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By : Dotowe
  • From Caithdean on May 03, 2009
    lol, that was great, i was laughing so hard when i read this. I am a bit sad that duo is being so negative, hope he gets better after "meeting" WuFei. :D please keep up the good work, i look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - MorganMaroon on April 27, 2009
    It's challenging to find a GW 1x2 fic these days that actually has a plot. I absolutely love your development of both Duo and Heero, and can't wait for future chapters. You have great writing talent, please keep it up!

    ~MM
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  • From Camui on April 24, 2009
    I'm gonna cry if this doesn't go through AGAIN. *fifth time trying to review*

    So uhm. By now I've kinda forgotten what I've written a million times before, let alone what you wrote in the chapter...
    all I remember is thinking d'awww, Heero's kind of a sap, and boooo on Duo for being the heartless one. LOL kinda weird how that turned out eh? I think so. Mmhmmm.

    I'm gonna end it there because my ADD is kicking in and the sun is shining. :D
    Looking forward to more!
    ♥
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  • From CeeCee on April 23, 2009
    I appreciate the appreciation!

    This chapter moved me, much like the last four, because Duo is so hard and so vulnerable at the same time. More cat and mouse, which I love, and his tendency to drive Heero a little nuts with worrying about him, right before flirting with him, like that little lip-bite he gave him. Heero removing the tarps from the windows and letting in the glare seemed like foreshadowing to me (I'm an English major, I LOVE foreshadowing), where he was exposing them to the light of day so they could come out of hiding. I can't wait to see what happens next between these two.

    All of the details were perfect. The eating scenes in this story are as much fun as everything else; I'm still laughing about "an absurd amount of cheese." I was excited for a moment, because it looked like you had uploaded four chapters, but it was perhaps the fifth, more than once? Either way, please continue!
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  • From CeeCee on April 11, 2009
    It's so easy to get lost in this story. Duo is such a study in contrasts, snide one moment, lost the next. Poor guy. It's so interesting to see Heero playing cat and mouse with him, too, wanting to help him but not wanting to step on his toes. Yet he won't let Duo ignore him. THis is excellent writing. More, please.
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  • From Camui on April 10, 2009
    Jesus Christ just fuck already!
    Lol
    Even though whenever I follow multi-chaptered stories like this I get mad when the sex happens too early :/ Like with this story it's gotta be drawn out, you know it's gotta take character development - like Heero looking for Duo and then fixing his hair and outfit and stuff (which was TOTALLY cute, like d'awwwwww!!!) and Duo maybe startng to realize that Heero's not being such an arse...
    aiiiiiiiish I need to get to bed @_@;;
    waiting ever so anxiously for your next update!
    ♥
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  • From NekuYasha on March 31, 2009
    OMG! I didn't know what to expect in the beginning of this, but it drew me in, hook, line, and sinker! I'm extremely interested in seeing where this goes. Great job and I'll be watching for more!
    Neku ^_^,,
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  • From Camui on March 31, 2009
    Haha good good. Oh Duo. Duo McDepressionPants. Ah well.

    Oooooooh film developing~~

    *is still patiently waiting for the hot sweaty man sex*
    LOL just kidding.
    (kinda)

    Still as good as the first 2 chapters. :] Keep it up hon.
    ♥
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  • From Camui on March 28, 2009
    Haaa, guess I coulda looked for the 'Next Chapter' button eh?
    Eheheheh ^^;;;;
    *airhead*

    Anyway. Sticking with what I said in the first chapter.
    Wooooo.~
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  • From Camui on March 28, 2009
    Interesting start; wonderful word flow that keeps the reader hanging on until the next sentence, then the next, then the next, until... end. To be continued.

    So, if you will, continue. :]
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  • From angelofinnocence on March 27, 2009
    Interesting. I really like it. Please update as soon as you can manage. I'll be looking forward to it. ^__^ It's really very well-written and well-plotted so far.

    Ja!

    Xander
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