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Reviews for Vegeta Doth Protest Too Much

By : sefiru
  • From Zeenath on May 30, 2009
    YAY! ^-^ Chi-chi is such a bitch, and Goku getting Gohan out of there is one of his better ideas. and I have to agree with Goku his being an adult sure makes things interesting. ^-^
    Keep up the good work ^-^
    See ya ^-^
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  • From Zofo on May 22, 2009
    I loved the reading of the journal so hope there will be more of it.

    Can't wait to see Kakarot's full plan for Vegeta and what new rules he will come up with :)

    Also wondering what the lawyers have in store though this new Goku won't take it lying down.
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  • From animeslave18 on May 18, 2009
    Oh, well that explains it. Another delicious lemon and no disappointments, except that it was too short. Though, I guess I shouldn't complain because you update and that's all that really matters. ^^
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  • From Zeenath on May 17, 2009
    Yeah I know how it feels to have a story take a life of it's own and decides where it's going without your input. All you can do is follow to learn whats happening. ^-^
    YAY! ^-^ a small, bitty, tiny, bit of smut ^-^
    Keep up the good work ^-^
    See ya ^-^
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  • From glasseyeviolet on May 16, 2009
    This is very interesting, and addicting. I know you
    said you wouldn't update alot but I do hope more chapters roll
    in. The way you describe Goku have sexual prowress is actually
    quite sexy. I kind of like it when he is the Seme and Vegeta
    the Uke.
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  • From Sigart on May 16, 2009
    Haha, gotta love bizarre alien genes XD

    Man, I waited all day yesterday for this, even knowing it wouldn't be there until I got up this morning.. and yes, I know short chapters are your style :p it was meant as a compliment.
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  • From Pixelgoddess on May 04, 2009
    I'm so glad you have expanded on this. You make submissive Vegeta so delicious. Now I'm wondering what he'll have to do to earn his collar.
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  • From animeslave18 on May 04, 2009
    Of course, with all those tyrants dominating Vegeta's life, he's bound to be a sub. ^^ He sure is tasty. Yeah, I also have a hard time believing that you had a writer's block on Vegeta, but don't worry, it happen's to everyone.
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  • From Zeenath on May 03, 2009
    Nice ^-^ now this is getting interesting. the reading of the journal is defenitly interseting. Can't wait to learn about the back ground and traditions that you've given to the saiyan coulture.
    Keep up the good work ^-^
    See ya ^-^
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  • From ladyshadowdragon on May 02, 2009
    Looks like Goku is going to have his hands full. :D
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  • From Sigart on May 02, 2009
    Argh! Why, oh why, are you so good but write such short chapters? XD Not that I'm complaining about the update schedule, mind, but just... Want... more..!

    ...I like the Aged Mentor (how'd you make the 'tm' like that?) XD He's nice... and aged... and mentor-y.
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  • From animeslave18 on April 20, 2009
    It's ok. Even if you don't know where you're going with this story, I'm sure it will be awesome just like the rest of your stories. ^^ Once again, another good lemon or lemon juice. I like that stuff, in this sense I mean. As always, can't wait for more. ^^
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  • From Sigart on April 19, 2009
    ^^ Well, I love how you write sub!Vegeta. And you're the only one on this wretched site who writes him that submissive... such a shame there are no more, but then, you can't have everything XD

    Loved the passage where Vegeta was thinking that now Karkarott's gonna train him. Made me shiver... in a good way.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 19, 2009
    wow me like
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  • From ANON - anonanon on April 18, 2009
    I must say, this story is much better than the title led me to believe. Story development through sex indeed....Outstanding job, please update once more when you have the chance.
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