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Reviews for I'll be your woman

By : Vegetaswriter
  • From ANON - Pj on October 02, 2012
    I Love this story and you wrote it perfect screw 'em if they an't handle the truth! write the rest
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  • From ANON - Geta6310 on March 09, 2012
    I really don't read het fics because well.... I just don't like them. I've tried to read a couple, but I end up annoyed & stop reading all together. What can I say? I'm a natural yaoi fan who loves her dark prince uke. BUT in this case.... I'm LOVING this story. Brillant work! You give me hope that I could withstand reading someone else's het fic, but then again they are not you. You are my favorite fanfiction writer. ^_^


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  • From ANON - Warlock on October 07, 2011
    This story looks nice, it has good beginning and it doing great so far keeping it character as original but i must admit that i find Vegeta to much to look to much like a brute with him saying all the time that are weak, sure he say's that but i always thought that he really smart beneath all that ego. So the last review by Zeo caught my attention and I really like how he pointed some things, to be sincere i didn't seee many story's that use that way of thinking and i think it could be interesting to see Vegeta's reflecting on his value, possitive and negative points in Earth standards ( on Vegeta's home planet the strong have privilege and mate with the strong and powerful but on earth there are a lot more things to consider then just raw strength so yeah i thing it would me amusing to see that but it would give deeper thoughts and plot to.

    The story so far looks great but starting to look more like bulma is making a joke on poor Vegeta taking advantage on his pride and his Sayian heritage, it could be so much more, there is a lot of potential to make it better the idea that Zeo give is perfect example for a template for making story more plot driven.
    Regardless how you continue this story im sure it would be better if possible think about our suggestion if its not to much trouble. bye
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  • From ANON - ZeoUnit on October 07, 2011
    Well i like the story so far but I think that Vegeta would play more cool than this at least the outside but inside his mind I could image him been upset and all.
    If you where to make Bulma's plan backfire at her because she just gone to far to make him notice and make him jealous (like Vegeta start showing signs that he might leave her alone with her new boyfriend)
    You could try to make Vegeta start to question some of his way's here on Earth if he plans to stay on it, I mean he is a Sayian but you could make it that way that he slowly understand some things how Earth customs work and make him evaluate his good points and bad ones base on Earthlings point of view (im sure you could make some interesting conflicts in his thinking and i think that it would be nice to see his revaluation of himself with Earth standard)
    That would a the same time make problems Form Bulma because she see him as a Sayian Prince Arrogant and all and that would give some totally wrong ideas about his pattern behavior in her mind. XD

    In any-cease good story so far I just hope that you will make more of the updates any time now.
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  • From ANON - Inko on July 27, 2011
    I love how you keep them in character! Such a great job with it! I can't wait for more! And thank you for writing it! It's really exciting, just like a real episode! I always did love seeing them argue with each other!
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  • From ANON - Inko on July 27, 2011
    AMAZING JOB! Especially the way it's written. No dialog yet, and it wasn't needed at all! THANK YOU!
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