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Reviews for Sands Of Time

By : trabeck89
  • From TracyGirard on February 24, 2011
    couldn't stop reading it but I got a bit confused at the end.
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  • From Simoko on July 19, 2010
    @_@ i really wish you had written this in standard story form, instead of how you did it as if you were RPing with someone. I've completely lost interest in this within about 10 minutes because of that. It seems like a good story, and the people reviewing like it; but I cant follow because of how you chose to write it. I definitely suggest trying story form.

    --Android22
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  • From Dragon7 on July 17, 2010
    I hoope you write a sequel to this story.
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  • From UndeadSymphony on July 16, 2010
    Loved this fic also :D Can't wait for the next fic you write ^^
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  • From 66Hiei08 on July 16, 2010
    Ummm Chapters 7 and 8 are the same. Just letting you know.
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  • From UndeadSymphony on July 14, 2010
    I enjoyed the recent update :D Can't wait for the next chapter :3
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  • From mgardner on July 14, 2010
    I am currently loving this story, though it would be better and more interesting if you wrote it in actual story format not name and talk, and * for action. That gets boring, and for some people annoying, at one point in time. You know what I'm saying? I'm not saying that you have to fix up with the chapters with this, I'd just advise to start writing as such. Good job, though, and keep writing.
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  • From Dragon7 on July 13, 2010
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From UndeadSymphony on July 04, 2010
    I liked the new chapter a lot :D This story is beginning to grow on me XD Can't wait for the next update
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  • From Dragon7 on June 29, 2010
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From UndeadSymphony on June 23, 2010
    Loved this so far. :3 Can't wait to read more
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  • From Solo on June 22, 2010
    *whistles* Sexy! I love Trunks and Vegeta's relationship. I can't wait to see how Trunks reacts to Bulma now that he's so involved with Vegeta.
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  • From Solo on June 21, 2010
    Aw, Trunks! This is such an interesting story! At first I was a little put off with the format (no quotation marks and whatnot), but as I read, it just didn't matter, because I like the plot so much. In addition to a great storyline, you seem to pay attention to realistic details, which just add to the fic as a whole. I can't wait for an update!
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  • From animeslave18 on June 20, 2010
    This is a very entertaining read! Some parts have me where i can't read anymore, but i do. :) That part with 17 was ruthless, but it seems inevitable with Gohan's fate. v.v I hope Trunks can make things right in the past. It was irresponsible for him to leave Vegeta emotionally confused like that. :/ Even more so when he started it in the first place...he should really think before he acts. However, i do understand his motives. :) Another thing i love about this is that the chapters are super long! It's been a long while since i've ran into a story like this. ^^ I do hope you continue writing this...you have so much inspiration! I'm almost envious. ^^
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  • From Dragon7 on June 15, 2010
    This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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