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By : Vegetaswriter
  • From JubblesBubbles on May 03, 2012
    Yay! An incredible update with jealous!Broly!!! Oh the drama... bring me more drama! The family, the sex... did I mentioned the cliffhanger in the end?!

    Great suspense.
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  • From Kit-kit on April 22, 2012
    Omg its getting to the juice part. Whats going to happen to kakarott.
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on April 20, 2012
    *gasp!* Oh noooos! :o Broly has interfered! >< I always had a feeling he would. I mean, with your stories, they can't end without something terrible happening. :p Let's just hope it's a happy ending this time. Or, in however ending you wish it to be. ^^ Goodness, I was beginning to worry dear. :/ I thought maybe you gave up on your stories or maybe the inspiration/plot bunny has ran away from you. :o But now I can see that is not the case and I'm glad you're updating again. :) You're creativity never leaves me disappointing and thus I shall stick with it until the end. ^^
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  • From ANON - Geta6310 on April 20, 2012
    Kaka gets mind-blowing sex and gets kidnapped for it! Tsk-tsk. I can't wait to see what Broly has in store & how Vegeta is going to handle it. Will he kill his bestfriend to save his true love?...well when he finds out Kaka is missing lol Will Broly have demands of his own? As willy wonka once said while Augustus gloop is stuck a pipe... "The suspense is killing me, I hope it lasts forever" LMFAO! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, its soo worth it :D
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  • From ANON - KaptajnBellaMus on April 19, 2012
    Ohhh ! I love this.
    You are and amazing writer. I hope you keep writing :D
    You got yourself a new number 1 fan - Me!
    Just read everything you been writing in here. And you really are amazing.
    Keep up the brilliant work !

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  • From Zofo on February 17, 2012
    Oooo smoking! I actually prefer Vegeta as seme (or at least both of them taking turns) so I was delighted with this chapter. Well worth the wait :)
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  • From kitkit on February 08, 2012
    loved it...im glad you updated
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on February 08, 2012
    Ooooo yesh, that was naughty...and sweet altogether. :) But gasp! What about Bulma and Chichi? Will they find out? Oooo and Broly? Okay, so...what is the deal with Broly and Vegeta? Does Vegeta know Broly has a thing for him? And I'm pretty sure he said something to Bulma about Kakarot. Ah who cares about that right now, they finally got together. ^^ *rereads chapter until it's permanently etched into her brain* :3
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  • From JubblesBubbles on February 07, 2012
    Ah! But many thanks for the hint this time, it made wonders for ~my~ poor memory! hehe, but, heeeeey, lemon! And the cute eternal damnation. Did I tell you already that your Vegeta's aura is lovely?

    kisses!
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  • From Zofo on January 28, 2012
    Finally they have admittted it to each other and it seems are going to act on it. I see trouble ahead though if the wives suspect :(
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  • From JubblesBubbles on January 24, 2012
    Hello, you!!! I'm so glad I'm reviewing this fic, it is so exciting and it seems I arrived right in the time ^.~

    I'm adoring the plot and the circumstances and difficulties upon those two, I'm loving how your rejected Vegeta remain strong and how every character has a light in this. They're greatly described and are so fierce that's refreshing; (want more, want mooooore), buuuuuts! You have some little issues to work on for next update (wich I hope it will be soon): 1- commas and vocatives, you're forgetting that sometimes, is "Kakarot, I'm waiting for you tonight" and not "Kakarot I'm waiting for you tonight" and 2- misspelling, "your" and "you're" are different things.

    Anyway! I'm loving this fic. Please, could you email me when you do update? jubbles bubbles @ hotmail . com ?

    thanks!
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  • From ANON - Chibi on January 18, 2012
    I enjoyed very much :) But the suspense is agony! What cliff hangers you leave lol. I'm half expecting Brolly to burst in at a very awkward moment :S
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  • From ANON - nelfie14 on January 08, 2012
    Okay...

    So I'm LOVING the new chapter! Bah I should review more often, however I am quite flakey and often forget to review after reading >.
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  • From kitkit on January 08, 2012
    oohh they finally said it...and now the real fun begins. kakarott meeting vegeta in his private rooms all alone. i just can't wait
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  • From ANON - Topbear on January 08, 2012
    This is another teaser so what's going to happen next! Too short! I am so happy they will be together finally.
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