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Reviews for Lamb Without Blemish [Discontinued]

By : hidaritoki
  • From DevilWoman on November 23, 2009
    continue this please!!!! I love it
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  • From Zofo on November 18, 2009
    I'm loving reading these diary entries and can't wait to find out how it all went wrong. They seem to have troubled Vegeta, especially the birth as he's afraid of losing Kakarot, but on the bright side, it's also given him the courage to confront his father. That' going to be some conversation!
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  • From Zofo on November 06, 2009
    I had never heard of DBZ Abridged but now I'm hooked, it's very funny :)

    Loved the musings of Tokata in the book, hope we get to read the rest. Vegeta's right, it does sound like they really loved each other at that point, shame something happened to change it :(
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  • From Kira on November 06, 2009
    Finally got all caught up with this story. Loving it so far. And you've officialy made me want to see DBZ abridged. Update again soon.
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  • From animeslave18 on November 03, 2009
    Oh my...you saw Dragonball Z abrigded, huh? That's hilarious stuff. Aren't the people dead on or close on the voices? The editing is great too. ^^ My favorite episode is when Nappa and Vegeta are on planet Arlia. ^^ 'Vegeta was a prison b*tch.' I love it. Oh, you should see Yu Yu Hakasho abridged. Even if you're not a fan, it's still hilarious. One of the guys off of DBZ abridged made it, he played Vegeta and Krillin. It's about as funny as DBZ abridged...maybe funnier. Anyways, this was a really good chapter. I'm glad you got a good idea on what to write. Too bad it was short. It's getting really interesting now. Oooo, I wonder...will Gratto get to meet Kakarot? ^^ That'd be interesting. I think there's more to Tokato's death than what was told, but I'll just have to see. I hope you update soon. :)
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on October 30, 2009
    wow good story so far. shame what happen to his mother though.
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  • From Zofo on October 29, 2009
    So that's what really happened to his bearer. Pretty nasty of the King, all over his disgust when the fight broke out at the rally. If your looking for ideas, what about a flashback from the kings point of view as to what occured then to make him so prejudice against third classes.

    Seems even more hopeless for Vegeta now, but I hope love finds a way.
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  • From animeslave18 on October 29, 2009
    I had a feeling that King Vegeta's bearer was a third class! I just knew it! It worries me that Vegeta has to suffer through the effects of his heat for so long, for only a couple times of the year. It sounds like torture, seems like it would be maddenning. Hm, well, you can have Vegeta confront his father or something related to that. Or you can have Kakarot do some research himself. ^^ I don't know I'm just ranting. Whatever will give you an idea of what you want to write.
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  • From animeslave18 on October 25, 2009
    I'm with Zofo. There's got to be a way for them to be together. I would say that they should mate or one of them get pregnant, but...Vegeta mentioned that was against the rules. I didn't expect Vegeta to see Kakarot during his heat. I was thinking that that was foolish, but he remained strong. Yeah, the bible seems to be filled with such oddities of language, but, it's got to be entertaining for something, right? Hehe, just kidding. ^^; Anyways, I wonder what'll happen next?
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  • From Zofo on October 25, 2009
    Oh I really hope Vegeta finds a loophole so they can be together.
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  • From Deathdeamon88 on October 24, 2009
    This is a really great story i really am enjoying it. keep on writting i can't see what happens next. ^.^
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  • From Zofo on October 22, 2009
    So now he knows he is the Prince now, and Vegeta now has to shake his hand, what will happen next? Please update soon as I'm dying to find out :)
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  • From animeslave18 on October 22, 2009
    Oh, a cliffhanger! I was expecting one. Alright I won't mention the bible verse this time, but i'm all eager now that Vegeta and Kakarot get to see each other again. ^^ I'm in suspense as well since you won't give any hints on who's the giver or bearer. :( But I can be patient. :)
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  • From animeslave18 on October 21, 2009
    Aw! Poor Kakarot! I'm glad though that they know what the other is feeling now. Still, that just makes them hurt more. Aw. I like the bible verse! ^^ I may say that every time I review, so...get used to it. It's sweet, but it seems like it's a little ahead of where you are. But, I get the idea. ^^ Anyways, can't wait to see how this affects them. I hope there's a happy ending! ^^
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  • From Zofo on October 20, 2009
    Liked that his chapter had some of Kakarot's thoughts in it. He seems very innocent on the subject of mating, blushing like that :) Glad though that after some thought he's denying he feels like that toward Vegeta. That's the first sign that he really does like him and absence makes the heart grow stronger as they say :)

    Oh the King is a bit cold isn't he, killing the bearer like that. Sounds like he's never known love :(

    Personally I hope Vegeta is the giver, I think he assumes he is and is certainly stronger at this point, but I'll look forward to see what you have in mind.
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