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Reviews for Broken In Pieces [Discontinued]

By : hidaritoki
  • From JubblesBubbles on December 30, 2010
    I loved this series!

    It's like AU but remains thruthful to the Saiyans' traditions (or what I think they should be)

    I want to read more, of course, could you email me when you post the next serie? jubblesbubbles@hotmail.com
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  • From Zofo on November 23, 2010
    Sorry for the late review - family tragedy :(

    So cool that Kakarot could get to Vegeta via instant transmission, and I understand why Kakarot doesn't want to mate yet. I'm glad Vegeta is accepting his loss of the crown, but worry the king will find them somehow.

    Can't wait for the sequel :)
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  • From mgardner on July 14, 2010
    A very good story. I was in on it since "Lamb Without a Blemish." I do wish that you keep writing because it is very interesting and I would love to see what happens to the couple. =P
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  • From animeslave18 on July 03, 2010
    Hehe. Yeah, I didn't know that I was the only one reviewing now. O.o I'll try and review more. Yay! Kakarot got to see Vegeta at last! *dances, then looks at the title and giggles at the irony* However there's still the issue of bringing him back to life. >< Hehe, it's a little odd knowing that Vegeta got to keep his body because of the 'good deeds' he's done. Though, it's true in this story, but not in others. X) Looking forward to more. ^^
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  • From animeslave18 on July 01, 2010
    Woa. O.o For a minute there I thought Kakarot was losing it. Ooooo how is Vegeta able to communicate with Kakarot from the afterlife? He couldnt be with King Kai...could he? O.o I guess there's only one way to find out. X)
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  • From animeslave18 on April 21, 2010
    O.o oooo, some passionate action! :3 Too bad it didn't last very long...*silently curses Raditz for interrupting* Oh, but he'll be taken soon as well, huh? :) Wonder who that will be? O.o Yeah, i think i understand what you mean...that chapter could've been longer, but it seemed to be as long as the rest of your chapters. Not to worry though, you seem to be updating quickly lately. ^^ The ideas must be coming to you...(ugh, wish they'd come to me v.v). Anyways, always eager for more of that creativity of yours. ^^
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  • From animeslave18 on April 18, 2010
    O.o Bardock and Gratto...wasn't expecting that. But that's good. Now there's another couple that we can focus on while they get Vegeta back. ^^ I wonder if King Vegeta has found out that his son is dead...and if he has, will he care? :/ Maybe he'll wish him back instead of Metga. >_> Because, who wants to wish back their son's killer? Though, he was family too...and Vegeta was planning on mating a third-class...so maybe he'll wish back Metga instead of his own son. That's just heartless. Then again, these are mere theories...i'll have to wait and see what happens. ^^
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  • From on April 16, 2010
    Glad to see you were able to write a longer chapter and loved the ending to this chapter. :)
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  • From animeslave18 on April 10, 2010
    Wow, you updated quickly! And you're right, that verse is very fitting to the chapter. ^^ Hooray for Earth! ^^ That'll be so perfect for Kakarot and Vegeta to go to...they can live in peace there. Unless the King finds out where they are. :/ (And if he brings back Metga. *growls*). I just hope that Earth still has the dragonballs. -.- Hm, I wonder who gave him the message to go to Earth? :/ Maybe I'll find out.
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  • From on April 10, 2010
    They're going to Earth?! Sweet, I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From animeslave18 on April 07, 2010
    Ah! That's not right! I was soooo not expecting that! :( I shall kill whoever destroyed the Namekians! (And whoever took the dragonballs >_>). *Sighs* I guess our poor Kakarot must wait for his mate. v.v The King will be next on my hit list if he brings back Metga. -_- Short chappy, but I understand. ^^ Can't wait for a longer chapter! O.o
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  • From on April 07, 2010
    I like your story and I hope your life calms down and things get better.
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  • From Dragon7 on April 07, 2010
    Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
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  • From DevilWoman on April 03, 2010
    more more more more more more more more more more more more more xD I like this beginning you have to continue it!! I will be showing time to time to see if you update this sequel xD I love it and you know it don't torture me by making me wait T_T update soon
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  • From Bluesake on February 27, 2010
    Can't wait for the update! I wonder if he will bring back vegeta's bearer as well. >< Looking forward to seeing what happens.
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