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By : Vegetaswriter

From ANON - animeslave18 on June 21, 2012
Ooooo yesh. Lovely, lovely. :3 Now we know how he came to be. Somehow I had a feeling you were going to put that in. :) Ooooo that would be wonderful! :D I presume it wouldn't be very long...or maybe it would...depending on how you want it to come out. But you don't have to. You have enough on your plate already. I would adopt it, but it would never get done. :/ Alas, I am in the process of finishing my ninja story. I have finally written another chapter, but I refuse to post it until I'm finished writing the rest of the story, because I am still unsure of how I should finish it. Anyway, I enjoyed this immensely and I'm glad you shared with us all. :)
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From ANON - animeslave18 on June 06, 2012
*stares at screen with a half-lidded gaze then coughs* So, that last one was quite...hawt. :3 That is, until Yamcha spoke lol. He's so good at ruining the moment hehe. Oooo and first story with a Yamcha and Vegeta pairing. Hooray! ^^ I actually haven't read any terrible ones of those two yet. So, yeah...come up with some more of those. :) If you want hehe. Oh my goodness! The first one kinda had me in a panic 'cause...I'm writing a story about a God of War. >< And it has the same characters in it, but the plot was different...thank goodness hehe. Although, I shouldn't be surprised. After all, I got the inspiration from one of your stories. :) Guess, go on...guess. :3 Anyway, still looking forward to the last vampy chapter. ^^
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From KaptajnBellaMus on May 25, 2012
Once again - AMAZING. I just love all you'r stories. :D
I don't even know what to say anymore.. Its just amazing, perfect, the best thing in the hole fucking world! I love waking up, to a new chapter/story of yours.
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From ANON - animeslave18 on May 24, 2012
*wipes off the drool on laptop while taking in shaky breathes* Ohhh damn girl...I tasted that last one. O.o I thought you had me at chapter 18, but that one was nothing compared to...'that.' *swallows dryly* The gay parade one was quite comical hehe...because of the song and all, but of course, I was also drooling along with Radditz hehe. ;) And yay! A vampy sequel! ^^ Ah, Fright Night. I know why it's so familiar. There's another movie just like it, except it's a werewolf instead of a vamp and the one who cried wolf was the girl next door that was a reincarnation of the wolfy's lover. ...and there was a guy that was into her who got turned and so did she and if they killed him before the full moon came, then they'll turn back. Can't remember what it's called. :/ Maybe it's the remake? O.o Anyway, it was an alright movie. Can see how you can easily be inspired to make a yaoi chapter out of it. :)

