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Reviews for Vegeta\'s Victory

By : crashcrashcrash25
  • From ANON - rurutiaa on March 20, 2011
    Ah, this is lovely~ Very descriptive! Aw, Goku died at the end... very sad, but quite effective :3

    I love the way you've portrayed Vegeta in this as well! Keep writing :)
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  • From KillJoy2510 on March 17, 2011
    o_o Omg why didn't I see this sooner?! I. LOVE. EVIL. VEGETA. he doesn't get enough play. awesome fic.
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  • From ANON - Kelsie~ on March 11, 2011
    kjhsdf This is the firt fanfiction I've read that Kakarot actually gets killed after Vegeta's finished, which is honestly how I think it would go, especially in this sort of AU universe, which I'm assuming takes place on planet Vegeta, as Kakarot has his tail, and other things. I could be wrong though.

    Either way, it was pretty awesome. Kept me intrigued the whole time.
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  • From ANON - jaclyn on March 10, 2011
    That was awesome! You need to write more stories :)
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  • From PrinceJiita on March 06, 2011
    Nice story, well written and easy to read. I just feel bad for poor Kakarotto dying in the end. But, hey, that made the victory complete.

    P.S.: Thank you for your review on my story. I'm glad to see that I'm not the last DBZ writer here that is active. I hope to read more form you and I will try to update my own story asap.
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  • From Zofo on February 09, 2011
    Oh no, poor Goku! Nasty nasty Prince :(

    Good rape fic :)
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  • From ANON - Rinrins on January 13, 2011
    What the heck is 'twindling'?? XP! I meant dwindling.
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  • From ANON - Rinrins on January 13, 2011
    Bawww! I can't believe he killed Goku! .... BAWWWW!!!

    Aside from that sad ending, I think you did a great job for your first DBZ fic. Especially considering you thought yourself to be rusty. I'm really looking forward to more from you! It's always nice to see new writers in this fandom. They seem to be twindling!
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