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  • From ZeoViolet on November 10, 2016

    Not a nag, just a wave to say I hope to read the next chapter soon!  I can't wait!  (Really.  I haven't been so hooked on a series in a long, long time.  You have an exceptional talent.)


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  • From ZeoViolet on October 23, 2016

    By the way...I've seen Super 63, and while I won't spoil anything for others, I will say that there is a rather critical piece of information in there you might want to know about Whis.  I don't see how this would interefere with your story in any way, but is important to know.


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  • From ZeoViolet on October 18, 2016

    Wow.  I don't even know where to start!  I'm filled with more emotions than I know how to describe to you!  Excellent, excellent job...and a flippin' shame that there will be a longer wait till the next update.  I do hope that they have some quiet time (so to speak) to let both Vegeta and Goku have the pregnancy they dreamed of.  If Whis has their upcoming twins, they will always be nearby.  I do hope at least one will be a girl.

    That said, the range of emotions Whis showed here was absolutely terrific.  I felt everything pretty much as he felt it.  And I felt that Whis was exactly right about the Kais taking too much non-involvement with their Universe.

    It's just me, but if I were Whis I'd wanted to have cried (maybe it's just because personally, I have not cried in a LONG time, not even after Dad died)  if I'd been remembering what I had lost before.  He's lived with pain for too long.  Even a deep relationship cannot completely replace what he lost, what made him stop giving a damn, once upon a time...but it is the start of something that can be just as profoundly fulfilling.

    Whis with a deadened heart wasn't really living.  Nobody who shuts themselves off that much is really living.  They are merely surviving.  It's about time he lived again, just as it is about time that Goku and Vegeta in your story are finally together.  Again, though, this is just how I am interpreting things....I hope you get more writing done!


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  • From TristaML on October 13, 2016

    Some things finally coming to a head! I'm still very curious to know how their new status will work and whether or not they are going to have to eventually fight Whis. There's a lot going on here, lots to think about. Thank you for the prompt update! 

    TristaML


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  • From ANON - on October 08, 2016

    So I have to tell you normally I dont like yaoi, it just not my cup of tea and I really hate m-preg stories. However, I really like this one. I have actually been following it since before whis showed up to take them to beerus' planet and I just now realized how to leave a review. I have to admit even though I do not think of either goku or vegeta as gay or even bi I do like how you have done this. They are sweet together. I actually feel really bad for gohan because in reality all he really wants is for vegeta to love him back. Beerus was creepy but your reasoning makes perfect sense cause in super and in BOG and reserrection f he was hilarious but your right in reality he would be a terrifying person, all that power and a skwed moral compass so he does it at a whim. Scary. I love whis, he is amazing. Anyway keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.


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  • From ZeoViolet on October 04, 2016

    PS, I do not believe Beerus's twin Champa will be overly pleased at what happened, no.


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  • From ZeoViolet on October 04, 2016

    That was so painful I about cried.  (In a good way.)

    Amazing.  Just amazing.


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  • From ZeoViolet on September 28, 2016

    Well, I just happened to check in around the same time you posted the chapter, I guess?  Lol  I was checking daily over the previous day or so because I knew you'd update sooner or later.

    Really glad this'll update in a week instead of two!  Arc's been driving me nuts with the cliffhangers!  (In a good way...)

    Cheese dispensers, milk dispensers, wood dispensers so your house doesn't get broken bones either...whatever works!


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  • From ANON - TristaML on September 27, 2016

    Very believable sequence of events there.  It was almost like watching the show when Vegeta was so enraged and thinking about the ultimate sacrifice.  It was like I could really hear him saying that enough is enough. I also really liked the trapped in a room,  kid Vegeta part, kind of creepy but also effective. Im surprised Goku remained as calm as he did throughout the whole thing. It kind of reminded me of another story I read a LONG time ago that I can't quite place,  just a feeling to it, but at the same time I've never read anything like that before in regards to these two, and i think it was a very good idea. 

    On a side note: I expect the cliffhangers now,  lol, I'm used to them,  they don't bother me. 

    TristaML 


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  • From ANON - Akiravadel on September 27, 2016

    Once again just... Omg. This whole internal struggle for him has been heartbreaking and I love it. I can't wait to see how this goes. ^-^ great job!


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  • From ZeoViolet on September 26, 2016

    I...I just...really hope he doesn't, indeed.

    What more can I say?


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  • From ANON - TristaML on September 24, 2016

    Oh no, I hate that there has to be sacrifices for them to be together.  Poor Vegeta and Goku... you do a good job of showing how much his past affects him, even while still clinging onto his dignity and pride,  I always loved that about Vegeta.  I do want to see how you wrap up everything with the God of destruction being finally taken out.  What a strange turn of events.  Im still surprised at the direction you took this story,  it's not at all what I thought it would be and that's a good thing. So many things to sort out,  so many questions that need answers. 

    Take the time to heal! 

    Waiting patiently for a new update, as usual.  Thanks for writing!  I know it takes time, effort,  and commitment. 

    TristaML 


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  • From ANON - Dragon77 on September 23, 2016

    I just finished reading this story and it's fantastic I can't wait for chapter 29.


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  • From ZeoViolet on September 14, 2016

    Haven't had much time to leave a review before now.  I'm sorry about your broken finger.  Gee, things around you, especially bones, tend to break, don't they?...

    Amazing.  Simply an amazing chapter.

    I can't fathom what went wrong at the end.  I'm very glad your version of Beerus is dead, but...no.  I didn't expect the bond between Goku and Vegeta to be...uh...almost silenced?  Not sure how to put it...there, but dormant?  I really hope it can be worked past!  The next few weeks are gonna drive me nuts.

    And Whis...I wonder how he's going to react to this?  It's almost crazy he had to go to such lengths to see Beerus replaced.  In a way, I don't see why he didn't just inform the Omni-King and beg for Beerus to be replaced.  Omni-King doesn't seem to be that busy.  Everyone is afraid of him strictly because of his strength than anything else.

    I do, however, get it that it is probably in Whis's contract that he is not allowed to either destroy Beerus himself (only stop him from getting out of hand) and he must protect Beerus if necessary...hence, I imagine, why he deliberately put himself out of reach when all this was happening, and was probably praying for it to be over by the time he got there so he didn't have to act in Beerus's favor.

    I really do feel sorry for him.  I hope that his friendship with Vegeta remains real and he doesn't have to be lonely anymore.

    At least in the anime/manga, Beerus has slowly been becoming less of a jerkass god than he was before.  He can still be a bit selfish and sneaky though (Ice-Cream Sundae switch, anyone?), but overall...he's different than he was before.  I can't see Vados bothering much to teach Champa anything.  She likes destroying things herself too much.

    I'm sorry for rambling.  My face is nearly in my keyboard; I'm so tired!  Please, please hurry and finish the next chapter!!!


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  • From ANON - Candice on September 12, 2016

    Can't wait 'till the next chapter. :)


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