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Reviews for Spark of light in the abyss

By : Vegetaswriter
  • From ANON - Topbear on September 30, 2011
    Damn I saw this story on top of aft list I thought you updated. Love the interaction of the two in this chapter. Just wonder how kakarotto is going to be out of this.
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  • From animeslave18 on September 30, 2011
    *jumps up and down in seat and squees* Omg! Omg! The truth comes out! The truth comes out! X) Why am I saying everything twice? >.> Because I'm that excited, that's why! X) I wonder if Vegeta will actually tell him or if Piccolo will get the information out of him. O.o And how he'll react once he does know. *gasps* What if he tries to kill him again? :o Noooo you said a happy ending this time. Will Goku get his powers back? *gasps when an idea hits* What if Kakarot's soul came and possessed Goku in the right moment? Or for a while? Or in the moment? ....what if Kakarot's soul possess's Goku? X) Sorry that's an exciting thought. Ohhhh I was dreaming of that moment...I wasn't really expecting Vegeta to break down so much, but at the same time, I'm relieved to know that he still cares for Goku; even though he's not Kakarot. Orrrrr....what if Vegeta or Kakarot or Goku somehow managed to get Kakarot's powers back from Piccolo and finally finish him off? :D Is his power the only thing to finish the god off? O.o Ooooo I'm so excited! X) What's gonna happen next???? >
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  • From ANON - Topbear on September 28, 2011
    Long chappie! Love it. But I got bad feelings that picolo is up for something. Sitting on her edge of chair. Please update soon.
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  • From Zofo on September 28, 2011
    Ooo he told him everything! That was intense. I'm glad it all came out and hope Goku can find the feelings he once had for Vegeta.

    Picollo is suspicious, that can't be good, how on earth are they ever going to beat him :(
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  • From ANON - DBZloverPNK on September 28, 2011
    Thank u for updating and making these great stoires! I cnt wait to read more of what happens!! :D
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  • From Zofo on September 23, 2011
    At last they meet alone, but oh dear Vegeta called him Kakarot, what a slip! Goku is remembering bit by bit and this is sure to push it further.

    Oooo can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - DBZloverPNK on September 20, 2011
    I'm so happy u updated! I cnt wait for more! Plz update soon!
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  • From Zofo on August 21, 2011
    Ooo a wonderful sequel, loving it :)

    So many questions as to whether Goku really has evil in him (I think not), how much does he remember of Kakarot or is it confused flash-backs, what will Vegeta do, can Picollo really not read him.

    I'm on tenderhooks waiting to find out.
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  • From mjmusiclover on August 10, 2011
    ahh awesome stuff, it's really well written :D & you sure did an amazing job on it, can't wait for more
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  • From mjmusiclover on July 20, 2011
    ahh i love that song, back o the fic, very sexy scenes, it was well written & you are sure doing a brill job on this
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  • From animeslave18 on July 19, 2011
    *squees* Yay! The sequel! I didn't expect it so soon, but I was getting antsy waiting for it anyway. :) I heard the song that you requested on the second chapter and I decided to download it. ^^ I can also see Vegeta dancing to it and that just makes the visual image that much better. It also reminds me of Jonathan Davis, but I can also tell that it's Rammstein's work. :) I'm glad that Piccoro hasn't killed Goku yet, but what surprised me was that he still has that power in him. Even though it's not as strong, it's still...a "Spark of light in the abyss." x) I'm also glad that the sequel's not going to be another angst fic (I don't know if I said that already or not >.>), but I know, or have a feeling, that you're going to add in some angst that might make the story turn in a different direction that I won't expect (because you're just that good :)). Oh and I knew what was going on towards the end of the second chappie! :D However, my jaw dropped when Vegeta turned his attention towards Goku, hehe. x) It was unexpected. Another thing that makes you unpredictable is how devoted you are to finishing your stories...unlike me, who takes her sweet time in finishing one...although I've never finished one. >< Anyway...loving it so far. Can't wait for more. ^^
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  • From Nelfie14 on July 18, 2011
    OMG! More more more more more lol.

    Freaking love both of these stories. Took me a while to read Life is Ironic, and I loved it. The story flowed well, it made me almost cry once I am not a crier so to almost bring me to tears is hard enough. I love drugged Vegeta he seems interesting lol.

    I almost came to the conclusion that Goku is a undercover cop but thats just dumb hahaha.

    Anyways like I said MORE PLEASE!!
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