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  • From 66Hiei08 on October 28, 2009
    Oh, I'm watching.. this story.. LOL
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  • From Ulrike on October 28, 2009
    Looks like Yamcha is in a shitload of trouble. I also liked the hangover descriptions. All too real. I do wonder how Vegeta will react to all this...especially if he finds out during some special moment between him and Goku. This story is getting better and better!
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  • From Kira on October 27, 2009
    Well, damn. Didn't see that coming. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
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  • From topbear1974 on October 27, 2009
    do we have to wait for a week to see next chapter? please update soon! whining...
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  • From Ulrike on October 26, 2009
    I like how Yamcha and Vegeta are friends! Aw. Well..."buddies" is more like it. I've always enjoyed how real your dialogue sounds in your stories. The DBZ characters always speak like, well, real people. I am curious as to what happened between Goku and Vegeta and what got Vegeta so spun up. I can't imagine it was just something dumb Goku said, and I don't believe that Goku would dislike someone so much without a good reason. Looking forward to more!
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  • From topbear1974 on October 26, 2009
    the second chapter is so promising. I wonder how is vegeta going to make up to goku. a seductive vegeta sounds promising. but i have the same worry as goku as I don't like vegeta use goku's feeling to ”defeat“ him. glad goku has some sense to protect himself. please update soon.
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  • From Orchideater on October 23, 2009
    Goku sounds so bitter. I really wonder what Vegeta said or did to cause that in him. In this case it would be smarter for Veg to be earnest and open in his wooing of Goku instead of playing Casanova, but I doubt he’ll take that approach. Goku and Yamcha are drinkin’ buddies. ^o^
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  • From Zofo on October 22, 2009
    Vegeta in seductive mode *swoons* How can Goku resist? At least Vegeta has three tries now to win him over.

    I'm very curious about what made Goku turn his back on Vegeta, sounds like he got his heart broken. Can't wait to find out :)
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  • From Kira on October 22, 2009
    Liking this story a lot so far. Those three dates sound like they're going to be very entertaining.
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  • From Zofo on October 18, 2009
    Very interesting. What hateful words did Vegeta say to Goku to shatter his hopes so much? Still, that taste has re-kindled his desires, and it seems he can bearly contain them anymore. Wonder what Yamcha's next move is.
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  • From NAnderson on October 18, 2009
    amazing first chapter :) I cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - meshala101 on October 17, 2009
    very interesting i can't wait for your update
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  • From ANON - * on October 16, 2009
    Nice one!
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  • From ANON - Rourinu on October 15, 2009
    Ooooo, good start to a good story! I always find love triangles to me so interesting, yet they're so hard to come by anymore. Excellent start, and I hope you update soon!
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  • From Orchideater on October 14, 2009
    Intriguing start! Vegeta and Yamcha working together to seduce Goku. I look forward to seeing how you handle this story. I wonder if Yamcha will really be so generous or if he will become jealous when (or if) Vegeta begins to leave him behind in favor of Goku.
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