Anyway, back to my fav one out of all so far, 'evil bindings.' :3 At first, it seemed like the possible relationship wasn't going to happen between them. I mean, with Piccolo taking a year to figure it out and the way they started out in the beginning and Vegeta's reaction. Alas, you changed all that in one sentence. I don't know how you did it, but you did. ...are you a witch? O.o If so, you put a spell on me with your writing. Okay that was cheesy lol. Oooo, when you mentioned that um...one of Piccolo's enemy's skulls was there, I was imagining his throne was made of them. :3 Skulls of his fallen enemies that is hehe, but then the description of the throne got more detailed and...I became disappointed hehe. Eh, I imagined it like that anyway. Don't you agree though? :o I mean, a throne made of skulls and them just doing it on it is just...hot? Lol. Hm...seems like there was another image on one of these stories that I've seen somewhere. Ugh, you posted them all at once! >< Have to go back and read, which I don't mind doing. :3 And, of course, it appears to be based off of one of your best stories. ^^ Ah, but this time, he's willing hehe. Which is probably why it was so good. O.o Don't get me wrong, I like a rapey fic as much as anyone who is, but that...you were cutting up the lemon cake and serving it to everyone. I mean, it was pure sinny sweetness. *licks lips at the thought of the treat* :3 Well, lemon cake is sweet, but lemon bars are what's sweeter...in fact rich hehe. Hm...why do they call it lemon anyway? O.o Is there some sort of meaning behind the term that they would refer it to some hot and sweaty action? I'm probably missing it. >.> Soooo having a party on your b-day, hm? Perhaps I should post tomorrow...I mean, later today. >.> So you can read it before your hangover. :) *quivers at the lovely image of Vegeta doing it with the evil Piccolo* Must...read...again! >
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From Deathdeamon88 on May 23, 2012
Ohhhh i finally caught up on the chapters and i love them all! but my favorite one so far is evil bindings. that was beautifully written with Piccolo at his fullest evil and taking Vegeta as a pet.
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From ANON - animeslave18 on May 18, 2012
Hehe my favorite one was the last one too! :D How 'bout that? Lol. 'Twas sad, yet intriguing. Hey I thought half of it was like poetry. :) It was lovely. ^^ Yeah...I haven't read any of those books. >< I probably should, but you know...don't really want to hehe. I haven't really read a lot of books. :/ I think the only thing I read when I was in school/elementary was Goosebump books lol. Although, there was one book I read in high school sometime that was called "Dangerous Girls" or something like that. It was a vampy book hehe. It was alright. Don't remember much of it though hehe. Eh, I saw a bit of Dracula 2000, but not enough to actually see the dracula. I didn't finish it because it was low budget hehe. Hm, so much to watch this weekend. Rio, Silence of the Lambs, Bolt or Fright Night? Hmmm...that's a toughy. :/ That's right, you heard me. >.> I haven't seen 'all' of Silence of the Lambs...only parts. >< Oh well. I'll see it eventually. Yeah I saw that at the end there...was just making sure...if you were, ya know...gonna keep your word. :) Oooo I actually have a couple wolfy stories I'm working on...was...working on. >.> One of them is definitely yaoi, however, I'm finding the other to be quite hard to make yaoi. :/ And I'm stuck in the middle of an action scene! >< That's not even the worst...sometimes I get stuck in the middle of lemons! O.o What's wrong with me? >< I guess I don't really have it in my head when it comes on the page. *shrugs* By the way, how do I friend you on facebook? :o I looked and looked! >< All I can do is like you. :/ Which is ight, but you know...also, you wouldn't happen to have IMVU would you? If not, it's cool. Just wondering. Hehe I guess that makes me feel a bit better. Endings are hard to come by. However, in most of my chapters, I just put them to sleep hehe. Maybe I should do that? O.o Mmmm....looking forward to lemon cake. :3
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From ANON - animeslave18 on May 17, 2012
Oh my...that one...gave me tingles. O.o *shudders in bliss for a few moments before reluctantly coming back to the present* hehe, you caught me. I'm into the vampys. >< *gasps* really? :D For me? ^^ But...it's not my b-day this month hehe. Thankies! *glomps and huggles* ^^ I loved it so! X) There must be a sequel! :o Hehe, now I can see why this one took you a while, but you're such a natural at it. ^^ Hm, yeah...I know what you mean. :/ I'm not really into the Twilight series as much as I used to be. The movies pretty much ruined it for me and the whole romance thing is overrated. Interview with A Vampire and Queen of the Damned are a couple good ones that have nothing like that in 'em hehe. Hey now, what's wrong with a deadly vampy sparkling? Oh...I guess everything. Lol. Well, it's original at least and you gotta admire that. :) I haven't seen Fright Night yet. O.o However, it does ring a few bells. It sounds good though. ^^ I'll have to watch it this weekend. Yeah and for some reason, with True Blood, I can only watch each episode once. :/ Don't get me wrong, it's good and all, but I want the new episodes! >< Eh, it's not for everyone. I usually don't go for the drama stuff but, this is the first one I actually got into hehe. A Wiccan got me into it, so blame her! >< And an emo got me into Twilight hehe. *raises a stick with a sign that says 'Stake the romantic vampys!'* Yesh! ^^ Anyway...

