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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : 2dragonkat
  • From Zofo on December 31, 2010
    What a wonderful reafformation of the bond! A joy to read :)

    Glad Raditz is now accepted by all that matter, but engine muck in that amount of hair! Poor Raditz :(
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  • From ANON - DragonBallZYaoi92 on December 27, 2010
    YAY!!! I was soo happy I got to read what happens! Cnt wait for more. Keep up the good work, and thank u for letting us knw why it took so long. I can understand about being busy. Thank u!!
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  • From ANON - lamb0luv3r on December 26, 2010
    Omg come on don't leave it like that I spend three months trying to find this series again and you leave it . Oh wait that was November of this year so your only nearly TWO months late. Hurry up and post please
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  • From ANON - DragonBallZFan101 on December 09, 2010
    I loved it!! Cnt wait for more!!! I love ur work!!! Hope to read soon, and have a merry christmas!! ^___^
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  • From Zofo on December 05, 2010
    Really enjoying your new story :)

    Was shocked and saddened at Keigo's blindness but thrilled he can sense the world now and is a seer.

    Phew! I really thought Goku had lost it there and was going to rape Vegeta, glad he calmed down and now understands Raditz is no threat, but his emotions are still uncontrolled so it's a little worrying.

    I was thrilled by the inclusion of Raditz and thought it was sweet that Gohan now has someone who understands what he went through. Good that Picollo understands too. Very curious as to how Raditz was brought back to life and by whom and why. Suppose I was just have to wait for you to tell me :)

    Looking forward to reading more :)
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  • From ANON - kagecat on November 25, 2010
    WHERE IS THE REST?! D8

    I mean... i'm not yelling D: because i
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  • From ANON - Dragon on November 15, 2010
    I love this story I hope that Radditz finds someone special and that Goku and Vegeta have more babies, Were are Goten and Trunks? I look forward to your next update!!
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  • From ANON - dragon96 on November 15, 2010
    Hi! It's been awhile since my last review, but I think that your story is coming along really well so far! :) I especially like how you've re-introduced Radditz! I hope he's able to find some happiness....Poor saiyan...He's so sad! Maybe he could wish for his baby back with the dragon balls, since the miscarriage wasn't brought on by natural causes. :( And I am curious about how Radditz came back to life himself... hmmnnn...very interesting.

    I'm very happy with how things are going so far for poor Gohan and Piccolo. I think having them and Radditz bonding over their shared experiences was a good idea. It's sad, but sweet. :) And I'm glad that Piccolo didn't overreact to Radditz being alive! I was a little worried that you might have him do something really stupid. This version of him I think was much more in character. :)

    Poor Vegeta and Goku! Goku's complete loss of control was really terrible for both of them...! I have a bad feeling that I might know the general direction that this is going to head into.... I'm gonna cross my fingers that it doesn't include character death.... But, considering your story is incorporating Darwin’s theory...Well, where is a story without some drama? ;)

    Thanks for a good read! I can't wait to see more! :)


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  • From ANON - Anomlov on November 10, 2010
    I just read your entire fanfic and I love it! I can't wait to see what you have planned for the meeting with Raditz and Piccolo :) Really an awesome fic!
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  • From ANON - Dragon on November 01, 2010
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
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  • From ANON - miki on October 30, 2010
    I'm really glad you're continuing the series, but where are goten and trunks?
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  • From ANON - HighschoolChik2010 on October 24, 2010
    OMG!!! I loved it! I was NOT expected to see Raditz!!! So cool!! Cnt wait for more. I'm gald ur feeling better. Thank u!!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - kougaluv on October 24, 2010
    this story is ....well its NOTHING SHORT OF AMAZING!! do u know i cant read any other dbz stroies cause they just dont add up to this one! this story is amazing it has plot its has great sex and its has my fav pairngs gohan/piccolo, goku/vegeta, trunks/goten and now hopefully nappa/radditz omg u are an amazing writer and keep up the good work i mean wow this story is amazing i would pay to read this. and good luck on ur school i to am i school right now i know how hard it can be writing and doing homework. keep up the amazing work
    your loyal fan
    kougaluv
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  • From navajo on October 24, 2010
    Wow I really wasn't expecting Rad in the story but I love how you brought him in. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Stednie0514 on October 23, 2010
    Oh I was so happy to see an update for this truly epic and great fanfic! Plus the Piccolo/Gohan when you add them because Piccolo is my favorite character. And such a wonderful twist to it by adding Radditz. I can't wait to read the next chapter in a few days. Keep up the great work and I hope school goes well for you. I'm sure it must be hard to juggle it all.
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