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By : KillJoy2510
  • From ANON - cara9001 on March 11, 2014
    Brilliant story!! I loved all of the Vegeta angst it was great! XD
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  • From Zofo on January 28, 2012
    That final chapter was intense and the lemon hot! I loved the explanation of why Goku wanted him :)
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  • From ANON - Topbear on January 08, 2012
    I read it from start again. I have to say I really love the dialog between the two, show the deep bonds in simple words. Well done for a lovely story.
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  • From ANON - Topbear on January 06, 2012
    This ends beautifully. Love vegeta switch table at last minite. To be honest, I also think to let vegeta take control is the best way to get over his harsh past. However, when he had the trust I also love to see goku porsuade vegeta religuish the control. Totally love the story. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - noon on January 06, 2012
    Well, that was a very satisfying ending. I was surprised and pleased by Goku's flashback and his fantasy of 'rescue' from Vegeta with how well he knows the prince for how Vegeta would act or what he would say. I really liked how you dipped into their pasts and how each of them thought and felt about the other even when it wasn't linked to sex but more companionship and it leading to this. Vegeta's desperation and feeling of failure was powerful and the pride as only a shield and not the cause of his anger at Goku gave another layer to his character. The canon line "You don't know what humiliation is" really resonated. Of course Vegeta wouldn't just agree or admit anything and would have to fight it, but I'm glad you found a way to make Goku fight back, even overpower him, rather than meekly follow kind rules and not upset Vegeta.

    Very hot at the end. I'm so glad it didn't fizzle into Vegeta just giving in or gentle lovemaking. It was a great twist but fit the storming emotions when Vegeta became forceful and that Goku enjoyed the pain of the bites and everything.
    Great job.
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  • From Zofo on May 02, 2011
    Cool that Goku found out Vegeta's feelings while fusing and now he admits it but it's driven his rage to tremendous levels. I hope Goku can break through!
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  • From topbear1974 on April 30, 2011
    I normally don't read story other than Kakarotts/vegeta paring, esp. there is rape of one of them involved. However, I tumbled in this story and I AM SO GLAD I DID! The last chapter is just beautifully written. I love the fact that vegeta had a soft spot for Goku. I also love the way you describe the turmoil inside vegeta. please let them have a happy ending, please!
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  • From saiyanb on April 30, 2011
    Well that was a treat, sorry for the late reveiw.
    Wondering just how you're going to wrap this up.
    Goku's not exactly presenting himself as love struck and Vegeta's definatly got issues. Can't say I blame him. confessing you want to try having sex with someone after being up bad memmories, not sure if Goku is just curious and feeling guilty or he's really interested.
    Did Vegeta get to sneak a peak inside Goku's head? Did he see anything to convince him that Goku really feels anything. If he was just like 'gee Vegeta has a crush on me, let's see where this goes', then 'yes' kick his ass Vegeta.
    Thanks for the read, I eagerly await your next chapter.
    ja ne
    b-chan

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  • From PrinceJiita on April 25, 2011
    a great new chapter, I can hardly wait for the next part. I hope they can figure it out between them, but we all know how stubborn our prince is. I love the way you describe his emotional state. Please, don't make all your fans wait for too long!
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  • From ANON - Ya on April 24, 2011
    Cool fic, never thought someone would take this plot up but I'm glad you did. Can't wait for the end!
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on April 23, 2011
    Another chapter! Yays! I love that Vegeta doesn't just accept Goku's proposal so easily, make him work for it! :D
    You write very good fighting scenes too, just the right proportions of fight vs. talk :D
    Can't wait for the next chapter! XD
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  • From Zofo on April 19, 2011
    Excellant chapter. Loved reading Vegeta thoughts on Kakarot and it easing the pain and very glad Vegeta got to kill him. I loved the awkwardness at the end.

    Looking forward to more chapters :)
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  • From ANON - zation on April 16, 2011
    loved it! very good canon, please do more XD
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  • From ANON - vee on April 16, 2011
    I mean I don't often read fics with THIS content. I should proofread my reviews before I submit ^.^;
    Again, excellent fic. You're a great story-teller and I was completely sucked into this story. I also just checked when the last update was, so now I know more is definitely a'coming!
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  • From ANON - vee on April 16, 2011
    I don't often read stories with content, but something kept peaking my interest about this one. I've seen it a few times when I've been searching through this section and today was the day I finally said "What the heck", I was nicely surprised that Goku was there to see the whole thing. It was painful, and horrible, and I think you did a very good job with it; as well as everything Vegeta was feeling, his emotions, his past, the way he tried to block it from his mind, and the anger and vengeance he takes in the end when the fear of the 180,000 power level is gone by the scouter proving it's only 23,000.

    I really can't wait for the next chapters, if you still plan of finishing them. This was a great fic.
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