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Reviews for Change of Hearts

By : MasterOfThebes
  • From Zofo on October 07, 2009
    Hope Goku did really find him and it was not a dream.

    Gohan was such a jerk I'm glad Vegeta killed him. No doubt tho he can be wished back, but should he be? That was a horrible thing to do, so hurtful :(

    Think Vegeta is falling for Goku. He seemed to only think of him as a f*ck-buddy before but now real feelings are breaking through. Hope Goku's feelings for him are still the same despite the tragedy :)
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  • From ANON - CrossesMaz on July 30, 2009
    Im definitely looking forward to the next chapter of this story. The intensity of this last chapter was very good, i like the fact that you didnt turn Goku into a total mushball when it came to Vegeta killing Gohan, I'm glad that you didnt make him side with either one of them ^^

    "I dropped to the floor, completely stricken with grief, my body became numb and my mind began to blackout. I stared at the back of my lover, my enemy, my friend, and was fueled with the burning desire to kill him, make love to him, and beat him, all at the same time." Absolutely beautiful description of his feelings, it drew me even more into the story. Showing that he had mixed emotions about the situation made it more realistic than fantasy.

    Overall greatly pleased with how the story is coming along, i just wish u would update sooner. btw if you need a beta i am one, u can send your chapters to my email address.

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  • From Pixelgoddess on July 26, 2009
    This is all very intense. I do wonder if Gohan can be wished back, and if he can, what will his reaction be? I'm torn between wanting Vegeta to be dreaming or this to be real. If he is dreaming and actually returns to Goku that would be a very interesting reunion with completely different dynamics - in a way he is surrendering. At the same time, his being found by Goku opens up completely different possibilities - he's been caught and who knows if he will continue to resist and run.
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  • From Zofo on May 19, 2009
    So glad Vegeta finally realised he could allow himself to love Goku and it was moving when he said his goodbyes to Bulma's grave.

    What is Gohan's problem, he is so full of hate. It's like he can't handle what is happening in his own life so needs a scapegoat to take it out on. Hope the others don't turn on Goku like he did. I don't think they all will but maybe some. Goku will need Vegeta to be there for him so I hope his love is strong.
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 09, 2009
    Loved your story
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  • From ANON - IceColdtead on April 25, 2009
    Fuck Yeah! chapter 6 was awesome!! The perfect mix of drama and violence, and LOL @ Goku's jealousy. Can't wait for chapter 7 ^^
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  • From QueenOfIce21031 on April 25, 2009
    OMG..DIS CHAPTER WAH SOS FUCKIN OT NO..DAM BABY MI LOVE YA WRITING..BUH YA SHOULDA MEK DI BLOODCLOT GEH IM RASS KICKED..
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  • From QueenOfIce21031 on April 21, 2009
    Dis chapter was so beautiful..ya imagery..jus beautiful
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  • From ANON - Shaw Cole on April 20, 2009
    Please dear god tell me that there's going to be more to this story. PLEASE! This is the first Dragonball Z fic in a long time to not only capture my interest, but my love as well. I will be so very heartbroken if I cannot find out what happens next. ^^
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  • From Ginodemax on March 27, 2009
    Chapter 4 better not be the end of the story, but it is my favorite chapter along with chapter 3 of course..to sum it up..love the story, it's very cute
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  • From Zofo on March 20, 2009
    Loved Goku's description of his love for Vegeta at the start.

    Oh dear, will Gohan make trouble for them, Vegeta doesn't care but it will hurt Goku :(

    Cracked me up as well when Vegeta called him Goku :)
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  • From Zofo on March 17, 2009
    Hot lemons :) Now that they've both given into their feelings they can't get enough of each other! Surprised Goku can still walk :)

    I'm a bit upset that Vegeta doesn't count their relationship but at the end it seemed that might be because he had bonded with Bulma so was still missing her. He probably isn't ready for that type of bond again :( Hope Goku can persuade him gradually.
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  • From Pixelgoddess on March 06, 2009
    I can't wait to see how this turns out. Loved Goku's dream. At least Goku was finally bold enough to make the first move, and lucky for him Vegeta hasn't said no. You should consider getting a beta - there are tense issues, but it doesn't 't keep the story so far from being very readable. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Zofo on March 06, 2009
    This started out so sad, Vegeta really loved her *sniffle*

    Like the way you slowly brought them together, Goku so attracted but frightened to take it further, Vegeta amused by it. I think Vegeta may be going to up the ante now tho, I can almost see the glint in his eye. Hope Goku will be ok and Vegeta is not just playing with him.
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  • From QueenOfIce21031 on March 01, 2009
    awww..dah so sad..buh mi like e still..write more fi mi..
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