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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : 2dragonkat
  • From ANON - animeslave18 on March 08, 2013
    Ahhhh! Goten! Nooooos! O.o That was terrible! >< I didn't expect something so violent...especially to a minor character :/ then again, it happened all the time in the series. Aw man, I knew the shit was gonna hit the fan soon, I just wasn't prepared for it. Aw. Goten. That's sucks so much. :/ Now its starting to remind me of Sin City. *shudders* Awww, now I feel sorry for Vegeta. Wait, what does he mean by two messages? O.o Oh nos! What's he gonna do to our Saiyan Prince? :o ugh i'm worried now. I don't know if I wanna read this anymore! >< Nah I will. I'll just...cry while I do. >.> You know, I can wait on the update, but at the same time, I need to know what happens...take your time. :)
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  • From dragon96 on February 14, 2013
    You've got me at the edge of my seat now! Update quickly... We have to know what happens! :)

    Amazing job writing this story, as always!
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on February 12, 2013
    yay! an update! ^^ it made my day :) so excited for more! such a tease though, waiting until the next chapter to see what's happening to Vegeta. Ah well. I know you'll finish this story. I have high hopes.
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on February 01, 2013
    *squees* I'm so glad you're keeping up with this story and not giving up yet. ^^ I can't wait to see what happens next! Just when I have a theory, it gets shot, so...I guess I really am gonna have to wait and find out what happens. O.o So much is happening though, it keeps it interesting. :) Ugh don't talk about the ending. >< I never think about the ending...even when writing a story. Well, okay, I have to think about the ending when 'writing' it but when reading it's always far from my mind hehe. Then again I'm not the one writing...I hope that wasn't confusing. >.> Anyways, I know how it feels, you wanna get the story over with, but at the same time, you don't want to lose what you've got going on in the story. The way the characters interact with each other is still sweet and the way they worry over each other is almost tear jerking. When the Saiyans first arrived, I liked how they interacted with Broly and the King. It was intense and...sweet at the same time. x) I guess hehe. I hope its the same with the Bakulans, but more fierce of course 'cuz those guys mean business. O.o I wonder what the other Bakulans are gonna think or do when they realize they're fearless leader is betraying their goal? Then again, if they mutinied, then there wouldn't be much of a climax. Ooooo, I don't know how you're gonna do it hun, but I know you can. Good luck. :)
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  • From ANON - Dragon96 on January 30, 2013
    Fantastic! This is such a great story... And this chapter was particularly good! :D I love how vague everything was in the beginning and how you gradually filled in the details as the chapter progressed. The growing family is wonderful, along with all the drama that seems to be growing with it! :)

    Thank you again for sharing your story!
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  • From ANON - Miranda on January 29, 2013
    I cannot tell you how much I love this series of yours. It's one of my favorite things. I've read all of what you've posted in this series several times. And I'm SO excited that you're updating this with more frequency. I didn't mind the long waits before because I loved your updates but now it's just like an early present in my email when I get an alert that you updated.(I have Survival of the Fittest on alert on fanfiction.net then come here to read it.) Now I'm getting more frequent presents. :) I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on January 12, 2013
    oh man...i was so eager for the update, i actually went to fanfiction.net to see if you updated there first and noticed that there was one more chapter there than here, only to realize it was the same one. >< i haven't been reading it on there, so I don't know what all you've done with the chapters...but that was a big tease and it was cruel. >.> Even though I know you had no intention of doing that...or did you? O.o are your chapters getting shorter or am i going crazy? :/ i rather it be the latter. O.o eh, i already know i'm crazy. Anyway, I don't want you to feel 'too' rushed. I mean, i think we all would like to be able to read the chapters hehe. Meaning there being many typos...which is fine! O.o Everyone makes mistakes...er, no mistakes... O.o *coughs awkwardly* uuum...i'll shut up now. >.> And stop mentioning that the ending is coming! I already know it is! >< Everything's gotta end sometime, but you're making it sound like it's coming soon and i'm getting all...fidgety. :/ cruel...you're just cruel...I'm loving it so much right now, I can't wait for more and you're awesome!! :o
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  • From ANON - Dragon96 on January 09, 2013
    Thank you for continuing to update your story! As always the plot is very good and so is your writing!

    Although I'm sad to hear it's almost reached completion...I'm also happy that we'll get to see what happens! So many good stories go unfinished....

    Thanks again and happy writing!
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on January 09, 2013
    Ohhhh. So it's Tarble and Brolly. :D Oh nos! He's already mated! O.o But it looks like you have a solution to that already. Oh man. What's gonna happen next? >< All kinds of scenarios are goin through my head. Aww, I don't want anyone to die. :'( Whether it be Vegeta and Goku or Tarble and Brolly. Besides, those two haven't even been mated yet and they just entered the scene. Perhaps it'll be later in the future? :/ A bond has already been broken, but is it a different bond? Ugh, it's a puzzle. They're interesting, but not when you're dying to know the results. I'm lovin iiiiiit. :3
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  • From dragon96 on January 02, 2013
    This is a good chapter! You did a great job of introducing the new characters...and the bond killing drug! That's a nice twist!

    Keep up the great writing! And happy new year! :)
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on December 29, 2012
    Just found your story and I just love it! Thanks for updating and keep up the great work!
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  • From dragon96 on December 27, 2012
    You updated! :D
    I'm so happy to read the new chapters! They're fantastic and I can't wait for more!

    Thank you and merry christams! :)
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on December 25, 2012
    Oh my gawd I've been waiting forever!! >< This story is like crack...I 'needs' it like I need air! So...I think...King Vegeta is the dead man in the chair...annnnd...either Trunks and Goten or Gohan and Piccolo's kid is the leader who is born. O.o Either that or it is Vegeta and it is that obvious. Man, its like a test. I don't know whether to go for the obvious answer or for a more complex one. :/ I would think it'd be the latter, because you are one of the best writers out there and must throw everyone in a loop...instead of giving us the answer right off. Damn it...I guess I'll just have to wait another year for you to update. >< That might be an exaggeration, but that's what it feels like, okay? >.> *sighs in envy* I absolutely LOOOOOVE your writing. It's soooo adorable the way you have all the characters connected and it's absolutely sweet the way they act with one another and the lemons are sooooo extremely tasty. :3 I feel like I've formed a bond with the characters and I just know I'll bawl if anything happens to them. Aw, maybe it is Vegeta. :/ And...the mate that Brolly sees is, perhaps, another son he has? Ugh, its gonna drive me insane! >< I won't rush you 'cuz I know perfection can't be rushed, but please do update before another year goes by. :/
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  • From ANON - Z on November 23, 2012
    Are Gohan and Piccolo going to have a cub? And what about Trunks and Goten?
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  • From ANON - Stacey on August 17, 2012
    I wasn't sure about this story when I started reading the first one but I'm glad I stuck it out. Just wondering though if it is still being updated?
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