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Reviews for Barracks

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Sophie on January 04, 2015
    Best start to the new year ever!!

    I'm so excited! :D Very curious about Prince Vegeta recognizing Goten. So many theories running around my head!

    You've done such a great job, I'm so happy you're sticking with Barracks. :)
    I'm very curious also about if/how Goten and Trunks will hook up.
    And I honestly don't mind that much because the story is just that awesome!!

    Thankyou! I hope you have been well over the past year and had a good Christmas and New Year. :)

    - Sophie xx
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  • From ANON - Yaoi_Angel on January 04, 2015
    great chapter. finally getting to the action. i can't wait to see the next chapter. the story is flowing along great. please update soon. i'm on the edge of my seat from the excitement

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  • From TristaML on November 05, 2014
    I have read this slowly over the course of quite a few weeks and ever since I finished I have been patiently waiting. I don't think I ever left a review, but my neglect was not intentional. I must have wanted to say a thousand things but never quite thought I could properly put it all down, still I don't think I can, but oh well, here I go- the short version:

    I had originally avoided this story because it is so long and it caught my eye a little late in the game. Plus, even though I like the pairing of Trunks and Goten it was never my favorite. However, you are one of my favorite authors on this site and that is a big part of why I couldn't resist giving it a try. Once I began to read it, and even though it took some time, I didn't want to stop. After the opening chapter I kept wandering back to read the next one and the next one, until I was officially hooked. I know that it has taken you quite some time to write this and I don't want to rush you. I just wanted to let you know that it is a fantastic story. I am picky, and with this story you have made me quite satisfied. I can't figure out any of your plot twists and the mystery and suspense are killing me. I can see how you've grown as an author and I love it. I hope that you are working on the next installment of this story and I can't wait to see it on the new updates list.

    Sincerely and with patience,
    TristaML
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  • From ANON - Elisa Hazard on July 03, 2014
    Soooo excited for the next chapter!
    Keep them coming I'm dying in suspense :D
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  • From ANON - vegetalover12 on March 18, 2014
    Oh god...Oh Fucking God!!! Why did you left it in that part!!! Oh god how am i suppose to survive.. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN NEXT!!!!! Hurry up an give me another chapter... oh and sorry for my bad grammar i suck at writing, btw i am Spanish person!!!




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  • From ANON - Ava on February 13, 2014
    This is so well-written. I am ashamed to even call myself a writer compared to all this creativeness and well-theorized plottiness you've come up with.

    I think I know what happened with Kakarot and Chichi: She was probably an earthling who was stationed on Eden, shipped as a slave to the Saiyan race, meets the soldier Kakarot; he realizes the enslaved conditions she's under, feels compassion and liberates her to a remote region of Vegeta-sei to raise his two sons, Gohan and Goten....amiright? :D

    I'm so interested in Gohan's "ghost". He's like Goten's spirit guide, but kinda blasé about the whole "time is of the essence" and is a bit of a trickster. What is he? I'm thinking it's Kakarot's adoptive father, Gohan, but you haven't made much mention of the characters' backgrounds. Can't wait to read about them!
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  • From ANON - nancy103 on January 13, 2014
    This is still one of my favorite stories so when I saw an update, I smiled all morning long! Very interesting chapter that moved the plot along very well.
    You brought in all the major players and all that are needed are Vegeta and Trunks. I wonder if Bulma will make another appearance. And this Goku is great. Very serious and yet, knows when to not push the situation. And devious too!! Not often you meet a devious Goku! Thanks again for the great update!
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  • From Yaoi_Angel on January 02, 2014
    so happy to see the update. I can't wait to see what happens next. I keep thinking Trunks is gonna pop up on the station cause he found out about Goten using his name to go on the mission. can't wait to see the next chapter. as always, keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Sophie on January 01, 2014
    YAY ALMANDA!! :D and Mr Elite ooh it's getting to the good stuff!
    OMG please have Kakarott there when Goten and Trunks run into each other for the first time there!!
    Haha omg I'm too giddy about an update I squealed at work this is my favourite dbz fanfiction ever!

    I love you and your writing!!
    :D Sophie
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  • From ANON - achillona on October 21, 2013
    Awesome chapter! Very curious about Bardock Senior's reaction when me sees Reyn.
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  • From ANON - Sophie on October 16, 2013
    Woke up in the middle of the night wondering why the hell am I awake, do my routine phone check and BAM! Barracks update!
    I just about jumped out of my bed with excitement :D
    I really enjoyed this chapter! I'm going to miss Almanda, I hope she and Goten will meet again.
    Darren is brilliant and funny for a human thrown in the saiyan world.
    Thank you for the update :)
    I love this story and your writing.
    Now I'm going to be spending my time until the next update trying to decipher that dream..
    I wonder if you use dream symbols in direct relation to what they mean in our world? Like in our dream dictionaries..

    Much love! X
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  • From Yaoi_Angel on October 16, 2013
    I was soooo happy when I logged in and saw barracks at the top of the list again. I was jumping with joy. lol. great chapter. cant wait for the next one. keep up the magnificent work.
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on October 16, 2013
    This made my day!! As usual, very good chapter although leaving us on a cliff hanger as he about to see his father was a little mean ;-) But I like it! I also really enjoyed Goten's dream. Not sure what to make of it just yet as I am trying to figure out if the tea cups mean anything or not. And I like the human Darren! Good character development even though he hasn't been in the story that long and we might not even see him again. Just well written. Thanks again for updating!!
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  • From ANON - Mango on September 18, 2013
    I am anxiously awaiting the last few chapters so I can finally know what happens at the conference and what happens between Goten and Trunks. Please do update as soon as you can, I will check back on this story every few days or so until the end is posted.

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  • From ANON - Rinku on September 14, 2013
    Have you given up on this fic?
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