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Reviews for Barracks

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Rupee on May 27, 2013
    Hello, love your story. One of the best in my opinion.

    However, I do just want to ask if it is actually a GotenxTrunks story or if it is now a GotenxOC? It has been many chapters since anything Trunks related has even been mentioned. Maybe update the story description so as to not mislead people (only a suggestion).
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  • From Ava on May 25, 2013


    Oooooo I love where this is heading! Outer space beasties that act as parasites, working from the inside out....so much fun to read about. Now I'm definitely going to be on pins and needles for the next couple of chapters!

    You know, your writing has improved by leaps and bounds since you first started, its so amazing. When I read some of your other stories, the grammar was so all over the place that this story makes me think that it was written by a whole other author completely! You have a much stronger grasp on English sayings and phrasings now than a few years ago. I'm really attached to the characters in this story, even though you killed the best one off :/ so I can't wait to hear more this summer!
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  • From ANON - Sophie on May 23, 2013
    I get far too excited every time I see you have updated!!
    I'm so antsy to get my friends to read this but they refuse until its finished! >
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on May 22, 2013
    Another great chapter that moves along not only plot but also character relationships. Thank you thank you thank you for writing such a great fic!!! But now, why would they be called to "rescue" such a person? Is someone trying to get them all infected? Or is someone trying to delay them?? Looking forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From Nightwalkershadow on May 17, 2013
    Great job. I can't wait to tsee what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Sophie on May 03, 2013
    I loved it!
    Thank you for giving us such an amazing chapter again :)
    Those last few lines are priceless :D
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  • From Ava on April 02, 2013
    Lol, yeah I finished it two days later, wrote a review that was so angry, and decided to hold off on posting it but it went a little something like this: why the hell would you do that to Toharu you evil b--- and that's where I'm going to cut it. Really fell in love with your original characters, so great job on fleshing them out!


    For the whole of December and January I came back EVERY DAY to check and see if this story would be updated....and I was always disappointed :( so imagine my ecstatic jubilee when I clicked my bookmarks and saw a link to chapter 50. I, literally, smiled so hard I had tears in my eyes.

    I think this chapter really solidified Reyn as having a committed relationship with Goten and its going to be difficult when Goten chooses Trunks over Reyn.
    Saying that, there is also a strong pull for Almanda and Goten to get together, since her affections for him are quite obvious. It seems like a likely occurrence, you know one evening when they both share a drink and reminisce over a few alcoholic beverages, I could definitely see a hookup happening....Kyon as well...loljk

    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Sophie on April 02, 2013
    Squeee I loved it!!!
    So excited for the rest :D
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  • From ANON - Niu on March 19, 2013
    This is amazing, YOU are amazing. You created a world and you pulled me into it in a way that i can't simply let it go. It's perfect, god, i can't describe it. I need more, i've become addicted to it. I've been reading your story for days nonstop, always wishing to get home earlier so i could read a bit more. I just hope you still intend to update it... such a masterpiece shouldn't go wasted.
    Thank you very much for sharing your story. It inspired me and made my days brighter. I can't thank you enough and i really hope to read more of it. You are incredible.
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  • From ANON - Sophie on March 07, 2013
    Ok oh my god you are amazing and I love this story so much!!
    Please tell me you are continuing it? I am eagerly awaiting more!!
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  • From ANON - nighowl on February 14, 2013
    I hope you finish with this story i love your stories im sure i have read every dbz you have made this one is my favorite so far i hate it when an author starts a story and dosent finish i hope you plan to continue this i love long stories idk if you add another 49chapters or more i would be happy to read every word please keep up the excell work
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  • From Ava on January 17, 2013
    I'm only on part 24 but it is magical. I am seriously hooked on your writing. I have to admit that I was daunted by the exquisite length of not only each chapter but the whole saga you have created, but I really am glad I took a chance.

    The part where Trunks was all like, "Oh, I was just thinking that I wouldn’t mind spending the rest of my life trying to figure you out.” Had my milk been any further up my throat it would have been coming out my nose, I snorted so hard. I can't believe Trunks just proposed to Goten! How exciting!

    I really love the way you write and I am sorry I haven't reviewed earlier because this really deserves all the best and I sincerely hope that you do not get a case of the writer's block, as so many long sagas end up to the readers' great frustration, because I would be devastated. DEV-Ah-STATED!
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  • From ANON - asdf on December 21, 2012
    I have never been one to write reviews, much less ones of praise. I am solely a lurker and have been one for nearly ten years now. I'm here now to tell you to keep writing Barracks because I am very interested to see what happens next. I have never before been driven from the shadow to tell a writer that. Ever. Consider yourself important.
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  • From ANON - PeekaPika on October 16, 2012
    OMG thank you so much for continuing on with this story for so long! It is amazing! I have never read an AU as good as this one; your ideas are a wonderful twist on the tried-and-true universe, and the way the characters interact with each other is perfect. I love the depth of even your original characters. Also, thank you so much for confirming that Gohan's death was no accident! We have been waiting so long! It will be sad if Reyn gets killed in the battle, but honestly, even as much as I love him, Goten has to end up with Trunks... we all know it :) Anyway, i just wanted to leave you some random love, and encourage you to keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - peekapika on October 05, 2012
    I just wanted to drop you a line and let you know I think "Barracks" is amazing - one of the best AU's I've ever read, please, keep up the good work!
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