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By : KillJoy2510
  • From Anzi on April 11, 2011
    Well, I'd like to start this off by saying that I hardly EVER review ANY story I may come across on either here or FFnet. I don't tend to read much anymore since the quality of writings has decreased. And I came across your stories purely by accident durring a misspelled search in google, which led me to one of your stories.

    I'm a very big fan of Vegeta and anything that has to do with him, and I found you had a few stories directed around him. SO I decided to read them ALL. I was so pleased to finally be able to read something I rather enjoyed, just let me say. In fact, I enjoyed them so much I saved them in Word in fear you might one day remove them from here. I also have your Author page bookmarked for faster viewing.

    Words can not express my thanks for the amazing writings you have posted here, and I can only hope that you continue with your Vegeta-centric fanfictions.
    This particular one well...I can't say I was excited about the concept, but curious because I knew you could write well. And of course you made me enjoy it with your writing skills once again! I thought the characters were, for the most part, very in character. I liked that I could see it happening in my dirty little mind and it didn't feel OOC.

    And now that you've put this pairing in my head, I'd like to ask you a question, because your E-Mail is hidden and/or I'm an idiot and can't message you because I don't know my way around this site. Would you mind terribly if I borrowed this concept you have of this pairing, and write my own fanfiction in a similar context? It's not going to be like your wonderful piece here, but it will bear a likeness to it in the sense that Ginyu is in Goku's body.

    Of course I could never outshine you in your talent. I only wish to get this urge to write a similar scene out so I can stop dreaming about it. Hah.
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  • From PrinceJiita on April 10, 2011
    Wow, that was really great and I'm so happy you will add even more chapters! I'm so looking froward to it! And Vegeta deserved to kill Ginyu. Heck, he deserved to kill all of them! Keep up the great work!
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  • From saiyanb on April 10, 2011
    "23,000! Hahahahah.... "Wait-what?"

    B, can easily picture that scene. Poor Vegeta, didn't have any faith in himself till Goku 'showed' him. I can see a lot of self hatred forming due to that. Like the emotional twist of Vegeta shutting off and imagine it was really kakarot he was with; a small dark thrill, tho it didn't seem like you put any physical pleasure in there for him. I can only imagine how destroyed Vegeta would be if he's allowed himself to enjoy it and worst yet if Goku had seen him do it. But, then Goku's thoughts after might be interesting and mixed.

    Wonder just how he 'felt' after getting his body back: 'Oh, wow! Owe! Wow! Owe!

    The flash back was dark, I think Vegeta would do a lot to protect his self imagine. I think he would take pity poorly. I can almost see his hatred of Goku based off the fact that Goku knew about his past.
    Hoping you'll give us an insight into Goku's thoughts, afterwards, in the future where ever you decide to pick back up. Time might give Goku time to digest and think (if you're the type that believes Goku can have deep thoughts ;p).

    Looking forward to the conclusion. Thanks for the read so far.
    b-chan
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  • From TheGreatChickenbone on March 28, 2011
    Why do I enjoy Vegeta's torture? I don't know.
    But I do very much enjoy this.
    Can't wait to see what will happen from here.
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  • From PrinceJiita on March 28, 2011
    Man, what a great chapter! I loved every moment of it and I'm really looking forward to what comes next. Great story, great way of telling it!
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  • From Zofo on March 27, 2011
    Wonder how Goku thinks Vegeta can stop Ginyu, even if he doesn't know how to use all his power, he's still too much for Vegeta. Felt so sorry foor Vegeta having to do it in front of Goku but glad there was a hint that Goku desires Vegeta.
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  • From Zofo on March 23, 2011
    Glad Vegeta is putting up such a struggle but will it all be in vain and how will Goku react. Ooo can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From saiyanb on March 18, 2011
    Hi B here,
    nice twist. Enjoying the angst factor. Man, bet that's quite the mind fuck, seeing your straight self, pinning and molesting another guy. Wonder how big the bill will be for therapy?
    Looking forward to seeing how this will eventually end. If it's going to be all angst or if your planning a relationship between GokuXVegeta. I can easily see either.
    Will keep an eye out for more.
    ja ne
    b-chan
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  • From PrinceJiita on March 17, 2011
    I'm so happy you have added a new chapter! And what a great one! But now you need to update fast because I am so curious what comes next! Will Goku be able to stop Ginyu from carrying out his evil deeds? Will Ginyu have his way with Vegeta? Or will Vegeta pass out for a moment, Goku and Ginyu switch back and Goku has his way with Vegeta? 'cause there is a golden opportunity for the always so nice Goku: DO something horrible and blame it on Ginyu! Okay, my imagination is running wild here, lol
    Anyway, I love the story, and I am very happy you updated. I need more!
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  • From crashcrashcrash25 on March 16, 2011
    more please. :)

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  • From ANON - myamya on March 12, 2011
    MORE D8
    m-more please xD;;
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  • From saiyanb on March 11, 2011
    Hi B here,
    enjoying the twisted plot of this fic so far. I've noticed your works tend to be on the dark side. I think it would have been interesting if Vegeta was still ingorant that Ginyu had Goku's body, if Ginyu had toyed with him mentally a little that might have been interesting. Althought telling Vegeta that he has a power level of 180,000 (I think) with quite the mind fuck. Then there's the issue of Ginyu not knowing how to use Goku's body, well when it comes to doing 'that' I guess it's univeral, ne? Wondering if you're going to bring in Jess for this plot, he was still alive when Ginyu switched bodies I think.
    Looking forward to reading where you go with this. Will keep an eye out for updates.
    ja ne
    b-chan
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  • From ANON - Zarahai on March 10, 2011
    holy shet i wanna read more and about that fanart i MUST see it please psot a linkage :D pleases?
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  • From PrinceJiita on March 09, 2011
    Wow, that is a great story! I am so looking forward to the next part. I love to see Vegeta struggle, but I almost love it more when he struggles in vain....wow, I am pretty mean I guess.
    I'm glad we both seem to like dominant Kakarot.
    I want to say thank you for the reviews you gave me and I'm sure to read more of your stories pretty soon.
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  • From crashcrashcrash25 on March 08, 2011
    I thought for sure Vegeta was gonna get it in this chapter for sure. Hope to see more soon.
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