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By : Dotowe
  • From ANON - Margaret on July 15, 2010
    great story so far. beautiful writing. its slightly darker so far than i usually like but other than that you've stayed pretty true to the characters which i really appreciate.
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  • From ANON - natalie on February 24, 2010
    Unbelievably awesome story! Intelligent, insightful, and unlike any fic I've ever read. Thank you soo much for the amazing way you depicted Duo, for once he's not just a grinning idiot... please, please finish it!
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on February 07, 2010
    Oh, oh, NOW you decide to make Heero injured? Really? REALLY? Oh, by the way, Duo's way more injured. REALLY? REALLY? COME ON! Seriously, could you please put in your next chapter update an author's note that says that this story is more Duo-centric but will later on be 1x2. Cause I'm getting tired of asking for Duo to be the one all boohooing over Heero when he's badly injured. It's really irritating you know? I'm almost fed up with the whole damn story~.....

    COME ON!! MAKE HEERO THE INJURED ONE! Make Duo be the one boohooing over Heero for once, not the other way around!
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  • From CeeCee on February 01, 2010
    Okay. You've pretty much killed me now. A cliffhanger. One helluva sweet cliffhanger.

    That moment when Heero saw himself in the boy before the kid almost took him down was profound. Duo came and saved him from his own compassion, which is ironic.

    I love the tense conversation between Heero and Duo and Duo's sunglasses amused me; he was throwing up this wall between them that included not wanting eye contact. That had to have driven Heero nuts. I like how Relena was kind of a buffer between them. I hope you get to update this again soon.
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  • From CatDeChanis on December 31, 2009
    I would just like to say that you have a gift for writing, and I'm very grateful that you have chosen to share it with the fanfiction community. When I read Gundam Wing, I tend to look for fics that are heavy in plot, like Maldoror's and Yanagi's works on mediaminer. Yours is another I have added to my list of highly-recommeneded fics. What you have posted so far is EXTREMELY well-done, and I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on December 15, 2009
    About time is all I have to say.

    Another thing. While I know that this is primarily not focused on the relationship between Heero and Duo, you've shown Duo to be the most angsty and annoying between the two. I know Heero is supposed to be the 'perfect soldier' and all, but I really think you could throw a chapter into this pot where Heero is angsted over by Duo. Or when the bullets fly, Heero gets shot and Duo thinks Heero is dead. The he realizes that Heero is in a coma, and Duo laments about how much he loved Heero but didn't really know.

    I don't know if I'm making any sense here, but my basic point is that you need a couple chapters dedicated solely to Heero and some angst for him from Duo or Heero angsting out on his own.
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on November 15, 2009
    I forgot to mention in my last review.....

    You should hurry up and include some chapters where Duo pushes Heero way too far and he has to go find Heero and apologize to Heero. And maybe a part where Heero gets shot taking a bullet for Duo. Or something like it. Then Duo can sit and wallow in the guilt of everything he'd done to emotionally abuse Heero.

    I'm only saying this cause to be honest, it got kinda annoying when Heero was always the victim of Duo's verbal abuse and never really fought back..... >A
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on November 15, 2009
    I love this story!

    Do you know how many chapters this story will be?
    Also, you had some typos in your story, but it wasn't anything major to have a real bitch fit over.

    Also, please update soon~!
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  • From ANON - tsukamei on November 06, 2009
    The story is starting to get confused, but I'm looking forward to the resolutions, and more plot. I like the way you handled Une very much. She was just right mixture of bitter, vicious and cool headed. I really like the dogs.
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  • From ANON - Camui on October 16, 2009
    Do you know how often I checked on this freaking story to see if you've updated?
    The other day I check and there's still just 6 chapters.
    Today, 8? 9 I think?
    Idk but you're a crafty, sneaky ninja.
    I'm watching you... T___T;


    Anyhooooo. Lovin it. I love how Duo and Heero are finally settling into a routine; it's a perfect metaphor for their situation, the house and the dog and the girl and blah blah.

    I'da punched Wufei too.
    And then licked his wounds.
    ...
    *cough*

    Anyway, missed ya! Glad to see you back and running again :]
    ♥
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  • From CeeCee on October 15, 2009
    This just keeps getting better. I enjoy Wufei in this chapter, because you can see that he's wearing thin at the seams, too, and starting to unravel. His binge with Heero was well written and believable. It's always funny to me to see him in my mind's eye with his hair down, since i always think of him as being buttoned up so tight.

    I only just started noticing that you change the story summary each chapter. Clever. I'm really liking this story. Thanks for updating again and keeping the awesome imagery and metaphors coming.
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  • From CeeCee on October 09, 2009
    *chuckle* Thanks for the cameo. This chapter didn't disappoint. Naming the dog and Wufei getting punched in the chops was the high point of my day. And Une's bad ass. Loved her.

    I like the buildup of tension between them again and how restless they are despite the weird effort to be more domesticated in their surroundings. I also love how Duo seemed not to want to compromise with Heero on anything in this installment, and you see that again with their sparring. It's like he doesn't want Heero to wear him down in any way.

    Thanks for updating. I always look forward to this one.
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  • From CeeCee on October 02, 2009
    I thought about this fic yesterday; the line "an absurd amount of cheese" popped into my head, and Heero's estimation that Duo's eggs tasted like cheese with the texture of scrambled eggs.

    I loved this chapter. I love all of them, anyway, but this was so much fun to read. "We're nesting." Duo tickled me. It makes you happy to see him trying to let Heero in, to an extent. I love their dinner conversation and their new dog and neighbor.

    I always enjoy your language usage and very tangible metaphors and visuals. Keep it coming. I'm jealous.
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  • From ANON - Camui on June 05, 2009
    ....
    *sniffle, tear*
    Waiting patiently for you my dear~~~~~~~~
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  • From CeeCee on May 06, 2009
    "That's why you only give me scraps, isn't it? You think that if I get too close, I'll see how ugly you are and leave." That floored me. How perfect is it that Heero summed up Duo's hangups so neatly? At that point, we, the reader, want to see Heero put Duo's frustration to rest and to see what he'll do to accomplish that. And yeah, jumping his bones on the pile of clothes on the floor pretty much fit the bill. But best line of all? "Fine, but I want a dog." That was priceless. I'm loving this fic.
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