At first, I thought the vampy was Kakarot hehe. Because it reminds me of a pic where he's in his super saiyan three form and is in similar clothing. O.o And I was thinking, did she see the same pic? So, was just wondering hehe. However, it was surely different when it turned out to be himself. What a twist! Lol. *snickers* Hickey makers. You're funny, hehe. I'll have to start calling them that lol. Hehe aws. ^^ Let's see if you feel the same way when I post it hehe. The only thing is, is that I don't know how to end it. >< *sighs* It's always the endings...never know how to do it. :/ Anywho...sequel. *points at you, then begs* Please? :o
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From Deathdeamon88 on May 12, 2012
i love chapter 9! finally they mate! and it was a sexy mating too. chapter ten left an image in my head of Turles and Vegeta on those rocks all sweaty and it made me laugh when Vegeta was halucinating. it reminds me of this time when i halucinated. it was trippy lol.
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From ANON - animeslave18 on May 12, 2012
Oh my...I moaned at the few images in my head only at the beginning of chapter 9! >< Hehe, is it Vegeta that's in love with Brolly or is it you dear? :) Oh and the middle of it reminded of this image that's burned into my brain. I made it up. :) It's where Vegeta and Brolly...well, you know what? I'll put it in my oneshot. ^^ Muahahaha. *rubs hands together in a menacing manner* Anyway, the second one was 'too' short and sweet. :o There better be a sequel! >< Sorry, I'm pumped. I gots a DS Lite today. :3 'Tis fascinatingly entertaining. ^^ It's like, what will they think of next? Anywho, ummm...pleasant imagery...as usual. ^^ I hope I dream about it hehe. Until next time. *bows*
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From ANON - KaptajnBellamus on May 10, 2012
Once again another amazing story! You really know how to write, i so jelly.

Gods it was awesome, the military thing is pretty hot. I can just imagine alle the Z-boy being Privates and Vegeta there Sergent.

Anyway - As always AMAZING! :D
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From ANON - animeslave18 on May 10, 2012
Ooooo O.o it is smexy. :3 I want to make wallpaper out of it and put it all over the walls in my room! X) I also saw some of your collection of pics and some of those were quite graphic, I couldn't help but blush when I saw them hehe. *mumurs to self* makes me want to set them as wallpaper on my desktop >.> hehe yesh you have quite a hold on me. :p Earlier today I just got an idea of how to make a oneshot of the two of them. :3 I just hope you like it hehe. It's actually been a few months since I've written anything, so I don't know how good I am. I have two good friends as well, but I don't see them as much...almost like they're avoiding me. O.o Yay! I would love that more than anything! ^^ I could always use more friends hehe. But awz. :o That saddens me that you went through that for so long. :/ However, I am glad that you're alright now. :) Ah yesh. I imagined Gohan being the private. ^^ Just because it seemed more like him hehe...and he's also smexy. x3 Anyway, I shall get to working on your b-day present. ^^
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From Deathdeamon88 on May 09, 2012
i loved chapter seven and in my mind the whole time i was seeing Raditx doing all of those push ups. dunno why, i guess it's just the way he wanted to prove his strength to Vegeta. :D gave me some new fanatsies that's for sure!
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From ANON - animeslave18 on May 09, 2012
*sighs* You have more of an influence over me than you think. I never, NEVER made a facebook account until now. I wanted to see the pic so badly, so I made one! >< Unfortunately, I know nothing of how the site works so...I'm still hunting for it. :/ Either that or you haven't posted it yet. Don't judge me. I just saw the site as a hassle. >.> Not to mention I don't have many friends...don't judge me. >< I mean, I barely keep up with my deviantart account...and I badly need to make some friends and favorite some stuff. Before I found yaoi, I had deviantart, which led me to yaoi. :) However, I don't know the site as well as I used to. Ugh, I feel like I'm getting out of touch with technology. :/ Oh well. By the way, I do have an idea for a Brolly and Vegeta fic, but it might have to be a chapter fic. >< It was originally gonna be Kakarot and Vegeta, it was gonna have Brolly in it as well. I think the theme is a bit odd, but as far as I know, no one's written one about it yet. O.o I could probably post it on the 27th and go from there, since I don't really have a whole lot of time to work on it. I was really, really trying to think how to squeeze it all together into a oneshot, but it's impossible. >< So, anyway...um, let me know how to get the pic or just e-mail it to me hehe. ^^' I tried hunting for it on deviantart, but...there's a lot to sift through. :/ Unless I knew the title of the pic or something. ...damn it, I wanna see it so bad! >.> By the way, you're writing a lot of sad chappies lately. O.o Is you feeling okay? :o
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From Deathdeamon88 on May 07, 2012
Chapter five made me giggle but chapter six was hot! it even made me blush just getting the image of them in an alley where ANYONE could have walked up on them. i give you two thumbs up for this one. *fans self*
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From ANON - KaptajnBellaMus on May 07, 2012
Omg i laughed so much at Shh..
It was brilliant, and i can totally see the picture of Bulma and Chi-Chi listing to Vegeta and Goku.
Once again - AMAZING !
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