Reviews for Uncertainty and PrideBy : TristaML |
I'm sad it's over, but it's absolutely beautiful from start to finish. You did an amazing job, I love your writing. I'm still processing all of the feels that gave me, so I'm just going to go open a gallon of ice cream now.
I just love reading a happy ending.
Awesome chapter...the story seems to be coming to a end
You never fail to leave me full of emotions with each chapter. My chest is all fluttery right now, everything is starting to work out, but at the same time I can't help but wish Bardock was still here. The relationship between Raditz and Vegeta is one of my favorite parts of this story, too.
Amazing job, as always. ^_^
I am absolutely loving this story. Your plots are so well thought out! I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. Come on Vegeta, you can do it! :D
Things are moving very quickly...i wonder where vegeta went off to
Bardock, no!! T.T
Oh Lords, we're in the thick of it now... Update as often as you like, I am SO ready! I'm glad you love your work, you should be proud of what you've made.
I'm finally all caught up...goodness so much drama is happening. I'm happy kakarott and vegetables are together but I know it a tentative relationship...anything can cause them to split
Finally, that was satisfying to see! (Secretly hoping to see them switch it up ;) ) They still have a long way to go, though. It was nice to see a break in Vegeta's walls, small though it was. Seeing him finally take Bardock's advice at the end there had to be my favorite part. That, and the scene between Bardock and Kakarot.
Only one chapter this time. T.T But still so good... There's not a dull moment in this story, the anticipation just keeps building, and leaves me on pins and needles at the end of each chapter. Even without Uncle Turles. I am sooo ready for them to just get together already, but I'm enjoying their journey there at the same time.
Awesome chapter...it seems that broly is the great evil that will cause kakarott to go super sayain.
Awesome chapter..I have 6 more chapters to read before I'm all caught..but having kakarott be vegeta sparing partner will bring them closer.
I'm not ashamed to admit that I squealed when I saw the update. I love that Raditz and Vegeta are so close, they're two of my favorite characters. Vegeta makes me want to cry, half in sympathy, half in frustration. But it's going to make it all the more satisfying once they actually do get together.
Such a great story, all that's missing is Turles... *hint hint* :D
Ah, don't stop there... just when it was getting intense. I can't tell you how much I love this story, I'm on pins and needles waiting for more. Wonderful job!
Awesome start...i love that this story and the last one are connected
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