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By : MasterOfThebes
  • From corrinjade1 on May 21, 2017

    Wow, what a story! I really want to know what happens to trunks. Does his dad hurt him? Does Trunks bring Vegeta back to his senses? What about Bulma and Goku? Will they confront Vegeta? And Goten? Great story. Thank you so much for writing it. The suspension is killing me. lol.


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  • From Hunters_Dream on February 26, 2017

    Omg.... fucking amazing >.< BUT I NEED AN ENDING! PLEASE KEEP WRITTING!!!

     


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  • From ANON - jmm on April 20, 2016
    OMFG this story sooo good, I can't wait for you to finish this, I wanna know the ending! I want goku and bulma to be together in the end.please finish this story! Loved the lemons too
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  • From ANON - Jazz on October 29, 2011
    This story is AMAZING!!!! Seriously, as soon as I clicked on it, I couldn't stop reading it!! I was reading it for hours! It's a GREAT combo of how Goku is darker and slightly crazed, but is still KINDA his gentle, merry self. Well, with Bulma at least. I LOVE how things ended with Goku and ChiChi! I HATE THAT WOMAN!! I always felt like Goku could do SO much better. I must say, I kinda feel a little bad for Vegeta. Seeing as how Vegeta is portrayed as truly loving Bulma and he and Goku had a strong friendship, he actually trusted Goku. JUST PLEASE DON'T BE DONE WITH THIS STORY!!!! It's absolutely entertaining. I have to see how it ends. Please write more chapters, please!!!
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  • From ANON - mina on July 26, 2011
    Oh my GOD this is amazing. How enthralling!
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  • From ANON - jaclyn on March 25, 2011
    You MUST finish this story, lol. it is awe some so far...
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  • From ANON - Ulrike on October 01, 2010
    Whoo! Great chapter! It's sad and so dramatic. Vegeta and Goku's friendship is so strong here, so it depresses me that this is happening to them. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - rosalie on September 17, 2010
    OMG!!! I so hope U'll update it! I must know what will happen next!!! Goku and Bulma are my favourite couple and I hope they're gonna be together at the end ;)
    luv ya :*
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  • From Ulrike on September 07, 2010
    Whooaaa! This is crazy! ...I can't believe Vegeta could have killed Bura. I hope it's some kind of terrible mistake!! But I am anxious to see the fight between the two. I can't tell who's angrier. Ooo...so much excitement!
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  • From ANON - Kitten on August 23, 2010
    You have to continue this story. I loved vegeta beating goku. But I am so curious on whether the baby is really dead or not.
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  • From ANON - taixi on August 22, 2010
    poor vegeta :( He puts his trust in one single person and she betrays him out of loneliness. It's sad that he killed his own daughter (assuming he didn't actually steal her away ... the body is missing after all) and those innocent employees. But still at least he now knows the real situation.
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  • From ANON - Amy on August 17, 2010
    Cant wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Ulrike on July 13, 2010
    Oh wow...so intense. Please don't leave me hanging here! This story gets crazier and crazier. Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From MaJig on May 10, 2010
    I'm not usually into Bulma/Goku stories, but I really did enjoy this one. I love the idea of how the darkness came to Goku. Wonderful idea. I would really like to see this as more than a one shot. I think it would work out really well. I hope you decide to write more, I'll definitely read it.
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  • From RedScythe2003 on February 13, 2010
    Oh man. I'm as stunned as Goku that Vegeta didn't know it was him... and I love the twist! Great work. I hope there's more coming!
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