about approaching Roy. :) I kept wondering thru the first part if Roy was watching Ed as Ed daydreamed about Roy. Ed was clearly distracted and I'm sure Roy noticed and took full advantage of that distraction! ;) Can't wait to read more!
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