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Reviews for Krillen\'s 100\'th Proposal (and After)

By : Salza
  • From ANON - Rave Mage Jagonshi on November 17, 2011
    I really just wanted to congratulate you on such a well written piece. I have been reading fanfiction for almost ten years now and I find so very few that are really any good; yours excels. In fact, I actually used the idea to write my own version, giving you credit of course (though I used your FF.net name Onyx). I really would like for you to read it and tell me what you think if you have the time; it would really mean a lot and give me some motivation to finish chapters 2-4. I was really surprised that you classified this story as a UST, not that I’m complaining (my ship is Krillin/Piccolo).
    I’m really glad you were able to keep both Piccolo and Krillin in character, not many people can do both. It was remarkably well written, and showed a great deal of insight to the dynamics of their relationship.
    I guess my real question is: Are you going to continue it? And is it going to be slash? I would really like to see a second installment, just because it really leaves the reader hanging (although you ended it well, at the closing moment that sums up the emotion of the story).
    Anyway, I really haven’t checked to see what this was written; you probably don’t write anymore (just my luck…)
    No worries though, I shall find another fellow fan.
    R.M. Jagonshi
    “What We’re Left” on FF.net

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  • From ANON - Rebecky_Mo on April 26, 2009
    Oh, and if you decided you wanted to further this story into 'something', I'd be there to read it. Sounds interesting! ^^
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  • From ANON - Rebecky_Mo on April 26, 2009
    *copies review from FF.net, with new final note*

    YAY, Piccolo and Krillin friendship story!
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  • From Pixelgoddess on March 31, 2009
    *grins* You have such a great ear for Piccolo. I can just hear him saying stuff like this, being kind of funny and snarky without ever cracking a smile. And you Krillin is spot on - insecure, depreciating, kind of gawky in his personality and behavior.

    At first I thought it would be cool to have this scene from Piccolo's POV, but then I thought about it and I think it would have a negative impact on the sharpness of the dialog and characterization.
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