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Reviews for Soldier Blues

By : RotSeele
  • From thatweirdwhitegirl on May 01, 2014
    Okay so I kept skipping over this thinking it to be some cliche crap about Roy seeing Ed and remembering how he fell in love with him years ago when he was a boy and had to save him and blah blah sex war blah, but I while that would be fun, I was pleasantly surprised that it was far from what I've read before. Also Scar and Al? Different yet sexy.(:
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  • From RikuRocks on August 25, 2009
    This story was excellent. I liked the pace, style, and storyline. The plot was familiar but inventive.

    The grammar and characterisation were solid as well. I enjoyed it very much. Well done. ^_^
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on July 05, 2009
    O_O! Daaaaaamn! You write a mean Envy! :) This is how I always imagined Envy would be in battle - utterly ruthless and totally enjoying his savagery. wow... For this line, "Whatever the Colonel was doing now was by the new Fuhrer’s order", which colonel is Envy referring to and who's the new fuhrer? What's happened to Roy, Ed, Al, and Scar? Are they all OK? Will the couples be reunited? (Hope so!) Will Ed recover from having these mysterious powers within him awakened? Can't wait to find out what happens next! :) More fic soon please! :D
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  • From SarahTaylor on July 05, 2009
    Love the blood and gore and I could so see Envy humming that as he massacred everyone. Really good chapter XD
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on June 29, 2009
    Rule? What rule? What's Envy talking about? Sounds pretty bad to break Envy's rule! :) That was Al who ran out to get Ed wasn't it? I'm glad he's out of Yoki's hands. Too bad Yoki got away. :( Can't wait to read more!! :D
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  • From cagna4 on June 01, 2009
    love the story. what is the rule envy is talking about? i have speculations but i figured the author would now best.
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 31, 2009
    Well, at least Ed is back with Al and the others where he belongs. It worries me that he has that blank look in his eyes. That and the red runes on him remind me too much of PrideEd from Bluebird's Illusion. :( I hope he snaps out of it soon. Where's Roy when you need him! :) Hopefully now that the war seems to be coming to a conclusion, there will be time for Ed to recover and for him and Roy to reconnect! :) More fic soon please! :)
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 27, 2009
    That was good :P

    I love that Al got some loving before Ed did, it's about time too XD

    I can't wait for the next part of this.
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 25, 2009
    O_O whoa. You know, when this fic first started, I had no idea the focus would shift as quickly as it did from Ed and Roy to Al and Scar. :) ScarAl. wow. Scar was a bit brutal with the boy but apparently Al likes it like that! Kinky little bugger! XD Why do I get the feeling that Scar might not survive the coming battle and that's why he made it a point to be with Al now, a last moment together before the end, a physical expression 'I love you' and 'good-bye' without having to actually say it? *sigh* Damn, I'm dying to know what's going on with Ed! Where the hell's he been? Is he OK? What's he going to do? How are they going to stop him from doing whatever it is that Ed is supposed to be able to do? Ed won't die will he? How will Roy save Ed? And does that package that Envy had Roy deliver somewhere for him have anything to do with anything or was it just some red herring that I can't seem to forget about? XD These are burning questions that need answers! :D More fic soon please! :)
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 13, 2009
    whoa. The red runes on Ed's skin make me think of PrideEd from Bluebird's Illusion. That is completely unrelated to this but it's the only instance I know of where Ed had tattoos (for lack of a better term)! :) I hope that when his powers fully activate that he annihilates the bastards torturing him right now first thing! :) I hope Roy's OK. I kinda missed him this chapter. Glad to see Al made it thru the fighting OK. Not sure what to think of him being with Scar right now but whatever makes him happy is OK I guess. :/ Hey, whatever happened to that box or package that Roy was supposed to take somewhere? Did he deliver it? What was in it? More fic soon please! :)
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on May 06, 2009
    wow. ScarxAl. I gotta admit, never seen that pairing before. :) I gotta let a friend of mine know about this as she has a fascination with this pairing! :D A furious smiling Envy is never a good thing. I almost feel sorry for these rebels! They're gonna get what's coming to them for kidnapping Ed tho. Payback's a bitch ya know! XD I didn't know Roy got shot up so badly. :( I hope he'll be OK. He's gotta be there to rescue Ed and save him from himself! :) More fic soon please! :D
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on April 28, 2009
    "Envy was going to give him hell." Envy? feh. Forget him, I'M ready to give you hell!! *headdesks* I can't believe Roy left Ed! WTF Roy?! Why didn't he use a little fire alchemy to save them? tch. Ya know, come to think of it, I haven't seen Roy, or anybody else for that matter, use alchemy in this story. Does alchemy not exist in this fic? Is that why Roy ran? no way to instantly retaliate? *sigh* By the time Roy contacts Envy and gets help, Ed could be long gone to who knows where to suffer who knows what fate! so not good. :( More fic soon please!
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on April 20, 2009
    Yeesh! What a horrible nightmare Al had! :[ You know what Ed reminds me of kinda? Chise from Saikano. Both were made into incredibly powerful weapons without their knowledge or consent and both have the power to destroy the world as we know it. It's been a good while since I saw Saikano but I do seem to remember it not ending well at all. I hope a better fate awaits Ed! (Why I'm picturing Roy comforting/calming Ed like Maria Ross did in Lab 5 I have no idea! :D) I shudder to think what Al might have to do to prevent his nightmare from becoming reality. ;_;
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  • From SarahTaylor on April 19, 2009
    I've said before that I love this story right, because I do *heart*

    The hints of Scar/Al are a wonderful tease XD

    I eagerly anticipate the next chapter.
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on April 18, 2009
    O_O! Holy crap! Ed is a weapon! That's crazy! :D What the hell did Hohenheim do to him? Oh man. wow. I really can't wait for the next chapter now!! :D Hey, does Scar work for Greed or something? I was kinda surprised that he showed up just in the nick of time to save Al's ass when they jumped on the train and then he helped restrain Ed when Greed captured them. And whoa! Hello! Is that a hint of ScarAl I see before me? If so, I gotta tell a friend of mine 'cause she's got a thing for ScarAl! :) Does that package that Envy gave Roy a while ago have anything to do with Ed being a weapon? Can it hurt him or help him in any way? wow. Mystery packages, exploding trains, the army on the move, and our heros on the run! Things are definitely getting exciting now!! Can't wait to read more!! :D
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