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Reviews for Vegeta Doth Protest Too Much

By : sefiru
  • From darkaura204 on May 11, 2011
    Hey! What wrong with your stories? "class=SpellE>" and "style='mso-spacerun:yes'>" is written in all of your stories; in every chapter and practically every sentence. Why is that? Is there anyway that you can fix it? it was really bothering me when I was trying to read.
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  • From Shane on February 07, 2011
    Hi, I love this story. I am rereading it for fun and I remembered that I wanted to tell you that in the first chapter you had a lot of editing directions left in the chapter. Like class=SpellE> and things of that nature.
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  • From LadyWolf on January 21, 2010
    Hey Loovved this fic!!! I think I really like a submissive Vegeta...

    I read the preview for your next fic...and I thought of a title...how about "Vegeta Unbound"

    What do you think?

    Can't wait to read the new fic!
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  • From PrismaKakkerra on January 15, 2010
    Lmao! I must say, you surprised me. And I suppose, I surprised myself. Normally, a fic of this nature, I wouldn't read, but this was funny and enjoyable! Kudos! Very good writing. I enjoyed the Nappa abuse as well. lol
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  • From Zofo on January 11, 2010
    Aww it's over, but I'm happy you will post more maybe as another story :)

    Your new story sounds good, can't wait to read it.
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  • From animeslave18 on January 10, 2010
    Holy crow! That new story sounds goooood! I'm all excited about hearing a new story from you again. ^^ I just know it'll be awesome. So...Goku scratches when someone is praying to him? That's different. Sounds better than a headache. Ah, okay. I see what you mean now. Now, curiosity and excitement take place as I'm eager to know what the next chapter shall be. ^^
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  • From animeslave18 on December 28, 2009
    Oh, and...stupid question...what's hiatus? You said you've mentioned it before and...I feel stupid for not knowing what that is but...I feel like I'm learning everything on my own here and...I'm kinda a slow learner. >_> I wouldn't have complained since it's got smut and all, but...I'm curious.
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  • From animeslave18 on December 27, 2009
    Yay! Chocolates! *Devours deliciousness* That...ritual...*shivers* was interesting. You can probably tell that it was unexpected to me because, I thought the blood was for drinking...and not for drawing on Kakarot...excuse me, Lord Kakarot. ^^; I think I'm jealous too. Of course, who wouldn't be, he's a God now. Ooooo, I like how you have it where whenever they're talking about Kakarot, you capitalize Him or He...like he's a God or something...hmmm. ;) Anywho, I guess it would be foolishness to disobey him now. :( He might accidentally 'smight' someone. Or is it 'smite'...I don't know. It's funny that you intended to have this story be a oneshot, or whatever, at the beginning, but now you're this far! ^^ It's gotten' waaaaaay better! I'm glad you continued! Things are going to get better from here on out, no? With Vegeta being his 'companion' and all. Or should I say 'slave.' *Shivers again* Oh, and I hope your holiday is a good one! ^^
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  • From Zofo on December 27, 2009
    Interesting, this other child born on the same day. At first I thought it was Broly, as he fits the power bit, but do you have somone else in mind?

    I'm sad it will be put on hiatus but look forwars to the next smut-filled chapter you promise :)
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  • From ANON - topbear on December 22, 2009
    This is great story. It is rare to see a story with Kakarotto in his full glory. Too many make him a whiny softie baby. I love the relationship between him and Vegeta and how they are happy together. I think in the end the prince know that only a god like Kakarotto can fully possess him and have his full attention. I look forward to read more.

    Sorry to hear that you are going to spend more time on other fandom, although there are still one DB story to look forward to, Yay. I really love your writing skill and would like to see more your version of DB. Maybe once you finished the business you would come back to write more G/V? I look forward to that. Sorry I only review now as my laptop was taken away by my husband I can only read via mobile and I cannot review with mobile.

    Take care and have a great day.
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  • From animeslave18 on December 15, 2009
    Also, I am unsure about turning all the saiyan hotties into...females. :/ Do you mean literally? If so, that's cool. It's your story. ^^;
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  • From animeslave18 on December 15, 2009
    Oooo, that was soooo detailed. It was deliciousness! ^^ I can't wait for Kakarot's ritual! X) I can almost see it happening! Blood drinking, salt circles, and groveling!! Sorry I'm excited. ^^ Oooo, can't wait, can't wait! Oh, and I wonder what other ideas Vegeta will get when he reads more of...that book...*shudders* Anyways, Gohan is soooo adorable!! ^^ He's all small and happy! Sorry, I point out the obvious, but that's what I love about him! I hope you update soon! :)
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  • From Zofo on December 13, 2009
    Vegeta came how many times whilst being face-fucked?! Though the way you wrote it I'm not surprised, that was hot :)

    Slightly worried about turning them into girls as I hope you don't mean Vegeta too *worries*
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  • From Zofo on December 04, 2009
    Aww, Kakarot's essence saved Vegeta in the dream. Loved the pie bit by the way, dreams are like that, seemingly strange things in real life are completely logical in a dream.

    Making Kakarot into a god, well he kinda is anyway in my eyes, afterall in the show he was stronger than anyone including the Kai's.

    It's going to make Vegeta more gooey? I think it would anyone, so as he's mated to him, he must be almost a pile of goo, I would be :)
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  • From animeslave18 on November 30, 2009
    Ah, I see. Wow, Goku being a god. I can totally see that happening. Man, you even made up a ritual of how it's done. You're amazing. ^^ Aw, poor Vegeta had a bad dream. Good thing 'godly' Kakarot was there to make it all better. ;) So, with the dragonballs (sorry if I sound slow processing at what you mean), Goku plans to have males reproduce? Or jus' Vegeta? :) Orrrr, can they already do that? I'm lost! >.< Hm, maybe that's why this chapter was called, "plans," so that way, it'll have us guessing at what he's planning, right? :/ Well, sad but true, I must wait. Patience is never my virtue.
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