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Reviews for In ancient times

By : Vegetaswriter
  • From ANON - Chibi on January 07, 2012
    What a cliffhanger!!! Please update again soon :)
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  • From kitkit on December 23, 2011
    nnnoooo not a cliff-hanger. hurry with the update..this might be the moment they express there love
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  • From ANON - Topbear on December 21, 2011
    Poor kaka, in such a conflict. I want to see Vegeta train of thoughts too. Now they meet, would there be big bang?
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  • From Zofo on December 15, 2011
    So they will be around each other more often now and living in the same place, things are looking up :)
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  • From ANON - topbear on December 07, 2011
    What a teaser!
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  • From kitkit on December 06, 2011
    oohh this is getting interesting, kakarott is going to start being around vegeta more...helping "council" him. *snicker*..hopefully this new temple will be the push they need to get together.
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  • From mjmusiclover on November 14, 2011
    just oozes pure awesomeness :D, i really love this fic
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  • From kitkit on November 06, 2011
    love it...is trunks going to be born in this story, since gohan was?? And what does bulma know about kakarott and vegeta relationship...did broly tell her??
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  • From Zofo on November 05, 2011
    I was depressed reading this as it seems they are getting further apart but the last sentence has given me hope :)
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  • From ANON - Topbear on November 05, 2011
    Don't know why I reviewed three times now still not on. I want say I am really happy you updated I check almost very day. It seems goku is going to crumble soon. You have done great job, I absolutely love the story
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  • From ANON - ilovegoku-vegeta on November 04, 2011
    I love it, and i think its really cool and diffrent that you made bulma the bicth usually its chichi great story keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Muffindess on November 03, 2011
    Omg. I am addicted to this fic. Now that I think about it...this is probably my first Goku(Kakarot)xVegeta fic ever and I'm so very glad I gave it a shot. I've always loved reading about Ancient Egypt and watching documentaries on it so I was quite curious how you would mesh some of that with the DBZ characters. In my opinion, you're doing great. I really enjoy reading from the perspective of your Kakarot. His non-relationship with Vegeta is intense to say the least! I had a 'shit just got real moment' when Vegeta confessed to Kakarot. Usually I'm all for pacing the romance but I couldn't help thinking,"about damn time!" Now if Kakarot would just realize he doesn't want Vegeta JUST for his sexy god-like body but rather wants the 'whole enchilada' we'll be good to go. *whispers* I say that but I really want it drawn out as tortuously as possible...because anything less wouldn't do their relationship justice. They have been dancing around each other for YEARS, after all. What's a few more? *grumbles* Is it obvious that I'm feeling conflicted? Lol.

    Annnnnnd I'm dying of curiosity as to how Brolly comes back into the picture, because his character in this fic is just BOUND to invite drama. Not to mention Vegeta's wifey is bound to be a giant cock-block waiting to happen. Oh wait...it already has.

    I look forward to an update. D:
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  • From Zofo on November 01, 2011
    How does Bulma know, intriquing! Is she a sorcerous or up to no good?

    Aww, now Kakarot has wounded Vegeta's heart, hope he comes to his senses soon :)
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  • From ANON - Topbear on October 29, 2011
    Two update in the same day! You made my day! Love how you set vegeta to confess first. His confession to kakarotto always melt my heart. But kaka was not sure. I wonder how this is going. Bulma sounds intelligent and evil.
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  • From mjmusiclover on October 23, 2011
    hehe sorry about my unfaithfulness, i was busy with uni, but this is truly beautiful , it's well written & done & i'm excited for more
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