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Reviews for Phases of Love

By : SadisticSabrina
  • From yaoigurl06 on April 12, 2011
    Well this is an interesting concept...I kinda like it. But you should find a beta. Your plot is great, but how your writing it needs a little work. Your grammar and spelling isn't bad, the only thing I would say is to try and put more detail into it. There isn't that much detail, but really that's the only thing you need to approve greatly on. Please keep writing! I'd love to see how this goes! :)
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