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Reviews for A Moment of Madness

By : RingLeader
  • From Zofo on October 08, 2009
    Hope Vegeta's not losing his marbles!

    His dreams/nightmares are becoming so intense now, I wonder if Goku noticed his ki this time.
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  • From Ulrike on September 05, 2009
    First off...."Some idiot dressed in a purple dinosaur costume was harassing small children."

    This had me rolling. I had to wait a while before I stopped laughing.

    Anyway, great fanfic! I've seen it on this site for some time but never got it into my head to read. I think it's great how you've portrayed Vegeta's boredom for life. He loves Bulma and cares for her, but she's just not strong enough for him. I think you did a great job in showing their relationship, and turning this story into a yaoi without making anyone look like an out of character bad-guy. I'm interested to see where these dreams lead. Are they being controlled by someone outside...or is Vegeta's mind truly playing tricks on him? I can't wait to read more and I'm excited to see where this story leads. Excellent.
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  • From animeslave18 on March 31, 2009
    Wow, its getting better. This chapter sounded kinda confusing the way you put it. It sounds like Vegeta is either losing it or his day dreams are just out of control. Either way, it intrigued my interest. I guess I'll have to wait for the next update to find out what's going on.
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  • From animeslave18 on March 24, 2009
    I'm sorry Ring Master. I'm afraid I'm going to have to agree with DarkSerapha. ^^; At least it's never too late to make it more interesting! The third chapter was a little more exciting. ^^ Don't worry though, I shall continue reading and reviewing your story.
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  • From DarkSerapha on March 24, 2009
    Hrm.. I'm not sure what to think of this story as of yet. The title sucks, sorry if I say it plainly. The story itself starts of from rather familiar grounds, I've seen that sort of plot done a bazillion times before. The writing itself is pretty okay, definetely seen much worse. But sometimes you've got a couple of things in there that are just.. weird. Like "The prince snapped out of his shock and growled, leaping atop the now writhing mass." *shudders* That's some nasty image right there. But at other times your writing is really good. I'll have to wait and see how this turns out. It would certainly be nice if it would turn out to be more than just another PWP.
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  • From animeslave18 on March 23, 2009
    *Sigh* I know what Vegeta is going through. You know, at the end of the first chapter, you should've had Vegeta be Chichi's slave. *Giggles and blushes at the thought* I don't think that's ever happened before. I don't mean much by it, just thought it was funny. Other than that, the story's lookin' good so far. I can already tell that the lemony parts are good. *starts to salvate* I just only hope that it gets better. ^^
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