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Reviews for GWH SS 5: Incubus Lessons

By : shinigamiinochi
  • From uniqueindividual on June 24, 2010
    That was hot! Poor Dou, though. Quatre shouldn't be so much of a meanie.
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  • From priscel on June 17, 2010
    *nods* story is very hot, and poor Duo's the main entertainment. Maybe he should speak up and tell... before the sex... that he's hurting and doesn't like certain things. You also called Duo a mortal, then called him a eternal... but if he can die without feed then, isn't a sort of mortal, just with a longer life span?
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  • From Aestas on June 16, 2010
    That was really hot. Seriously, hot. But it just doesn't sit right with me, plotwise. I really hope you don't get offended, and I mean this completely constructively, not derrogatory in any way.

    Duo is a love slave, essentially, willing, yes, but completely pathetic. He objects, but his master doesn't care, he does it anyway. Quatre claims to be doing this for Duo's own good, but he's not limiting how many times he can get off from it. Its not a mutual competetion of stamina its a dominant limiting his submissive unfairly. Most doms do that as punishment (and not for such great periods of time, either). What has Duo done to deserve that? Nothing, its just a whim of Quatre's. Q claims its a partnership, but then he puts a collar on him? Because its cute on him? Even if it was for protection from his elven kind, he wouldn't have had to put it on him, yet. They are in the middle of nowhere.

    Duo was born a demon, born with claws and fangs and released onto the world to fend for himself. He would have had to be strong enough to survive, and yet he just rolls over and becomes a fucktoy.

    Your writing is good, no errors that stop the flow or anything. The concept is pretty original, and I like the collision of elves v. demons, but demons really shouldn't be so cuddly, in my opinion. Like I said, you're lemon was really hot, and you're a really talented writer, but I just hope you end up giving Duo a backbone, eventually.
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  • From uniqueindividual on June 15, 2010
    well that was incredibly hot and I look forward to more. :)
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  • From ANON - Shotadolita on April 24, 2010
    OOHH!! That was so hot!! I hope you continue soon!! PLEASE *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Djargo on March 28, 2010
    I'm so glad you posted this here. I love my G-boys! Incubus Duo and high elf Quatre are an extremely HOT couple. Damn, I love a commanding Quatre. It will be great to see this story continued. I wanna know what happens when Duo hits elf land^_^. I bet some interesting situations come up:).
    I hope this also means you will be continuing your original version too. I really enjoyed that story and hope you post another chapter of Lilu adventures *looks on imploringly with puppy eyes*. Keep up the awesome writing.
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  • From Aestas on March 28, 2010
    Ok, so I know you addressed the "big busted succubus" issue in a sentence snippet, but before that...I had this really fun little "Shouldn't Duo be a succubus instead of an incubus" thought because he's taking it instead of toppin. Then he'd be a male succ...that amused me. Thought I'd share the funny/twisted way my mind works every now and again.

    Anywho. this was fabulously hot. I had a blast reading it, and I'm so looking forward to the next pairing you've posted. Yum.
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  • From ANON - fan on March 28, 2010
    yes your making this a stand alone fic with lot more chaptors ^_^ im so happy
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