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Reviews for Reborn

By : animeslave18
  • From ANON - BettyBest2 on November 16, 2013
    I really love this story!!! It is very well written and I love the idea of this story. I love how innocent Goku is, it's just so cute. Vegeta isn't as innocent as Goku, but he's still not as experienced, which makes sense because he's 15, and I like how you portray him at this age. I really hope you update this soon :)
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  • From ANON - vegetalover12 on November 09, 2013
    Love it definitely you are awesome... sincerely you are awesome... i also love all of your other fic like the new kid in town..aw i love it ... and fate another of my favorite... i was wondering if you are going to up date on those and other one that i don't remember the name but know that i love theme.. anyway..please up date...
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  • From Zofo on July 30, 2011
    Oh that was good! Both exploring each other and trying things out. It can only go up from there :)
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  • From mjmusiclover on July 16, 2011
    ahhhh it's very beautifully well written, i thought the intimate scene with goku & vegeta was really adorable :D
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  • From mjmusiclover on July 09, 2011
    ahh awesome stuff, it's really well written and i really love goku's naivete, it's really adorable
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  • From bitemeslowly on April 09, 2011
    I really really like this story..I love the idea of them being teenagers..I love it! They're so innocent..n not..:D but I really enjoy reading this..you are a great writer..and I can't wait to read more of this! Sooo excited to see who will initiate it :) I'm just excited to read more..period. So, I hope to read more soon bc this story is soo awesome already..you're very creative and an excellent writer :)
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  • From Zofo on February 13, 2011
    Yeah sorry animeslave. I haven't been around due to family illness and bereavement, but am back now.

    So cute in the plane with Vegeta laughing, I was laughing too, and the bit where Goku wrapped his tail, not to mention the candyfloss moment was just so awwww :)

    Loved your little 'Next time on Dragonall' in the footnotes, heard it in my head. As for who will win? All bets are off now Vegeta is there!
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  • From Dragon7 on February 09, 2011
    I can’t wait to read what happens next.
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  • From Zofo on November 21, 2010
    Loved how stubborn Vegeta was during and at the end of the spar, he still has no idea how strong Goku really is.

    So sweet how neither of them know what to do to each other, it's so awkwared but so much fun to read :)

    I think I would like to see King Picollo in the story, it would show Vegeta how strong Goku is.
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  • From Zofo on November 18, 2010
    Read till chapter 4 now, still wonderful :)

    Think Vegeta is going to get a shock as to how strong Goku is. Hope he teaches him to fly but knowing Goku even if he doesn't Goku will pick it up anyway.

    I like the way Vegeta doesn't know what the smell and warmth mean yet, and look forward to when he does. Hope Goku feels the same :)
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  • From Zofo on November 17, 2010
    Only read chapters one and two so far but am loving it :)

    They are totally in character so far and their interactions are very funny. Love how Vegeta is already planning to teach him Saiyan ways and plans to be in control, so like Vegeta, and Goku is just like he was in Dragonball, all niave, inquisitive, and happy go lucky :)
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  • From KillJoy2510 on October 07, 2010
    I like the idea of Vegeta and Goku being bonded somehow, either because they're the same species or because they're just drawn to each other. Their antics in the last 2 chapters have been way too cute. Goku already knows how to sense people, right? I wonder what Vegeta's ki looks and feels like to him. Bathtub scene was adorable too, at least until the tail-molesting part by Goku, then it was oh-crap-what-the-hell-have-you-gotten-yourself-into-Goku. I wasn't expecting that. So a tail-grab is an automatic on-switch to Saiyajin libido. And you are evil for that dream-lemon/lime lol! Tho I almost didn't want it to go on because I love how cute and innocent they are...at least how innocent Goku is. Despite my usual story-topics, cuteness is always welcome when it's done right, like in your story. Looking forward to the next ^_^

    Also, loved the part when Freeza decides not to kill everyone in that department because it would be too difficult to get replacements, lol.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2010
    You did a great job with penning Kakarot's dialogue. It was spot on. In fact, I think you did a great job with all the characters.
    I am enjoying k/v interactions [usually I get annoyed]. I look forward to reading how the relationship develops especially with the possibility of Frieza's arrival.

    Random Rambling: Ever heard of Katekyo Hitman Reborn? Dear Lord, I was laughing my butt off when I saw the title of your story. I instantly thought Tsuna (Sawada) in nothing but his undies -head lit on fire- screaming "Reborn!"
    I said to myself, "Just for that image, I have to click this story!" and I'm not sorry I did. It was an enjoyable read.

    ~WR
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  • From yaoilover34 on September 09, 2010
    wonderful story I sooooooo wanted Vegeta and Goku to get it on rigth then and there in the bedroom but oh well , maybe next chapter, please let it come soon, please keep writing this deliciousness!!!!
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  • From KillJoy2510 on September 02, 2010
    The thoughts were understandable to me. I really like this chemistry between Goku and Vegeta--since they both just met without any background knowledge of the other. And Goku is adorable lol. Really looking forward to where you take this ^_^
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