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Reviews for Vegeta Doth Protest Too Much

By : sefiru
  • From ANON - Celesta SunStar on September 06, 2009
    Vegeta with a hobby... it sounds interesting. And they haven't used a bed yet? I'm sure that can be fixed eventually. So the legal machinations have been postponed? Darn. Oh well, patience is a virtue, and this just gives you a longer opportunity to make sure the scene is polished. Thank you for your well wishes, I have been given leave to finally wear shoes and try to walk... with a cane instead of crutches. It's a pain, but only about three more weeks of one. I hope you do well in the coming weeks, (and please don't brake your foot.)
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  • From ANON - Celesta SunStar on August 27, 2009
    Found you from YHH and thought, 'eh, why not?' and the conclusion is Not Bad at All. You don't need to be a DBZ fanatic to follow, and I appreciate having porn with my plot. For your 'Evil' series: Darn it's finished, but I can read it in one go. For this one: Darn, I have to wait 3 weeks for the legal fun. Overall: Good job. On my way back to YYH... (the one thing I can do with a broken foot is explore the realm of fanfiction, since I can't get to my job, my books and manga, my video games... sorry for the venting)
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  • From animeslave18 on August 09, 2009
    "Sometimes he looks at me as if I am a work of art, and he is the artist shaping me." I just love that sentence. It's poetic and...romantic in a way. ^^ I'm glad you made a chapter like this. Now we all know how Vegeta is taking this. I think he should disobey, just to see what happens. I mean, he has his pride still, doesn't he? Besides, what's the worst Kakarot can do? *ponders, but tries not to think about it that much* Anyways, always eager to see what happens next. ^^
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  • From pollita19 on August 09, 2009
    oh i love love love this story. i love how Vegeta is submissive and how Goku is a loving dominating Saiyan =] please please e-mail me when you update this story yaioyuri19@yahoo.com
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  • From Pixelgoddess on August 07, 2009
    Vegeta's got it very bad. I like how Goku pushes him to excel and takes real pleasure in Vegeta's successes.
    (You know, I check this site a couple times a day, every day, hoping for an update of yours. So today is a good day.)
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  • From Ashray on July 31, 2009
    Its not that I'm not interested in the rest of the story, I just feel a little sadistic at the moment, and want to see ChiChi tortured, thats all. Also because then she is finally out of the way and cant interupt them wehn Goku 'trains' Vegeta ^____^
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  • From Pixelgoddess on July 30, 2009
    I like that Goku recognizes that Vegeta can't totally accept this and has to fight back as who he thinks he's supposed to be.

    There's a bondage picture on DA that I can completely see your Vegeta doing - http://neoromantika.deviantart.com/art/Bondage-114971092
    If you don't have a DA account (you have to be logged in as an adult to see it) I can email it to you - pixelgoddess@likeacat.com. (It's a guy in rope and fetish heeled boots. :D )
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  • From ANON - Oriya-Chan on July 27, 2009
    You have gotten me really interested in this fic. Very very hot. I understand the strength it takes to submit willingly to another person. (I saw the comment earlier about how Vegeta was acting weak.) I would have had a slight problem with the abrupt change in Vegeta's character, but then you put in the fact that Vegeta gave Goku a black eye. That made all of my worries disappear. What I wouldn't give to be a fly on the wall when Goku is training Vegeta....yegads. I am happy to see I am not the only Sub who enjoys to partake in fanfiction. =p
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on July 26, 2009
    O.o You like my mind? Yay. ^^ Ooooo. Vegeta's very obedient, it's cute. ^^ As for this whole troublesome thing with the ex-wife, I know Goku will win. He's got all the support and no one likes Chichi.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 25, 2009
    wondeful chapter, i hope goku doesn't have any trouble from chi-chi when it comes to these divorce
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  • From Ashray on July 23, 2009
    I really like this story, I cant wait to read more.
    I like the lemons and am courisosly waiting to know what they will do with their room and all those toys.
    But honestly at the moment I'm more interested to know what Goku will do about CHiChi.

    I don't really like her, since she alsways hits him with her pan! And tricking him into marring her was really, really mean!
    She shouldn't get any of his money, and when she tries she will loose her son, too. I love your Goku and his plotting, she is in for a surrprise, because as soon as he tells the lawyers that she hits him he will get his son (And I bet she will blow up when she notice how much smarter and slyer he is now)
    You should really bash her in the ground, she will learn not to mess with Goku! ^_____^

    But there is a little problem with your story: Now that Vegeta is with Goku, how will Trunks be born?
    I mean, Vegeta seems not very interestest in Bulma, so what will they do about Trunks? Or will it be a one time thing, like you wrote in the journal, where they get together to make a child an then leave each other alone?

    Well, I can't wait to read the next chapter, no matter what happens there. Please update soon ^___^

    Ashray
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  • From animeslave18 on July 19, 2009
    "He shows me how to mount the carcass..." O.o After reading that far in the sentence, my mind went weird and soon I had crazy, horrid images in my head...but I read on and I felt better. :) Oh my goodness. After reading the rest of the chapter, I thought the room was getting hotter. I actually had to stop reading a bit so I wouldn't become like Vegeta. ^^; Damn you're a good writer. You make a delicious dom Kakarot and a yummy sub Vegeta. You probably hear that a lot, but it's friggin' true! I really can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 18, 2009
    LOVE IT
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  • From glasseyeviolet on July 12, 2009
    A very..Mouthwatering chapter...And it isn't the pig XD.
    I love the fact that even though Goku is the 'master'
    he isn't all abusive and what not. He is still tender
    to Vegeta while not being so overbearing.

    Love it! Cannot wait for the next update.
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  • From Pixelgoddess on July 12, 2009
    How long has it been since I told you I loved you? Could Vegeta ever have imagined that submission to the right person could be so orgasmic?
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