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Reviews for Instead of Flowers

By : Salza
  • From ANON - on July 10, 2016

    I dearly wish you would continue this story.  You write the two of them so well!

    Thank you for the well-written work.  I enjoyed reading it very much!


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  • From ANON - Rini on December 29, 2011
    Ok. It's been forever since you last updated, so it's unlikely that you'll ever read this but. I just discovered your writing yesterday and have been devouring (and devouring and savoring and devouring again) your stories like a starving man at an all you can eat buffet. Except here, the buffet is finite and cannot satiate my appetite.
    I am a staunch Vegeta/Goku fan and never would I have ever DREAMED that somehow, I would become hooked on Goku and Piccolo, of ALL couples! The way you describe their relationship is so beautiful and tragic and realistic that I have no choice but to succumb to the reality that I...love...them together. So much that I've been drawing and thinking about them like crazy.
    God I sound like a man woman. Your writing is just that INCREDIBLE. Please, whatever the subject matter, never stop writing. If you feel it in your heart to write, then please do.
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  • From ANON - chikyu on January 05, 2010
    Beautiful. Loved everything about this!The dialoge, how you wrote the two, the stuff like "He said to the embodiment of evil." and the talions head/hair parts. But have to say, that last bit, that's gonna leave one hell of a hicky. Again. Beautiful! Keep up creating great stuff like this!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 18, 2009
    wow this is totally a very realistic pic and goku relationship.
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  • From VampireHaku on May 24, 2009
    I oh so love your PiccoloxGoku writings :) this was very touching. Hope to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2009
    Great first chapter! Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Krissy on April 07, 2009
    That was so amazingly sweet. I never pictured Piccolo like that, but you portray a moment in time so well. Truly magnificent.
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  • From XxChiChixX on April 06, 2009
    Ohh~ This was so amazing! I just love your PiccoloxGoku stories! We need more of this couple.

    I loved everything about this. The writing style, the setting, the conflict - EVERYTHING. And the way you wrote Goku being so fragile in his state...when he was pulled onto Piccolo's lap, sljfklasfjaklj SO CUTE!!! D: WRITE MORE. I really, really want more. More PiccoloxGoku. More,more,more,more,more! >
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  • From ANON - CrimsonTide on April 05, 2009
    My goodness reviewers have gotten lazy!

    Such a bittersweet fic this is. It's completely unique; I've never read anything along these lines before. I think you did a wonderful job of portraying the emotions of both Piccolo and Goku while keeping them completely in character, and their interactions were spot on.

    This is a great addition to your already awesome gallery of DBZ fics! Hope more people review this soon. It certainly deserves more attention that what's been given thus far.
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